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By : amy44
  • From Trollmia on September 23, 2006
    It was really worth the wait even if the wait have been caused by such tragic events. But that's life for you... You never know what will happen and when it does take such sorrowful turns.. it hurts. You have my sympathy. Although Sasuke is acting OOC I don't mind it at all - in fact I think it's funny and refreshing. And I like Sakura's role here too. And Kyuubi - the rascal... *lol* He's funny. I will look forward to when the next chapter comes along.
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on September 23, 2006
    *snickering like mad* You know you're in trouble when something in your own head plots against you to set you up.

    I really like this story so far. Please add another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Miaka on September 23, 2006
    Hmmm.

    I'm two-sided on this story. On the one hand, it's incredibly amusing.

    But on the other hand, Tsunade, Sakura and Sasuke are all very horribly out of character.

    It is a very big deal for a male to give up their masculinity, especially in a Japanese world, and I think just think it was done a bit unrealisticly here. Perhaps build up Sasuke's feeling a bit more? His love for Naruto seems a bit random, and it's not very convincing.

    I do not think, amusing as that part was, that Tsunade would want to hear all the naughty things Sasuke wanted to do to Naruto. I think she would be rather irked if Sakura and Sasuke came to her office just to tell her that Sasuke was in love with Naruto. And she would probably kick them out, and rub her temples all "wtf".

    I think it's also a bit unrealistic that Naruto, who has had an unwavering crush on Sakura, would suddenly think so much of a new girl he just met. Also, if "Natsumi" is Sakura's friend from the Mist, how would Sakura have known her at all? Konoha and Mist do not get along very well. It would be highly unlikely that even Naruto would fall for that lie. Perhaps change Mist to Suna, at least those two nations are allies, and Sakura has spent some time in Suna.

    Even in girl form, remember that Sasuke is still Sasuke. He has no experience acting like a girl. Even if he is doing it for Naruto, chances are that he would be incredibly stiff and even make it a point to call Naruto an idiot by accident.

    I think those were my main points about this fic. You have potential, and your grammar is relatively decent. Just work a bit more on your plots.
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  • From ANON - Teodora on August 31, 2006
    wow..i'm amazed! absolutly great story! superb i'm speechless.. please update soon...hope it's going to be a happy ending :D :P good luck with your writting!.
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  • From ANON - Kay on August 24, 2006
    It's cool but... hurry up with the next chapter! I'm begging here! *goes slightly insane*
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  • From ANON - MasterLenx on July 01, 2006
    I really liked this story. I've read it like three times before... Yeah. I hope you update and continue with it. It's really a good story. Very descriptive - very real and easy to follow. I like stories like this, instead of the ones that skip around every few paragraphs. I've read another story like this - by Ruby Lips (I think that's her name anyway...) Yeah... SO, make sure you update soon? Or I'll be a very depressed person! NOO!! lol... ty. For what, I don't know, but hey.. I'm in a good mood. Your story has captured my mind - I'll be thinking and picturing what'll happen next! So update soon my friend! ^_^ Like something... Have Sasuke think of someway to regain Naruto's love... Or have Naruto come around eventually - you know, Sasuke go into a pain-depression thing, and have Naruto finally realize that he does love Sasuke.. And then a sweet romance thing where Naruto comes to Sasuke, and Naruto comforts Sasuke, and then it leads into a romantic thing and lemon... Yeah. I hope this isn't going to be a short story though! Oh well, do what you please, but update soon okay!? Talk to ya later! ^_^
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  • From ANON - on January 12, 2006
    Oooooo.

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  • From ANON - kitsunekochan on January 08, 2006
    Oh God how can you write so nicely and be so cruel towards the readers???!!!That's one of my fav declaration scene,you know ,and it's sooo frustrating to be stopped just after,you know!*hehe that's a good point, it means that you made me "enter" in the story ...or else I wouldn't have left a review^^*
    I'm glad Sakura is not a bitch in this story!After reading the last chapters,well...*ouah it hurts to say it but*I can't dislike her anymore^^!So thanx!lol
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  • From ANON - EEEEEEEVIIIIILLEEE on January 07, 2006
    This story is very good i feel sorry for sasuke but he will get naruto one way or another we all know ^-^
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  • From ANON - Roald on January 04, 2006
    Awwwwwwwww...that's so sad....
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 04, 2006
    ahhh awsome
    i cant wait for more!
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  • From ANON - natty on January 04, 2006
    OMG!!!! you have to update soon this is sooooooooooooooooo good I could see it happening whaaaaaaaaa!!!! poor sasuke-chan
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  • From ANON - Camui on January 03, 2006
    You better hate yourself wench! (I don't hate you; the story is wonderful, if only a little fluffy on Sasuke's part) Um, yeah. Anyway... next chapter soon?
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  • From ANON - lijana on January 03, 2006
    This is good. I await the rest.
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  • From ANON - Mochi~ on January 03, 2006
    That was like a stone in my chest. *cries* Evil, evil author! Please, please update this though, or I'll hunt you down and throw tomatos at you! The second chapter was so angsty and gooood.
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