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Reviews for The Scheme

By : kimbop
  • From scarletwitchextreme on June 10, 2009
    this was a really great story and so so so so sad that you never finished it, i want her to end up with sai though i wanted that from the beginning although i was enthralled by her plan to get sasuke back i think sai and her rules and your writing is amazing and all the jokes and she being put into the book was hilarious. I wish you would finish it.
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  • From Miomio on November 14, 2008
    ohmy

    i'd really like to read the next chapter, but that seems impossible after 2 years from the last update
    T_T!

    but pleaaaseeeeeee
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  • From EtcherSketcher on February 12, 2008
    Oh I hope you haven't given up on this story it's toooo good to leave hanging!!! *wishing that an update is soon* Great writing, it's witty and soo addictive!
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  • From EtcherSketcher on December 11, 2007
    TOOOOO GOOD I AM HOOKED!
    Please please please update soon I cant wait to read it all! Great fic!
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  • From MistressDragonFlame on July 14, 2007
    My goodness, this is a very good story. Rarely do I find believable Sai/Sakura stories, and even rarer do I find a Triangle romance story that I enjoy.

    My most disliked part of this story is Sakura's manipulations--but not because they're not well done. The only reason I dislike it is because I fear heavily that it's all going to come crashing down around her. If that doesn't happen, I'll have no problem with it.

    I both love, and dislike the fact that you could have this story go either way--Sakura/Sai or Sakura/Sasuke. Because if she ends up choosing one over the other (highly likely) the the man left in the dust will be all emo and it'll cause tension throughout the entire lives of the characters, as well as possibly lead to Sakura thinking, "Did I choose the right one?" The best way to solve this is to kill off one, and have her stick to the other. And my thoughts to be is that Sai has a better possibility then Sasuke, but I feel the worse for Sasuke because he's been betrayed so much in the past.

    It'll suck if Sakura ends up with neither of them.

    And please, for the love of everything Internet related, delete that persons 'Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!Update!*etc*' because it page stretches like no other. Kill it *hiss*.
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  • From ANON - Selwen on January 07, 2007
    This is such an great story I really wish you would finish it. It's one of the best Sai x Sakura stories I've ever read.
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  • From ANON - YvonneandNeji on January 07, 2007
    I check everyday other day, hoping beyond all other hopes that you may have written another chapter. I love this story with a passion and know, though I won’t admit to it, that you've most likely dropped the story. I checked on fanfiction and the story is just gone; deleted most likely. I'll pray to the sake god that he'll give you some liquor, you'll be struck with inspiration and we'll get another chapter. Whatever happened to 'tearing through this story like my ass was on fire'? Come on, you're a comedy goddess; every writer knows who you are and hopes to be like you. You've got to update, and astound us. By the way, I came to this story looking for some Sasuke/Sakura, and left praying it ended as Sai/Sakura. I know she's not supposed to end with Sai, but Jesus he has a personality, and goes farther than the battle field. I don't know what Sakura thinks is going to happen, even if she does get the bastard, it's not like he's ever going to NOT be an ass. All right, I prayin' to the Sake god, come on Kimbop!
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  • From ANON - sezz on January 01, 2007
    im not sure if you've left this story or not, but id like to see you update ^^

    and why couldnt they just kiss! gah! *dies*
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  • From ANON - Dude on December 08, 2006
    Dude why did you delete this on FF and why are there lesser chapters on AFF? I LOVE THIS! This is the best Sai/Sakura story I've read so far and I'm emotionally attached to it. I had to google for it before I found out there was a copy on AFF. But it has less chapters! NO!!!! The world is so cruel. Please! I beg of you! If you don't want to update anymore, at least allow us to continue reading what you've written already. It makes me happy when I read it. PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - Aj on December 05, 2006
    I really loved your story.
    You're a Writing Genius !!!

    Are you not yet finished with The Scheme ?

    The halt in the story has made me anxious.

    Please keep up the good work !


    -aj-
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  • From ANON - me on November 27, 2006
    AHHHHGG!!! WHAT THE HELL!!!! WHY THE FUCK HAVNT YOU UPDATED IN FOORRREVVVERRR!!!! IV BEEN EXTREMELY PATIENT!!! PLEASE! PLEASE! IM ONNNNN MMMMYYYY KKNNNNEEEESSS!!!!
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  • From ANON - me on October 02, 2006
    honestly, this is one of the most well written, thoroghly thought out, amazingly strategized stories i have ever read. Your vocabulary is amazing and the way you decribe everything in such a dignified manner(when its not already funny) is a welcomed change from the trash usually written on this site from some people. You should honestly continue with this story because i would consider it the biggest waste if you dont. Its just too good. PS-I love how you made Sasuke..not OOC at all and theres just something about him that makes your heart swoon..
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  • From ANON - A TADBIT UPSET on September 29, 2006
    AND SUSUKE X SAKURA ALLLLLLL THE WAAAY!!!! DONT LISTEN TO THEM!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!
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  • From ANON - A TAD BIT UPSET on September 29, 2006
    WHYYY!!!! WHY???!!!!! WHY WONT YOU UPDATE!?!?!?? NOOOOOO
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  • From YvonneandNeji on September 19, 2006
    SAI/SAKURA all the way baby! PLEASE let this be a sai/sakura pairing. There aren't enough of them out there. Plus the way you write him, I've totally fallen for him. Sasuke is a total asshole, he only wants Sakura once she's found another. That's bullshit. Plus think into the future. Sasuke will be back to his old ways leaving a lonly Sakura to be a house wife. And I feel under his gruff exterior Sai is a caring guy. See?! He's a million times better than Sasuke!! ^^ Please update and give us more!!
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