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By : kimbop
  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
    lovin it, lovin itso so so much, but since aff offers more spaces for rec read i can check like daily
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on January 16, 2006
    yeah! i love it and i love you! oh exciting how this is turning out i can't wait >_< i'm so sad i just read the new chapter, and now i want another one. i absolutly love your sense of humor, and your style of writing and characterization, espically sakura, its great. never stop writing, no matter what people say you have talant.
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  • From ANON - ArishaGinkaze on January 16, 2006
    Man i keep wondering who it is that keeps watching Sakura! I can't wait for Sakura's meeting with Jiraiya either. I'm glad you put Kakashi in it because he always makes a story interesting! =D Update soon!
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on January 15, 2006
    Heh, ignore my earlier comment about the kid killing thing, that's just a minor nuisance in a sea of goodness. You receive a thousand bonus points and a giant gold star for using the word: 'gorgeousity'.
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on January 15, 2006
    i soooo Outrageously love this story, please update soon and loads of inspiration to you!!!!!!
    and by god i love your Sense of humor!!
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  • From ANON - slayerette0 on January 15, 2006
    The bit about killing the kids (in the drinking with Neji chapter) sorta made me sad and seemed a bit off from the humorous tone of the rest of the story. I know their ninjas who are required to kill when ordered, but the series does often treat being a ninja with kid gloves (no good dies dying, etc) so that comment sorta stuck out for me. I'm not even sure if its something that I'd suggested changed or not... *shrug* It just a little thing that irked me and I thought I'd leave a note about it. (I'm off to read more of the fic now, heh).
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  • From ANON - Aya on January 13, 2006
    This chapter rocked! I love how you wrote in the flashback into the story. Your writing style is so cool!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 13, 2006
    Whut? I thought you said at the beginning this was going to be a SasuSaku? Or did I remember wrong? *scratches head* Anyway, I'd be disappointed if things between Sakura and Sasuke stayed "Just Good Friends", or returned to where it was before. It's like, all that build up for NOTHING?!? And Sai is too bloody mean to be liked. Sakura gives him too much credit, what with him calling her ugly in her face, and praising his own appearance, ALL THE TIME. Gawd, I wouldn't just jab him, I'd slap him so hard his grandma feels it.
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  • From ANON - Besanii on January 13, 2006
    Holy balls....i did love the bar scene and more of it woulda been fun too. I dont have any I want to see Sakura with___ statements because I can see it going anywhere at this point and whatever you come up with will rock anyways. Cant wait for the next chapter and more of the awesomeness that this story holds. keep up the good work and update soon!
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on January 13, 2006
    haha loved it so funny. tha whole drunk thing, lol lee can't hold his liquor >_< love that bit. don't really care who sakura ends up with if anyone this story is just enjoyable no matter what. please continue.
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  • From ANON - ArishaGinkaze on January 13, 2006
    Haha I was quite amused with the filler chapter. I love the Sai and Sasuke encounters! I must say, you write remarkably well when your drunk haha. Kinda reminds me of Lee. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 13, 2006
    LMAO!
    your so funny when your plastered!
    lol i have yet to write fanfic while inebriated
    but i think tonight is a good night to try.
    thursday night= martini night

    so this was a GREAT chapter
    i love getting more in depth with the characters
    and the jealous behavior is hilarious and well written

    i liked it!
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  • From ANON - Yaaru on January 12, 2006
    God damn. You, madam, are a genius. I can honestly say this has to be one of my favorite Naruto fanfics. Sakura is so fantastically characterized that I can't even describe how many times I've cracked up reading this. From what you've said, I've read as far in the manga as yourself, and I believe you've done a great job with Sai. Just...damn. Bravo! Now, I must go hide myself somewhere so I stop gushing like an idiot. 'Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - L-izzy on January 11, 2006
    As much as I love this fic, and seeing it's Saku/Sasuke ... there is no Sasuke. Or very little of him. I mean, if they are going to end up together in the end, why are you holding him at arms length? Bring him into the story more, please. So far, one will continue to think this is about Sai and her. Not the darkheaded dumbass. -_-;
    Please, more Sasuke-kun. We beg you.
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 11, 2006
    "Pinky and the Brain, Pinky and the Brain. One is a genius, the other's insane!" I'm the one who said it! Go me! XD I LUV that old cartoon! And Sakura (often being called Pinky in various other fics) was totally acting like an evil combination of the two both insane and genius)! XD

    Woah. I can't believe Tsunade sent a thirteen year old Sakura into a place like that to get her sake. -_-; But yay! From now on, Sasuke escots her! Teehee!

    Love all the primate chest-thumping show of masculinity in this chapter.

    And poor "little Sakura"... still crying at being left behind. ;_;

    And I still want to punch in Sai's face. He's vain, egotistical, and BLIND.

    So more SasuSaku-ness. DIE, Sai! Eat dirt, you asshole!
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