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By : kimbop
  • From ANON - LilyDraken on January 20, 2006
    Awesome! Great chapter! Oh, Icha Icha means "make out," so make out paradise, or make out violence. So you hit it right on the head! AWESOME! Keep it coming! I can't wait to see how Sasuke-kun reacts!
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  • From ANON - Hillary on January 19, 2006
    This is soooo cool!!! And I have never Heard of Sai. Any chance I can get a link? also please update asap please. I really love this paring.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2006
    Finding sasusaku fics is hard enough, finding sasusaku fics with good writing and with a solid grasp of the characters is nigh impossible. This one is a godsend for us tired of seeing Sasuke and naruto humping like rabbits. Thank you. I do have one request though. Please have sasuke beat the crap out of sai. Lord knows the little bugger deserves it.
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  • From ANON - Lilydraken on January 17, 2006
    Awesome awesome AWESOME! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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  • From ANON - kt on January 16, 2006
    wow, your story is really funny and stuff! i love the way you are portraying sasuke cuz you just get his personality so close to what it really is. please update soon cuz i love it!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on January 16, 2006
    since it was such a good chapter i will review it, and ask you to
    PLEASE update as soon as possible!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - pixie on January 16, 2006
    This is one of the better stories I've read in a while ^_______^ Keep up the good work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - GAO on January 16, 2006
    I LOVE it! I love you! Seriously, this story rocks. Sai's character is perfect, Sakura is incredible, and Sasuke's character is thoroughly enjoyable. You've also done a great job with the other characters - I'm totally thrilled you had a party to include them all in. If anything, I wish there had been more interaction during the party, but the Kakashi bits and the SaiSaku bits more than make up for the lost opportunity. I'm happy you're updating it rather quickly! Please continue to do so - I can't wait for the next chapter of Sakura's cunning scheme!
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  • From ANON - jcnkitten on January 16, 2006
    i really liked this chap and all the chaps before........this is a great story........i cant wait to see what happens next....ive really gotten into this story.....so i hope u update soon....reallly sooon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aya on January 16, 2006
    Eee!! I love this story and this chaptered kicked ass!!! I absolutely loved it! And don't worry about the proper english. We really don't care (or at least I don't) if the comma are in the right place or what not. Just have fun righting this! ^__^ Let me say this again.. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! wo0t!
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  • From ANON - Nadia on January 16, 2006
    Hmm... awesome chappy, hope you update *smiles* soon please!
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  • From ANON - No name for now on January 16, 2006
    I'm loving this story more and more after each chapter. That one was really funny. And you update so fast too!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 16, 2006
    I LUB this chapter! LOTS of SasuSaku to read! And ignore those whiny yaoi fans who are mostly in their preteens (or still preserve the mentality thereof). SasuSaku RAWKS.

    Actually, I though she was going to flash Sasuke, but that works as well.

    Bringing him to the gossipmonger's... I really like how Sakura's mind works. Devious little devil girl. GO, Sakura-chan AKA Pinky and also Brain! XD

    Well, Sai was less of a gay-ass whiny bitch in this chap... But I still hate him for calling Sakura ugly. I hope he gets permanently disfigured, the narcisstic little prick (heh).

    One minor complaint: Naruto pushing Sasuke into the stairwell? Yaoi senses tingling.

    Oh, and Kakashi is pretty much IC. Seemingly absentminded, devious manipulator who screws with people's minds. The bass ackwards account of the previous nights event was just SO him.

    Hope to read more! And cross my fingers for a definite, happy SasuSaku ending. ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
    WTF...AFF writers don't like you??? Well, here another review to make your day a little better. I really love your story and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope to see more of Kakashi and Jiraiya.


    PS. here a another drink all for you. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kokiu on January 16, 2006
    Gawd, I'm dying.

    That...that was just grand. There are some obvious quirks to being Tsunade's disciples, and Sasuke got to witness one of them. xD

    I'm really liking your development of Sai and Sakura's relationship. And I agree about his personality - underneath that false facade, he's most likely one intelligent bastard. ; ) Mm, and I'm perfectly content in wherever direction you chose this story to go.

    Great job! (And don't let the lack of reviews here on AFF discourage you. >_> The HET stories here are forever doomed to be overshadowed by the yaoi.
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