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By : kimbop
  • From ANON - Hillary on January 23, 2006
    WOW WOW WOW!!! THANK YOU FOR UPDATEING!!!! I REALL LIKE THIS BUT I REALLY WANT MORE SAKURA/SAI LEMONEY-NESS!!!PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - pippins_song on January 23, 2006
    Don't quicken it ;_; I like long stories XP

    Anyhoos. OMGWTFBBQ! SAI KISSED BACK?! *LE GASP* I have to say, that was kinda hot. Keep writing! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Aya on January 23, 2006
    HELL YEAH! This chapter was great!!! Aww... Sai's getting attached to Sakura and Sasuke is getting protective of Sakura!! Whee!!! This is awesome!! Can't wait for the next one!

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  • From ANON - ArishaGinkaze on January 23, 2006
    Awwwwwwww! poor Sai. I feel kinda bad for him. So far your the best I've seen at writing a relationship between Sakura and Sai. Maybe you should do another fic about them when you finish this one! Loved this chapter as usual. Just wanted to point out the it's Hyuuga not Hyuugi for future reference. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2006
    Is this a Sakura/Sai story or Sasuke/Sakura? (Please let it be Sai/Sakura!!!!) PLEASE!!! I think you broke my heart when you made Sakura say Sasuke's name after kissing Sai instead. *cries*
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  • From ANON - keket on January 22, 2006
    Very nice! I am looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder what Sasuke has in mind for him and Sakura's next bet battle. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Me.. on January 21, 2006
    lolz, you did great..... hehe

    hey, I think you're also the one doing sesskag fanfics in inuyasha right? I love em too
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on January 21, 2006
    O_o ... wow, I LOVE IT! that was great! the whole lemon, without actually having the characters have sex, genious! gosh that ero sannin is awsome, and his little books rock! this is by far the most entertaning fic i have ever read i can't wait till you continue, i love you!
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  • From ANON - DangerousAndDemonicDevil on January 21, 2006
    its a gr8 UPDATE SOON PLS
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 21, 2006
    Woah. *dumps bucket of iced water on self* All hail Queen Sakura and her sex slave Sa--!

    That was pretty darn good for a first try at smut. The Ero-sennin woulda been proud to have you as a disciple. XD

    Ignoring the English typos and such:

    "Onee-chan" means "Big Sister", "Onii-chan" means "Big Brother". Both have long vowels (double 'E' and double 'I'). Oni-chan (single 'I') means something like "Monster-chan".

    "Icha" is slang for the root word "iku", which means "go" in english. So the titles mean something like ""Go, go, paradise" and "Go, go, violence". But I think in the licensed comic, they called it "Make Out Paradise"... for whatever reason. *shrug*

    That said... Gambare! Keep going! Ya got a great lemony series!

    I hope Sakura gets to do the real deal with Sasuke! *ducks*
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  • From ANON - angelus2040 on January 21, 2006
    Woah that is just wow, oh and Icha Icha means Come Come, I think, anyway keep up the good work and fight the good fight with more het fics!!
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  • From ANON - Hillary on January 21, 2006
    OH MY FREAKING GOD THAT WAS THE MOST EROTIC, EXOTIC, AND HYPNOTIC THING I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE GOT TO UPDATE! LOOK IM DROOLING IN ANTICIPATIN!!!! PLEASE UPDATE AND I WAS WONDERING IF THERE WAS GOING TO BE A LITTLE( HOPEFULLY ALOT ) OF SAKURA/SAI/SASUKE ACTION? THAT WOULD BE FIRE HOT!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - allyluv on January 21, 2006
    hi! i read all 10 chapters in a row. i had a tough week at work and your story made my day! i was laughing non-stop in almost every chapter. you kept everyone in character and believable. i can't wait for more! you're truly a genius!!!!
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  • From ANON - Aya on January 20, 2006
    *dies from bloodloss* THAT was great!!! I absolutely loved it!! God that made me... wow... that was awesome. I can NOT wait for the next chapter...I wonder how Sasuke-kun is actually going to read it though... Hmm... closet perv maybe?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2006
    Oni-chan too? Cause that's older brother. O-ne-chan
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