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By : kimbop
  • From ANON - Caylintz on January 27, 2006
    Omfg this chapter made me sqee.. i congradulate you on your perfect writing of Sasuke, one would expect him sitting by Sakura's bedside to be totally ooc, but strangely it wasn't the case.

    And just to shout out inbetween all of the rabid Sai/Saku fans suddenly taking over the place, if Sakura ends up with Sai then you'll make me cry! I still love the sasusaku even when everyone is losing their faith! T____T
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on January 27, 2006
    hmm am i fickel? i don't remember...i think i was for sai, but i might not have been, i never remember things. hmm yeah i liked it...but i missed sai. and yeah ...i liked how you made sasuke less of a dick, it needed to be done, he's kinda pissing me off in general, and people either seem to write him in a totally oc way of they make him a dick, i really like the fact that you made the transition natural. i still love it...but this chapter seems to be missing something... i don't know what but something... maybe it the humor like you said oh well i still love it.
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  • From ANON - EF on January 27, 2006
    Well, long-time reader, first-time reviewer... (:

    I get up early each morning to see if you've updated. Some days you do, and those are great days indeed. And the days you don't, I just remind myself that a spankin' new chapter will be there soon. You've yet to disapoint and I doubt you ever will! This story is amazing and I would totally bang this new vixen Sakura. But, of course, I want one of our raven-haired fellows to have that privilage. Personally, I like both, so either/or is fine with me. (Are you sure they can't share?)

    Poor Sai! What a fate- it seems he's fallen for his best friend! And that Sasuke, what is the favor he wants!? I'm dying inside, but the suspence is so worth it. And hmmm, will one of our boys get a hold of that certain book staring the lovely Haruno? And what of Kakashi! ...urk.

    Ahem, anyhoo.. Hey! "Fat Bastard"! Never thought I'd hear that name again! I was at a Christmas party and they had a bottle of "Fat Bastard" wine, because they liked the name. Anyways, I will await with baited breath for the new chapter and I wish the best of luck in whatever you do!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2006
    well duh it'll be sai or sasuke! update soon! and don't worry about the japanese, but if you need just say jump, i'll totally be like how high! but everyone gets what you mean, really no matter...
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  • From ANON - Hillary on January 26, 2006
    ya ya ya you updated im so happy!!! I was kinda hopeing this was going to be a threesome but if it has to be only one i pick sai
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  • From ANON - Angel_shae on January 26, 2006
    Oh my GOSH! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am hooked! You said that some people on here don't like you but pease do not stop with your story! I am in love with Sai and so mad because he seems to be falling for Sakura and she's totally gone over Sasuke!WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHhhhhh! But you really are an excellent writer!
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  • From ANON - Lyraelin on January 26, 2006
    Wow. I am so surprised to find such a good story on affnet. I mean, granted, there are SOME good ones, but not usually. I REALLY like this a lot. Your Sakura is
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  • From ANON - Damn... on January 25, 2006
    Ok, um, wow. You are cruel. For the record I hope you let Sai get her. It's a nice ending, scheming continuously to win one man, and then ending up falling for another. Besides that, Sai is a more developed charater here. Also, Sai is falling for Sakura, the real Sakura, and Sasuke just knows the fake Sakura. So his love is more genuine. In addition, Sasuke is being tricked, and Sai well... I don't know. The biggest reason though, was the end of chapter 11. Dude, after that sort of hurt he deserves the girl. Anyway, I really like this story, and the way you portray the characters. Thanks for writing it.
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  • From ANON - allyluv on January 24, 2006
    i really enjoyed the udpate. after reading the chapters, i'm kind of into Sai/Sakura now too. i don't know where you'll lead us to but i can't wait for more =)

    update soon again please!
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  • From ANON - saika on January 24, 2006
    *sigh* Poor Sai! I really feel horrible for him....I mean, he actually is starting to have emotions and what not for sakura and all her blind eyes could see is that stupid sasuke!! Grr....I loved this chapter nonetheless,buuuttt are you sure you want this to be a sasusaku, cause in my opinion i think that sakusai would work better....I really feel fro him.....*curses sasuke* lol
    Great fic...
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  • From ANON - mvp on January 24, 2006
    Soo, you tend to see underneath the underneath huh... Lol. What I wanted to say is that you tend to give fan-girls another perspective of 'S' men,
    Sasuke and Sai, who are not actually morons runnin low on testosterone, but capable of some feelings. I actually like Sai and Sakura pairing. I will do a
    fanart for you work, okay?
    What's your email? I'll send it to you!
    -mvp
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  • From ANON - gwyn on January 24, 2006
    oh wonderful story!!! normally I'm a big SasuSaku fan, but while reading your story I'm changing my mind XD Sai is greatly described here; I don't know his character as he only recently appeared and I haven't seen the newest chapter yet, but I think your version of him is highly possible ;] I feel so sorry for him... Sasuke's a realy ice-cude, GO SAI!! :D
    once again, story is just great! I love it sooo much~!!!!
    (sorry for possible mistakes, but English is not my first language).
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  • From ANON - theunknown on January 24, 2006
    well, it looks like it's straying to a sai/sakura thing. too bad, but still a good story. how about giving sasuke a girl all over him? ya know, to see how sakura would handle some competition. just a suggestion.
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on January 24, 2006
    wah poor sai! he's starting to like sakura! thats amasing! ok thats exactly what i hoped for so now i'm just enumorating upon my happiness in the fact that it came true! haha i guess its like a gloat ^_^. i love your bar scenes, keep um coming! hmm yes your right about the whole sakura thing, and by the way i really like how you've devloped her character, it great, i think this is how she should really be, strong cuse yeah she's a ninja, but she's also a female, and face it we have emotions, lots of crazy ones we don't even want, and this is a good synthisis of the two.
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  • From ANON - krickets on January 23, 2006
    ahhhh yea i know i KNOW, your fucking this donkey and we need
    to just sit back and enjoy the ride

    but i cant help but want sakura to get together with Sai...

    IN FACT this story is what inspired me to write Ink Me
    because i really did want them to get together and i
    thought your interpretation of them was wonderful, to the
    point where i just had to put it to words.

    but i also want her to have sasuke just because i think...well
    lets just say you write a good story.

    ive gotten alot of flak for my interpretation of Sai myself, but i have
    also gotten alot of good reviews. And you have to say to people "While i may be writing him in
    a way you find contradictory which is just a manner of opinion, YOU dont really know
    enough about him EITHER to tell me im wrong."
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