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By : kimbop
  • From ANON - LilyDraken on February 01, 2006
    Love it love it love it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - So-kun on January 31, 2006
    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I totally love this story!! It's awesome. But umm, when you wrote that part about the kids, it should be Onee-san because onii-san means big brother. I'm pretty sure you've already been informed about that but it's been bugging me for a while. :P I really like how you portrait the characters expecailly the interaction between Sai and Sakura. I wasn't a big Sai fan, I'm still not. But for this story, I'm totally in his corner! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Randomness on January 31, 2006
    Do you like SasuNaru? Cause that would really be a popular alternative if Sai got together with Sakura...

    But even though I like Sai I'm starting to feel bad for Sasuke... GO SASUSAKU! =(
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  • From ANON - t on January 31, 2006
    I don't usually review, but for this story I have to. I am really liking this story. The way that you are keeping us readers guessing about who Sakura is going to end up with. I feel for Sai, who seems to be falling in love. I also feel for Sakura,whose madcap scheme is going to end in hurt for one or more people involved.
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  • From ANON - Hillary on January 31, 2006
    please please please please please please please please please please please please please update
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 31, 2006
    Grace not graze,grace this world/earth.There are two more "sayings" said wrong but I'm hopefull they are typos.I stopped reading to tell you I LOVE this Sakura,18 and never been kissed is too much,really,even girls in convents get more action!However,you have a fan...like it or not.Ummm...I shall resume my purusal (sp)of your novella.
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  • From ANON - Lady Moon on January 31, 2006
    I am totally enthralled in where this story is headed, so please continue your idea, and update as soon as possible!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - gwyn on January 31, 2006
    nice chapter. although I didn't really understand Sakura and Sai's behaviour in the beginning - weren't they suppoused to act as a couple? I don't know, it was just... strange. but later scene (in the train) was so cute... is Sakura finally developing some feelings for "the artist"? SHANNARO!! :D
    yeah, as I mentioned earlier I really like Sasuke, but he's no fun XD go Sai! don't let him win!! XD
    nevertheless - the very last scene, when Naruto convinces Sasuke about Sakura's loyalty, is great too. I like this supportive Naruto.
    I'm becoming more and more addicted, I think ;]
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  • From ANON - ArishaGinkaze on January 31, 2006
    I'm gonna be sad at the end of this aren't I? Damn Sakura and her womenly powers to attract men...I love Kakashi too!He is damn hilarious. Got ot love the guy. The Characters are just so intriguing and honestly very real but still keeping to their oringanl personas and situations as ninja.You really should be proud of yourself. Favorite part of this chapter was when Sakura owned all their asses ( or more corectly, their penises) with her threat. Haha I could actually see that happening. Poor Kakashi, always missing things. Update soon please!
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  • From ANON - GuardianAngelOne on January 31, 2006
    Awesome chapter as always! I love the little escape you've cooked up. Sasuke tying Sakura's tent and the train scene were both priceless.

    One thing I'd love to see happen, if it ever interests you to write it - a chance for Sai and Sakura to team up and verbally defeat someone. I love the tension between the two during their squabbles, but I bet they'd be incredible if they had to join forces.

    I love the Kakashi bits, and I hope we see some more Neji later!
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on January 31, 2006
    Heh, this chapter was incredibly cute.
    I liked how you added Miroku and Sangos name, that just added to the cuteness of the chapter
    But I think my favorite part was when Sai copied Miroku in stroking Sakura's hair. It was like
    "Oh Sakuras asleep, I can act how I wish I could be around her." It was a real nice touch to this chapter.
    I am overly excited for the release of the book. Hmm I wonder what new drama is gonna come out of this one. heh
    ::Smirks:: you're like Tsunade with her sake. =_=
    I should ship you alcohol in thanks for your lovely fanfics. ~_^ Heh, maybe I'll settle for a pretty fanart instead. lol
    heh, thanks for posting. Can't wait for the next update.

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  • From ANON - Rei on January 31, 2006
    hehe that was funny when sakura threatened them tehehe and how kakashii just appears and wonders what he missed this chapter was interesting!.... awwwww it seems as if its leaning towards sai/sakura pouts* i hope not i wanna see sakura end up with sasuke
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2006
    list of japanese names:

    female:
    haruno
    haruko
    akiko
    chikalu
    hitomi
    umeko
    yukiko
    natsumi
    natsuko
    generally ending with ko

    male:
    yuusuke
    sho-ota
    ryu - unconventional but cute, dragon
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  • From ANON - Hillary on January 31, 2006
    please please please please please pleasse please please please please please update
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  • From ANON - Hillary on January 30, 2006
    please please please please please please please update
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