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Reviews for The Scheme

By : kimbop
  • From ANON - Fubuki on January 05, 2006
    Holy Sh*t..... This fic is just awsome. The way you made Sakura plot this scheme is absolutley... damn, no words to describe it but... WOW. I'm just wondering if you can make a SaiSaku fic . xP If you cant, thats fine xD but as for the pairing in here, you could make it a SaiSakuSasu fic. xPPP alright alright, SasuSaku pairng T,T xD anyway, love it. So much Humor in this fic it made me crack my ass off my chair. God, you are talented. Anyway, Loves x3
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  • From ANON - no name for now on January 05, 2006
    "She will get the chance to raise her legs up to Jesus and praise his name soon enough"???? Oh my god, that's the funniest thing I ever read. Yes I know it,s not part of the story but I had to mention it.

    Yep, can't wait 'til next chapter. Sasuke-kun yay!
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  • From ANON - Lizzy on January 05, 2006
    lol. good ending note there. Anyway, I too love Neji (he's the best naruto character if you ask me) and Sakura pairings, so when I saw you writing em as friends I actually started thinking "OMG kiss kiss kiss," until I remembered this is about Sasuke and her, not them lol.
    I love how you use all the men characters into detail, and even Sai -who we don't know much about yet- gets a main role. But I am happy this is about the dark headed idiot (who we know will end up with her in the manga, or most likely).
    In total agreement that Neji and Hinata shouldn't end up together, since when did sleeping with your first cousin become a hot thing? :O
    Just ignore my rambling and keep it coming, I love it and so does many many others. This is a true beacon of light in the dark corner of M/F pairing section on AFF.
    *WTF is up with all this M/M crap?!!?*
    Lizzy
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  • From ANON - Aya on January 04, 2006
    Yay!!! The next chapter of the story!!! ^__^ I sooooo can't wait for the next one!
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  • From Karista on January 04, 2006
    Wow, I can't believe you've managed to work Sai into a story already! And I must say, it's very well done...as far as I can tell, he's on-point as far as being in character. I love the assessment of his obsession with Naruto's penis...that part of the manga totally caught me off guard and you exploit it so well! I also love how well you've captured the spirit of all the characters, you write so close to the anime/manga that it flows perfectly. Keep it up, can't wait to see more!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 03, 2006
    Oh... and I hope this eventually becomes an NC-17! *giggles and runs away like Kakashi reading porn*
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 03, 2006
    Just a last review to say:

    Please update this soon! Deviosu little Sakura and a jealous Sasuke RAWK! XD
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 03, 2006
    That BASTARD took Sakura-chan's first kiss! Sai no YAROU!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on January 03, 2006
    Was going to review this at the end but decided this line in chapter 2 just about killed me: "Jiraiya-sama was a smart man, and she was a smart woman. Together they would make porn magic". That was so wrong and yet so cool. XD
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  • From ANON - Lemon on January 02, 2006
    Ooh! I love this fic! It's so good! People never give Sakura enough credit. Thanks for writing her character so well.
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  • From ANON - xdarkxflames74x on January 02, 2006
    This is one hell of a good story. MAJOR MAJOR props.
    =] Me likey very much. Update soon.
    And oh yeah.

    Is sakura gunna end up falling in love with Sai or something?
    :: confuzzled ::

    Ohwell

    I don't like to leave reviews.

    Ever.

    Wayyyyy tooo lazy

    So that obviously means your one hell of a writer to get a review from me.
    Be proud.

    Hurry up and update, i hate waiting.
    =]

    Take Care


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  • From ANON - Aya on January 01, 2006
    Wo0t! Another great chapter! I absolutely love this story and I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Lily Draken on December 30, 2005
    Awesome, awesome, AWESOME! Keep updating! This new chapter was great! Can't wait to see me some SasuSaku. (But I like this whole SaiSaku thing too... very interesting, and props to you for making it work!)
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  • From ANON - ArishaGinkaze on December 30, 2005
    I really,honestly, truely adore your story. Not only is it smoothly written,but its captivating,humorus,thoughtful, and possibly one of the best pieces of work I've read on this site. I can't think of any improvements for this story. I can't wait for the future chapters so pleeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!!! :D
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  • From ANON - krickets on December 30, 2005
    ahhh i LOVE this story!
    but you know if she MUST be with sasuke in this story maybe
    write your next story with her being with Sai....that would be nice

    ha ha but this is awsome!
    but there are quite a few errors which look more like spell
    check errors....where it just automatically
    corrected it to somthing you didnt intend.
    maybe think about turning your automatic spell check off.
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