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Reviews for The Two Halfs

By : suzan
  • From Shadi88 on April 26, 2008
    It's interesting. I like it and wound enjoy more.
    Good luck and best wishes.
    Butterfly Beauty
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  • From oohshiny on November 19, 2007
    DAMMIT WHATS GONNA HAPPEN???? HOW DARE YOU LEAVE A CLIFFHANGER AND TO ALL APPEARANCES ABANDON THE STORY!!! CONTINUE IT!!! NOW!!! naw, but seriously, if you continue it, which i dearly hope you will, email me. my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - Lady Jueglerr on August 27, 2006
    It always irks me how similar the plot lines are for Harry Potter and Naruto. I hate the crossovers(no offence) because the stories are too similar, and both Harry and Naruto have to be the main focus for the stories to work. This was a nice thought, but it really doesn't work as well as when you do them one at a time, or with less contradicting stories. Also, I didn't exactly get that far in your story, so I don't know if you did it, but for any other authors that may read this review and do HPxNaruto crossovers, remember that they come from different worlds. They speak different languages, and come from different time frames. Do you honestly think that if ninjas had guns and modern-day weapons that they would use their jutsus half as often? No, they would save their chakra for emergencies. Well, that was my piece. Thank you.
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  • From MysteryladyTx on January 20, 2006
    HUH?!? what do you mean we all??? oh man, can't wait to see where you will take this. Hey if you need a beta reader let me know I'd be happy to help you w/that:D THANKS:D
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  • From ANON - someone on January 10, 2006
    Good story keep it up
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  • From ANON - Inui's Bastard Love Child on December 27, 2005
    What a great story. Please put the next chapter up soon.
    One question - What will what the village of Leaf will do when they meet Hagrid's pet Fluffy?
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