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By : Ruri

From ANON - Tamara on December 31, 2005
I'm glad your doing it like that (each of them getting Naruto)
but you did started out making it Sasu/Naru which disappointed me so :'(
it put tears to my eyes lol...tears of saddness of course.
i was just wondering why you put Sasu/Naru first anyways...thinking in the circumstances that stories like your always end up like that (Naruto always choosing Sasuke)
I didn't want to say anything yesterday about Naruto's first and oringal choice b/c you were having problems with that...ahem....."out of line reviewer"
So if you don't mind i'll say what i really wanted to say yesterday....Yesterday i notice alot of chapters and i was thinking "damn where the hell was i when she updated all these chapters" when i last read this story Sasuke's genin was missing when i came back to the story she was found, Naruto made his choice, you had an authors note and a message for that "pissed off reviewer" Me being the Nosey person that i am read the message anyways even though it wasn't for me lol :P
from what i read from that message and your aurthor's note is that, that person was angry for you making it Sasu/Naru.
I was thinking "is that all, geez people can be such babies sometimes" personally i was very disappointed that Naruto choose Sasuke too. But i also realize after i got over my grief (which was a few minutes) that this was your story and you can do whatever you want with it, but I still did not feel right...i guess i'm too into this story of yours lol, I never really laugh like i did with your story, it was new to me and i was happy, i thought to myself that "maybe she's the one" the one to break that silly habbit of when more than one person is...lusting? after Naruto and one of them invovled Sasuke you weren't going to let Naruto choose Sasuke, but you did and what i notice with some of the reviews (i always love reading the reviews to my favorite stories) that you got mixed yet postive remarks about Naruto choice, some people are die-hard Sasu/Naru fans but i'm not, i'm not really much "fond" of Sasuke let alone Sasu/Naru fan...and to see that he did choose Sasuke was alittle hurtful? but that person reviews very completely out of line and no one no matter how bad their story was deserves to have anyone say that there story was "shitty" that was very rude of that person to say, from what i read from your author's note was the person was angry that you made it Sasu/Naru.
hehe i think your a damn good writer to get someone so mad like that from one little choice...genius it's called you know, pure genius ;)

You are now gonna make it that Naruto choose each of them now, but i'm a little "iffy" on reading it seeing that your first choice was Sasu/Naru, i think this is one of the most funniest stories that i have ever read, every chapter until Naruto choice and when that girl was found made me chuckle to say the least....you were on this mountain to me climbing up, every chapter was greater than the last on...very rare to me in the stories i read....that you came to this stop in my mind when you let Sasuke win....grrrr Sasuke always gets what he wants :P -shakes fist-
it's good that you made that choice now but your first choice for Naruto is imprinted in my mind and i just can't get it out :'(
If i don't read that next chapter you'll hopefully know why, if i don't i want you to know that i really enjoyed this story, i couldn't even eat while reading this b/c in fear of choking on my food while laughing so much lol what a first for me ^_^
i know in my mind that if Gaara or Neji was Naruto first choice i think...hmmm i don't really know b/c it didn't happend :'(
but if i did this would be one of my most favorite stories of Adltfanfiction :)
for now it is and i really hope you make another story just warned me by saying it's a Sasu/Naru in the summary so i dont have to read it ok? ;) i tired of reading Sasuke always winning ~sigh~ oh well...if only i had the talent to write like you :')

great story i really enjoyed it!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Tamara~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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From ANON - Crimson_Revenge on December 31, 2005
Good chapter!! It was really funny with the genins guessing what happened to Naruto's ass.... That's awesome!!! I love the chapter. And I think the three different endings is a good idea. Now I don't have to worry about the problems that I had with choosing the one I want to be with Naruto. Now I can see each one with him. That makes me happy. It was a great chapter. Hope you update the next one soon!! I
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From ANON - Jio on December 31, 2005
...Sasuke loosely but cutely interlocking his fingers with Narutos.

Shit. You made me a fangirl.
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From ANON - Mija on December 31, 2005
omg that was soooooo priceless...I can just see poor Naru baby getting all beet red while his students try t0 figure out why he walks funny...lmaooo and omg the whole team can HEAR them and they are just laughing..lol I would be too, but shame on Sasuke for laughing, its his FAULT...lmaoo too funny..the got hit in his butt with a doorknob by Rock Lee was good, made me spit water outta my mouth...too funny, loved it, ty for the excellent reads and the updates, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-) btw have a very safe and joyfull New Year...
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From ANON - shinigamigrl on December 31, 2005
OMG....that was FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! Out of all the lemons I have read...and i've read quite a few...but that is beside the point. You have written the lemon of all lemons. I was practically drooling as Naruto and Sasuke had sex like wild monkeys. It was as if I was there watching. be still be wild yaoi heart. If all your other lemons are like this one I can't wait to read the rest of your story. Now i'm going to go and read that chapter one more time. ^.^
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From ANON - cibiboy on December 31, 2005
lol lol lol that last ch was so funny lol lol update soon
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From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on December 31, 2005
This chapter really makes me laugh and sincerly I don't laugh often when I'm reading. It was so funny and great. I really don't understand people who flame you. Your story is one of the best! I know this is a lot of work writing, so I really admire you to update so often. You're doing such a great job. I hope there will be plenty of other good chapters as good or as fun as this one. I'm sure you will come up with another genius idea. Your story is awesome, so keep going please and flame the flamers! (I don't like them!) Ja!
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From ANON - Akira on December 30, 2005
I totally agree with you, those kind of people are really annoying. I meant they can stop reading the story if they don't like it, it is rude to bother others with your *@#$ opinion. Do they even know how hard it is to write a good story? It really piss me off.
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From ANON - Anne on December 30, 2005
Wow! I love it! It's just great! I've enjoyed it so much! Oh, and I'm so glad Sasuke had won, 'cause I really love SasuNaru pairing! By the way, so good yaoi content, I like it so much, so I hope you write more, ok?! (I know, I'm mad about yaoi XD). At first I felt bad for both Neji and Gaara since they loved Naruto as well, but maybe GaaraNeji pairing is also a good choice. I don't know, do it as you want since it's you story, I'll accept it anyway (well, indeed I like almost all yaoi pairings, even the weirdest XD). The only thing I'd ask for is not to split up our cute couple (I mean SasuNaru, obviosly XD).
Well, I congratulate you for your hard work (since there're few who update so often) and for the whole story! I repeat I love it! And even more: I'm declaring as your fan! XD (and it's something anwonted). So you know, here you've your fans supporting you!
Anyway, good work, and please, update it soon (although I know you're going to do it). See you soon! ;)

Anne

PS: I've just read your last notes about that "bothering reader". I'm not that type of person who usually teases the others works or comments, but this time, since I really love this story and I'm certainly a bit cross (or rather pissed off), I'd like to tell you, bothering reader, that you're the childish one and as Ruri said, if you don't like it, tough shit! The author said from the first the story'd have yaoi content, so since Ruri warned you, now don't start complaining since you haven't the right. If you dislike this sort of content, then just don't read it! Nobody has forcecd you to read it so stop bothering, you i****! Stop flaming and do something more useful! Stop bothering Ruri (and consistently me and the others Ruri's fans) with your silly games!
So you know Ruri, your story is really great, me and lots of people love it. So don't allow that that crap bothers you and go on! Here we're supporting you!
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From ANON - Tamara on December 30, 2005
whoa i missed alot of chapters i feel so sad now :(
i'm glad that Sasuke's genin is ok (i forgot her name lol) sorry about that too :P

what i didn't notice is that Sasuke gotten Naruto...~sigh~ Sasuke gets everything lol oh well that can't be helped
poor Neji and Gaara...i hope they don't go together b/c i never understood that pairing, heck they never even talked before lol
oh dear i also read your author's note and the other thing....i just wanna stay that it's good for some authors like you to have a back bone and not quit your story. People can stay cruels things, i just thought it was funny that, that person was not liking Sasu/Naru...rants rants rant...your story lol do what ya want...and do your best
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From ANON - Kai19 on December 30, 2005
Congrats on telling them off!! You're right, they DON'T have to read this story. I'll never understand why people flame. Constructive criticism is one thing, flames are another. If they don't like the story, then they can go write one of their own the way they want it. Hell, they could even say "I like the idea, but not the pairing.. would you mind making a second ending with this pairing?" I started off writing mainstream stuff, and so long as the plotline's original, it works. Your plot's original enough to make me stay and keep reading. Plus I like Sasu/Naru. lol!! I also like Gaara/Naru and Neji/Naru. But I'm the open-minded type.. odd, huh? I really like your fic, and I'm glad you're going to continue it! I keep checking it every day, hoping there's at least one new chapter. And also, yes, it's your fic. YOU decide how you wanna write it, and YOU decide what reviews you wanna keep. If anyone's being childish, it's them, for actually coming back after they already flamed.. I mean, seriously... Anyway!! Hope you update soon!! My birthday's coming up in 4 days.. maybe as a gift for me? C'mon!! Please?! I'll be your best friend!!
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From ANON - Crimson_Revenge on December 30, 2005
Whoa!! AWESOME lemon!! I love this story!! You are a GREAT writer! I'm really addicted to this fic....... Thank you for writing it. I'm glad that Sasuke and Naruto are together. It's a good pairing. No matter what the flamer says, this is a great pairing. And you're right..... it's your story. You can write whatever pairing you like. It's your choice. This fic is written so well...... I love it. Hope you update soon. I can't wait. Sometimes I can't handle long fics, but I read them anyway. But this is a GREAT fic. I'm happy that it's still going. I don't think I can see it ending any time soon..... And I don't think I want it to end any time soon. It's THAT good. Thank you for writing it. Great job. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter!! I love you!!! ^_^
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From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 30, 2005
Interesting new chapter, would be really cool the see the story turn into an mpreg but well your the author and you do what you want and im very curious to see what it is your going to do. You ask for constructive criticism and I think this would count as it but its a matter of your opinion. There was one part of the story that threw me off and kind of increased my disappointment when you announced the final pairing. I can't remember which chapter it was, but there was a point where Naruto had a conversation with Temari where he told her who he loved and she said something like, "That's unexpected" So I was thinking that the pairing would either be GaaNaru or NejiNaru, because SasuNaru is the obvious, and a bit overused, choice (especially with triangles). I actually can't think of one story where a triangle between Sasuke and either or both of the other two ended with Naruto not picking Sasuke. You raised my hopes up and then crushed them, but oh well. It's not like I hate SasuNaru pairing, I actually do like that pairing a lot, was just hoping for something different. Anyways that's enough of that, your story, you've made your choice. Now I just can't wait to see where your planning to go with the story, because I can't see where it would go beyond this unless you find another storyline (like mpreg....hint hint:D) or maybe you just finish up with the bet and the village's reaction. That's all, I go now, I do like your story and I hope to be seeing a new chapter soon.
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From ANON - redtatsu on December 30, 2005
Well, I for one am really enjoying your story. I agree, if you don't like the pairing then don't read it. Some peole like to torment others just for their own pleasure to get a rise out of the author. I'm glad your not letting it get to you that much. And I hope it doesn't damped your creativity. So, When is the next chapter going to be out?:)
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From ANON - Shinori-chan on December 30, 2005
You tell him! Assholes like that get me mad. Your story rocks so keep going.Geez, some people just don't friggen get it. Homophobes. I hate people like that. Welll anyway, before I get mad about that since I am a authoress myself, I love your story so you keep doing what you gotta do. Update! Bye!

P.S: Pissed off reader, go suck a *bleep*

~Shinori-chan~
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