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Reviews for I would wait forever

By : KrickItat
  • From ANON - =P on July 22, 2007
    I normally dont even bother reviewing stories because everyone else already said what I wish to say, but this poem has to be my favorite out of anything I have ever read and I would like to tell you to keep up your great work.
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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 12, 2006
    i didn't know about naruto's life being shortened because of kyuubi healing him! damn... good poem though. it was really sad, but i loved it just the same.

    -inc
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  • From ANON - hyabusajiraiyarulz on November 10, 2006
    no its not when hes healing its only in 4th tail form where da chakura shield is so hot his blood escapes from every pore from his body while da inner chakra heals him constinly. so when dat happens, da after effect is like tsunades jutsu
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 15, 2006
    Not bad at all.
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  • From LadyNightshade on September 06, 2006
    Wow... this was a really interesting poem. I really liked it. Especially the line about Sakura chopping off her hair.
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  • From ANON - lvl7leaf on September 06, 2006
    This is an very good poem, the best i've ever read, time to read another of yours
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  • From ANON - Kinomoto Neko on September 03, 2006
    This was awsome! ^_^ I just love your work, especially Ink Me... Anywho, loved it!

    Neko
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  • From ANON - Love_less_lover on August 20, 2006
    This was a wonderful poem, I absolutely loved it!
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on August 20, 2006
    Wow, that was beautiful. Loved the rhymes and the structure of it. You write poetry very well. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - CianaRui on August 19, 2006
    Congratulations you had me near tears by the end. I am totally in love with the tone and especially the final stanza. You have definately captured the essence of Naruto's realtionships with his two precious people. Beautiful, truthful and sad.
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  • From ANON - jennjennr on August 14, 2006
    Aww, I really liked it, although at a few spots the rhyme scheme was a little off, it was still way better than any poem I could ever write. I also liked the fact that this poem could actually fit several people, I know you only had one in mind but I can see it being several. I really liked the Rhyme scheme, but I almost wish you had kept the 'And i would wait forever' all throughout the paragraphs to the end... I understand why you didn't, but I think it could still have fit with the thought process. Anyway great little poem, thank you so much for writing it... now go update one of your other stories! :D
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  • From ANON - anon on December 16, 2005
    Hey, not bad, though I have to say that the rhyme (fogive me if I don't quite remember the proper terms for poetry) were a bit distracting. Still, a very nice little poem of hopeless love. Did you know that there is a fic in this section that's also called "I Would Wait Forever" by an author called MonkyLady?
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