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By : ClosetSemeHinata
  • From ANON - Hana-chan on February 11, 2006
    Squee! Get to a place with wireless in the near future with more chapters, okay aneki?
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  • From ANON - Hana-chan on February 02, 2006
    Aww, you mentioned me!**grins Naruto style**
    Don't think I didn't catch the reference to "ninja tech" either.
    ...
    You're gonna have to tell me about the hamsters and elderberries here in a sec.
    lurv much!
    hana-chan
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  • From ANON - Daichi on February 02, 2006
    I’ve only read the first chapter which is well done. However, most people would have bit of respect for Naruto after the Chuunin exam and if he was promoted to ANBU I’m sure the respect would build.

    Anyway, a few massive paragraphs are not always the best idea. Try one large paragraph, followed by two small, three medium sized and one more large. From what I’ve seen and heard over the years too many large paragraphs turn off readers, smaller ones also give them a bit of push to read. Just so you know each line of dialogue is its own paragraph.

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  • From ANON - van on January 19, 2006
    Hey, I just found out this story and I think this one's unique. It's rare to find a naruuga story. I like it! But anyway, you wouldn't mind if I ask you to make your chapters a little bit longer? It's makes me kind of frustrated in a good way you know...'I want more!' I'd scream to myself! hehe...Good job! Hope you'd update soon!
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  • From Ruka on January 19, 2006
    interesting! lol I can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Hana-chan on January 10, 2006
    Thank you, Hinata ne-san! The story's great! I won't be on much, but it was good to get a chance to read this!
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  • From Ruka on December 24, 2005
    awww that was so sweet!
    but please dn't let it end here!
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 23, 2005
    Wow, I hope Neji takes the news well. Great chapter. I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Neccor on December 19, 2005
    Interesting fic. Good job, keep on going. Oh, and by the way, you were a perv before the comment at the end. Later ^_^
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  • From Ruka on December 18, 2005
    wow this was another amazing chapter it was soooo hot!
    And I'm so glad to hear you're continuing this story! ^^
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  • From Ruka on December 13, 2005
    wow this was soooo hot and sweet and wow! But please don't let it end here! I want more!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on December 11, 2005
    i actually thought this was a sasu/saku/naru but i like this too, please keep up the good work andupdate soon
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  • From UchihaSakura on December 11, 2005
    Oh yeah. OH YEAH. You know this is one of the best damn fics I have EVER read!!!! I'm inlove with it!!! There's some SasuSaku coming up ne? Yeah, there is... This fic is GREAT!!!!
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  • From ANON - MemoriesVoid on December 10, 2005
    Pretty good beginning, as well as grammar. +10 cool points to you =P Hinata is my favorite character, so I always like seeing fics where she is the main character... or at least one of the main characters. Plus, I like Neji too. Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to your update. ^_^
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