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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - amanda on November 24, 2014
    Nooooo there are no more chapters.
    Why are the chapters gone?!

    Need to know how it ends. Please update.
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  • From NarutoVixin on September 18, 2009
    saddly i see it has been over 2 weeks since you have updated but i happen to love this tale and am waiting for you to finish it i hope RL lets you have the time and i look forward to more chapters
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  • From Ikippiki on October 19, 2008
    ... I'm impressed... this is one of the best stories I've read so far, if not the best.
    Your way of writting is captivating. I just couldn't stop myself, I read all the published chapters in one go!
    I'd like to know sasuke's point of view though it would be interesting. I think you handled Naruto's pregnancy really well which is great! I hope you plan on giving Gaara some love too (just not from Naruto), poor thing he deserves it.
    I can't wait to read the next chapter! I would tell you to update soon but I know it always irks me when someone says that to me since I know I always update as soon as I can. So... Do your best! I sure as hell will be waiting!
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  • From electrostatic on October 08, 2008
    Hi. God firstly I wanted to kill you for making me belive that this was a gaaraxnaruto. I was so afraid 'cause I want Sasuke and Naruto to get toghether. They have to get togheter.
    I love this fic, probably more then I should. You have me hooked and I love you for it.
    Great, Great work. Love it.
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  • From MikiyuSado on August 01, 2008
    there's only two Naruto stories that I read. Only two that I can even stomach. this is one of them. I adore it, honestly. I think you're a brilliant author. I really wish you would update. I really want to know what happens next. D=
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  • From asialisek on July 24, 2008
    **si~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~gh**
    **deep beath**
    n_____________________________________n **grin**

    wow.
    I love it! I love the story, I love the pace at which things are developing, I love that Sasuke and Naruto didn't just kiss and make up, I love the additional conflict that Gaara posed, that aside from understandable changes in Naruto you've kept true to the spirit of friendship and devotion that the anime/manga is so keen on presenting and that you didn't make everyone OOC. Love that sasuke's still his own jerk self (and the moments where he kept being interupted every time he wanted to talk to Naruto, frustrating but effective)! XD I love the way you write and I love how you have things 'happen'.

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  • From Allys on July 09, 2008
    OMG! I love this story! It's so good and you left it at such an opportune moment. I want to know what Naruto chose! What happened to chapter 16? I'd really love to read it. And the ones after. I hope nothing bad happened to you. I will cross my fingers and keep an eye out. It's such a fabulous story. It deserves to be finished.
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  • From Imagy on January 04, 2008
    lovely darling!
    absolutely stunning
    can't wait for the next chapter to go up~!
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  • From ultistarmon on December 27, 2007
    I love the way the plot developed and how in character everybody is! Although Shikamaru hasn't said how troublesome it all is yet! I can't wait for the next chapter, so update soon please.
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  • From Breek on December 15, 2007
    This is rather good, a new and interesting twist on an almost over-played base plot. Few minor sentence errors, mostly just two words next to each other getting switched in the lost chapter or so, nothing to interrupt the flow of the story.
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  • From hisoka on October 27, 2007
    HE CONFUSES HIMSELF,AND HIS INABILITY TO MAKE WIZE AND RATIONAL DECISIONS KINDA PISSES ME OFF BUT IM CURIOUS TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENSE AND IF HE ACTUALLY GOES BACK WILLINGLY AND FINDS A HAPPY LIFE WITH HIS CHILD AND THE CHILD'S FATHER.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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  • From solitare1 on October 24, 2007
    Oh PLEASE hurry and update! I have to know how this ends.
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  • From LadyWolf on October 22, 2007
    ***sighing loudly**** Choices, choices!!!!!!!!! Who would you choose????? Me I would choose thd teme!!!! But then again Gaara is sweet too!!!!!!!!!!! Agh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just don't know!

    Please post another soon!!!

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  • From akiravadel on October 22, 2007
    I love reading this story. I usually loose interest when there isn't enough yaoi going on but I love the story you have going. I can't wait to read more! You have a great story line going on and I can't wait for them to kiss again.

    ~Akira~
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  • From pasc55 on October 22, 2007
    ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!it's so good! i wait one year for this chapter!!! i hope it will continue it's romantic and all and i think yo write well!!
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