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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Deviation101 on September 07, 2006
    Wow this story is awesome. Seriously, I can't wait for the next one out. You're doing a terrific job here, I am so excited to see whats next.
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  • From ANON - John Scott on September 07, 2006
    I really enjoy your story so far. It's a very good one at that. I can't wait to see what happens next, and how sasuke and naruto will end up living. You're doing a good job. :)
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  • From ANON - D/H on September 07, 2006
    Love this chapter and loved it more becuz the baby was a BOY!!!

    Anyway, NEXT WEEK?!?! That's too long to wait...

    Anyway, i feel bad for Gaara...I hope he ends up with someone...

    How long will this story be???
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  • From ANON - eepmonster on September 07, 2006
    yaaaaaaay! I've been having an extremely crappy couple of weeks back up at school, so excellent timing. I love your story, even though I'm not usually a huge mpreg fan, and I avidly read each new update. So thank you! ^^
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  • From ANON - darkmousy on September 06, 2006
    Woot, so glad for the update!!! nicely done with how they all found out. and glad it all happened in one chapter. sasuke claiming his son and admitting to sleeping with naruto seemed anticlimatic in a way that it made me chuckle. or i guess, i just pictured him saying it as "yeah, it's mine, we did that the other day", lol. this is the first mpreg fanfic i really enjoy. it's really well written and that's definitely a factor to keep me reading. XD
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  • From ANON - DeityOfDeath on September 06, 2006
    ::Sniffles:: That was soo....good. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 06, 2006
    i like the boys name Keitaro.
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  • From ANON - peppymint on September 06, 2006
    How about something connected to the weather, a name that meant firestorm would be perfect.
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  • From ANON - DeadlySakura15 on September 06, 2006
    OMG that was so good i was jsut reading this story alittle while ago and now the new chapter has come out its very good by the way oh can i suggest a name for the baby how about Eichi i love that name its from a very cool anime i watched a few months ago any way please update soon i really love this story^^..
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on September 06, 2006
    *shakes head* Tsuande-YOU forgot Naruto HEARD you arguing with hte baka council! Naruto WON'T want to lose his child and be locked up for the rest of his life! And does Gaara plan on marrying naruto? That option might prevent Naruto from being dragged back to Leaf against his will...
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  • From ANON - leelee on September 05, 2006
    wow that was soo cool when is the baby going to be born i want twins girl and boy that would be soo cool
    very wild dont you think
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  • From ANON - lulu on September 04, 2006
    would you update this week?
    i'm looking for it! please keep writing, i love this fiction!
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  • From ANON - D/H on September 03, 2006
    Hopefully you'll have Susuke in the next chapter and the baby born soon..Hopefully, it's a boy!!!

    Great story so far!!
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on August 29, 2006
    Well I thought this chapter was great despite the fact that it always seems like your chapters are way too short, although I think that’s more my own problem that something you need to worry about. I'll admit though at first I was disappointed that you revealed to Naruto that Sasuke isn’t married, but then you added in the part about Sasuke wanting his clan to end with him and that was even better. That is a plot twist that was perfect for this point in the story. It keeps the story interesting instead of the same boring thing over and over again. I eagerly await your next chapter. After all you did leave us with a cliff hanger and those are truly terrible for those that are addicted to this story, and I’m sure I’m not just speaking for myself either.


    Dryad1789@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - naruto-sama on August 27, 2006
    holy shit i cant wait till the next chapter
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