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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Aliandry on September 19, 2006
    OMG!!
    I loved this chapter!! A kawaii baby boy! who will he look aliike? More like Sasuke,or more like Naruto!!
    You are taking to long T.T. i wanna read the next chapter!!!
    How will he react? And Sasuke? I'm going crazy trying to imagine how the next chapter will be!!
    And names for the chibi:
    Ryohi(the good and the evil), Risu, Ozora(open sky), Takato, Makoto, Riku, Kyto,Hijiri(genius), Akira, Deunan, Kaneda, Tetsuo, Gou, Touya, Yukito, Okami(wolf),Kansho(hot and cold), Karyoku(warm), Raimei(sound of tunder), Sanga(nature), Takaho, Yasu, Hide, Yodo, Miru... Here i hope it helps for the update to come faster^^

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  • From ANON - FallingStAr on September 17, 2006
    I wanna know what narutos reaction is to everyone being there! update sooner! I can't wait!
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  • From ANON - ana on September 16, 2006
    omg the story keeps me hooked. you should have it so naruto 'has/must' marry gaara though it'd be so, i can't even think of a word for it.!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE AT LEAST!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Exotic Rose83 on September 16, 2006
    Woah! Great story!! To be honest at first i was dubious about the plot but man i got sucked in quick. I'm really anxious to see what Naruto's reaction will be to everything when he wakes up, especially seeing Sasuke there, and how willingly he seems to accept his role as father. I also hope Naruto goes easy on poor Shikamaru...I think Naruto should make Sasuke work to gain him back though after all he's been through! Gaara's been so good to him...
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  • From ANON - lyric on September 14, 2006
    OOOOOOOOO AHHHHHAHAAAAAAAAA
    Great chappie! I can't wait to know what happens! MORE!
    eagerly wait for your update and take your time.......
    LOL!
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on September 11, 2006
    Sasuke might make things hard on Naruto. We know he cares, but caring about a person doesn't make you kind to a person. I wasn't expecting Team 7 to get pulled in so quickly! I knew Shikamaru would go for Tsunade, and I was hoping Sakura might be brought along, but I hadn't guessed that Sasuke and Kakashi would find out so soon! I'm glad that Kakashi's there with Sasuke; he can be a positive influence when Sasuke's with Naruto.

    You've done a great job writing Shikamaru. Early on his character identified that Naruto had no goals now, and the way he beleived he should have contacted Tsunade earlier is right on. The explaination for the pregnancy was very beleivable! Especially the part about the baby usually being premature since there's not enough room to keep growing.

    Now, what's Naruto going to do when he sees the rest of Team 7?
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  • From ANON - CassandraD on September 10, 2006
    You've probably named the baby. But you could always name the baby after Sasuke's or Naruto's fathers.

    Waiting eagerly for your next update.
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  • From ANON - sie shee on September 10, 2006
    Oichi, how about that as a good name, i don't know i always wanted to name my kind that once i have one hope others give you some better feedback than mine. Oh by the way the story is great
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  • From ANON - red_mascara on September 10, 2006
    plz put more up soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh and if you need help with name *you said you didnt now what to name the kid* just email me!i can help!but anywhoo i love this story!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on September 10, 2006
    so he really did know ^_^!!
    Freakin awesome chapter
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  • From ANON - Giggi on September 09, 2006
    Very good chapter, I love your story. I love Sas/Naru pairings, and they have a sone, very cute. Cannot wait for the next chapter, hope it's soon.
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  • From ANON - chelzi on September 09, 2006
    NO!! i want another chapter!! NOW!!~
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  • From ANON - melsa on September 09, 2006
    Name it Bob!
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  • From ANON - o^_____^o on September 08, 2006
    I think you should Name the baby Unmei.
    It's a girl's name, but in japanese it means Destiny.
    cos naruto and Sasuke were DESTINED to be together.
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  • From ANON - Fallen on September 08, 2006
    I Loved this story please update soon
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