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By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on October 14, 2006
    Naruto is nesting! Aw, that's too cute!
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on October 14, 2006
    I'm going back and rereading the story. I forgot how hot the lemons were! You explain where there limbs are, and that helps a lot with visualizing what's going on. It's actually pretty important to include and some authors forget to explain how the character's bodys are splayed. And something about the second lemon was touching. It made me feel like the characters really cared about each other, without getting corny.

    There's two things I've been wondering. First is Itachi still alive? If he is and he finds out that an Uchiha heir has been born, will he care? Second, why did Sasuke not remember, or deny remembering, that he and Naruto had sex? Rereading this chapter I hoped to figure out a little of what he was thinking, but his thoughts were still completely hidden from me. I can't even tell if he had sexual thoughts towards Naruto before the two slept together, or if Naruto kissing him was the first time the idea had ever occured to him. None the less, it was obvious from the start that he cared about Naruto and saw him as his most important person.
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  • From ANON - TheDarkSandQueen13 on October 14, 2006
    please update i wanna know wat happens so please update i'll be your best friend and help you if you need ideas for stories i got lotsof them so pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update.

    Signed,
    The Dar Sand Queen
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  • From ANON - HellKat on October 05, 2006
    Great, fantastic. Loved Sasuke in this chapter. I only have one name suggestion, which is kiseki, which means miracle, I think. Anyway, hope to read more soon.
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  • From ANON - melsa on October 04, 2006
    Did you forget us? Please update *cries*
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  • From ANON - noahvearn on October 02, 2006
    come on, please continue. i can't take it anymore. it is very intriguing and full of curiosity. wanna know what happened. (^0^)/
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  • From ANON - Curuma on October 02, 2006
    Update woman! UPDATE!
    Or i'll send my angry mob of farmers to your frontdoor!
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  • From ANON - padoopadoop on October 01, 2006
    Wow.

    I really wasn't expecting this story to be like this. It really kind of sucked me in (I read all the chapters available today). This was very enjoyable and I thought you did an excellent job of portraying the emotions of the characters involved. I look forward to reading more of this story.
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  • From ANON - Nolah de Fanel on September 28, 2006
    I haven't checked my favorite fics in a while. Wonderful, stupendous, yata yata. I can't wait for the update. **is grinning ear to ear** is the baby blond or brunette?
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  • From ANON - tomoyo15 on September 27, 2006
    WHERE THE HELL IS THE 14TH CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>:-
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  • From ANON - dumatrea on September 26, 2006
    you have a very nice fic there! please update soon! i'm not really good with names either so i tend to dissappear when people arround me start asking for suggestions with names for babies...i don't like naming them either...just one of the fears i have... and you have a hard timethinking of one neh? GOOD LUCK!
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  • From ANON - Niara-kun on September 26, 2006
    oops...guess not [as in tha bunny]
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  • From ANON - Niara-kun ^-^ on September 26, 2006
    THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!! i wuz so scared he wuz gonna hav a miscarriage or sumthin! now all tha important ppl kno! YAY!!!! ur AWESOME! THIS STORY IS EQUALLY AWESOME!!!

    ()_()
    ('_' )
    C(( ) )O
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  • From ANON - CassandraD on September 25, 2006
    What does Gaara have planned?
    How is Sasuke going to get Naruto to come back to Konoha?

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  • From ANON - PanPan on September 23, 2006
    I've been reading this story for about a month. And i love it! The best mpreg i've read, even though i've only read a handful. But... UPDATE!!! I've been waiting two weeks! Please. Also... are you gonna describe what the baby looks like becasue you didn't mention that in ch. 13 except for the color eyes. I hop you find a good name! I'll be waiting. Another one of your captivated fans.
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