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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Keina on November 30, 2006
    I miss this story T.T *sniff* please don't leave us in the dark, update pretty please. It has been more than 2 month since your las update :(
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  • From ANON - Lost on November 24, 2006
    Please post the next chapter. I've been on the edge of my seat through the whole thing. You are very good at writing and I'm eager for more and I applaud you for being able to keep my attention for more than five minutes(I have ADHD. XP) I eagerly await your next chapter. >w
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  • From ANON - Melodi on November 21, 2006
    I don't usually comment on fics, but this one is fantastic. :D

    *hugs Naruto*

    Gaara is awesome. I love how protective he is. ^___^ And Sasuke's acceptance made me happy, but I'm worried about his motives. D:

    Great job. ;D
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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 13, 2006
    OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this fanfic!!!! *sqeals like an obsessive yaoi fangirl* I was searching the site, looking for angst (I wasn't in a good mood....), when I found your story. I started reading it and fell in love. Yay! Update when you can! Lol!
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  • From ANON - asukathethief on November 10, 2006
    Aww. I love this story. It's very well written. I can't wait to read more =3 UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - bobii on November 09, 2006
    did you die or something? It's been 2 months since the last chapter *sniffle* I wanna read the rest of the story
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2006
    Oh please tell me you'll update soon!
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  • From ANON - WHITEDIABLO on November 05, 2006
    why arnt you UPDATING! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE ITS BEEN MONTHS!!!!!!! ARE YOU DEAD? ARG UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDA UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATETE UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Katya on November 04, 2006
    I love your fic please please please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Summer on November 03, 2006
    I LOVE IT UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - TheDarkSandQueen13 on October 29, 2006
    hey i saw that you needed a beta reader i could be one if you still need one and i'm actualt posting this on my second time reading the story and i usealy don't reread fanfics but this one was good so keep on writing and remember my proposistion about me being the beta reader if you need one still.
    Ja Ne,
    The Dark Sand Queen
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  • From ANON - Stupid Little Fangirl on October 23, 2006
    I really love this story, its one of my favorites! I really hope hope you haven't given up on it, because it a great story and very well written.....
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  • From ANON - shinya on October 22, 2006
    i have been waiting for this to continue so long ;__________;
    this really is a great! love it... really love it so much... love the angst, love the mpreg. , love the pairing and first of all love the uke naruto!
    i really hopet this will continue...
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  • From ANON - Katsutoshi96 on October 15, 2006
    KYUU!! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on October 14, 2006
    I’m not sure if you can tell what chapters I’m reviewing, and that may have made some of my previous comments confusing, like the nesting one. Of the reviews I’ve left today, the first one was for chapter six, and the second review was for chapter eight.

    (Chapter 8) I’m now sure that Sasuke remembers that they had sex after four weeks, when he says he has something to talk to Naruto about, after bringing the fainted (*snerk*) Naruto home. I think he must want to talk about how they slept together. And if I extend my brain a little more, I wonder if Sasuke had never forgotten. Right after Sasuke wakes up in the hospital, there is a point in their conversation where he lets Naruto determine what happens. Maybe that was just a way of letting Naruto deny or confirm that they slept together. Naruto chose not say anything, and Sasuke follows Naruto’s lead. At least until four weeks later when Sasuke tries to bring it up.

    (Chapter 10) I don’t know if I’ve said it before, but I love the cliff hanger where Shikamaru discovers Naruto’s necklace. It’s so exciting!

    (Chapter 11) This is my favorite chapter. I’ve reread this one over and over. Something about Naruto finally revealing himself to Shikamaru is incredibly interesting. It’s like Naruto’s submitting himself, but in a completely non-sexual way.

    (Chapter 13) I love this line, “While Naruto’s decisions were impulsive, he swept people into his way of doing things. Usually I’m immune to his rash planning, but this time I was pulled in instead of getting him help.”

    It’s just so true, and you phrased it more eloquently then other statements you’ve made in the past.

    I also worry that Sasuke may not make a good father. He’s selfish and has the potential to be emotionally brutal. That’s not good for Naruto or the baby.

    Unfortunately, I’m no good at naming babies. I’d be afraid anything I suggested was stupid. ^^;;
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