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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on July 11, 2006
    Woot. Alright. So far it's going just the way I want it to ^_^. Hehehehe

    Naruto's not being a BIG MOUTH and blurting out his undying love or letting on any more than he needs to. *Phew* I hate it when it gets all sappy like that. Gotta be a man about it, a real NINJA and keep up the facade. People tend to forget that they're still guys here and Naruto is pretty damned subborn one.

    I may just be assuming things but if this is in fact the point where Naruto's pregnant I must say this:

    It makes me happy to know that this isn't going to end up like all the other Naruto pregnancy fics where he breaks down and says all this girly stuff to Sasuke and they get together like it's nothing. Because I've read plenty of those and it always happens too fast.

    I envision that Naruto would want to keep his dirty little secret to himself for as long as he could. Oooh and instead of going to Tsunade to find out that he's pregnant (who's going to want to weasel out of him who the baby's father and force him to tell Sasuke) he should go to Hinata (She could be a medic nin in training or something). She wont be nosey, she's keep his secret and most of all it would be different ^_^ instead of going to Tsunade all the time.

    Well this is all senseless blabber. I'm sure you already know where you want your story to go ^__^. I LOVE your story so I cant help but think about all this random stuff. Forgive me if I seem like I'm preaching. PLEASE CONTINUE!
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on July 11, 2006
    oh i luv it. and the chapters are a great length enough to get you hooked and wanting the next chapter. i can already see the plot laying out i'm guessing naruto is pregnant and when he realises that he figures he has to leave, thats my guess anyways, can't wait to read more keep it up :P
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  • From ANON - Anna on July 11, 2006
    No the chapters aren't too long. In fact, u could make them longer if u wanted to...i wouldn't mind! lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 10, 2006
    is the holl story going to be naruto rembering gost to the point and say what hapens next.
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  • From ANON - sourita kinomoto on July 10, 2006
    nice chapter. can't wait to see what happens next. update soon please. ja ne ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hypnotic on July 09, 2006
    *cheers* Oh you have no idea how happy I am that your going to finish this story!
    I'm a big fan, so I can't wait to see what happens next. I just feel so bad for Naruto right now...he's going though so much, and after what just happened between him and Sasuke, aww poor Naruto! I just hope Sasuke doesn't make him feel bad. I mean I think Sasuke wanted it just as much as Naruto...but still. I don't think Naruto can take any more! Oh please let everything turn out ok with Naruto-kun!
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  • From ANON - Pic's Pixie on July 09, 2006
    oh great! please update soooon , i luv this fic please contiue it, poor naruto i hope the poison didn't effect sasuke till after they made love, but poor naruto would think that it happened when he was still delusional :(
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  • From ANON - Feion Phylar on July 09, 2006
    *Squeals* Yeeaaa! AN UPDATE~! I love this story! You took long but I can hold out as long as possible. Just promise you'll write more! *Sniffles* Poor Naruto....I was a little confused in the beginning but everything fell in place.

    *Sighs* Take your time and dont rush things....I want to see a well written plotty story becase you've got something here. Work it out. ^__^ Can't wait for chapter 6!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2006
    That was hot! Poor Naruto! I hope everything works out for him. I wonder if Sasuke will remember? Update again!
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on July 09, 2006
    Very nicely done. I wonder if Sasuke will remember? You've captured my interest and I especially appreciate the long chapters. Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - ... on July 09, 2006
    it's pretty good!u should finish this story.
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  • From ANON - Chaos_Mar on June 04, 2006
    Very nice, I love this story. Excellent characterization & story line. You write angst beautifully.

    Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Sarong Luv on February 05, 2006
    Dear Author,

    I really like the story so far (grin). I hope you make another chapter story soon.
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on January 30, 2006
    Thank you for updating!!! (praises you) But I hate cliffies ¬_¬ Oh well. I must say, I'm very please with the way this fic is turning out. Job well done! You've saved me from 30 min of utter boredom! ...Yes, I do read slow so don't rub it in >.< But in the end, I understand and remember better so -HA! TAKE THAT YOU UBER-FAST READERS!
    OH! I almost forgot: Update soon
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on January 30, 2006
    Thank you for updating!!! (praises you) But I hate cliffies ¬_¬ Oh well. I must say, I really like how this fic is turning out. Job well done! You've saved me from 30 min of utter boredom! Yes, I read slow, I kno >.< But hey -in the end I understand and remember better than my friends do. Damn those uber-fast readers!!
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