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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Shosuro on July 18, 2006
    I think that the plot line is great!!!
    I only wish that you can type faster so that
    we can find out whats happening next!!!
    I am just wondering if there is going to be any Garaa/Naruto??
    But I guess we'll just have to wait for that, now wont we??
    Keep up the good work!!!!

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  • From ANON - Shadowstar on July 17, 2006
    *takes out weedwhacker of doom and beats the crud out of the mean councilors* Go pick on someone else, ya creeps! Sorry, I just hate bullies and wanting to imprison Naruto just for having the Kyubbi is right along those lines. I hope ya have Gaara use his Sand Tomb technique on them if they try to come after Nartuo. Write more soon. Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on July 17, 2006
    I really love this fic. It's really sad but it's really good! Thank you!
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  • From ANON - darkness_surroundsme on July 17, 2006
    those bastards! i hate em' i hate em' all! PLZ UPDATE I HATE THE VILLAGERS AND COUNCIL! FUCK EM' ALL TO HELL!

    ~notamawriter~
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  • From ANON - Briryan on July 17, 2006
    Great chapter!) Poor, poor Naruto. Just when he thinks things where going his way bam, things go so wrong. I like the way the story is moving. Can't wait to find out the reactions of Sasuke and Konoha when they find out that Naruto has left. Also looking foward to reading Gaara's reaction to Naruto's story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - deathbyfurballs on July 17, 2006
    I don't think you need to speed up- but you should aim to finish Naruto's story telling to Gaara so the story can progess. Though I Understand that all these events are important and need to be told. Other than that I really enjoy the story. Keep up the good work and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - artemisroseshadow on July 17, 2006
    Sweet! *rates 5*
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  • From ANON - jess on July 17, 2006
    ahhh! so amazing! everything works and everything is good! you rock! taking your time is the way to go... that way we get all the story details and a feel for the characters and their feelings... i am so excited! this story is so addictive... I will be on the edge of my seat for the next chapter! i like kyuubi, he is evil... but not too evil. and sasuke and iruka's concern is so adorable! poor naruto is having such a bad month though! *grin* yay! thank you soooooooooooooooooo much! and please write fast... i need to know what happens next! (the marriage proposal thing is an excellent twist... as the the council wanting to lock naruto up. it is something that they would really do and it makes the perfect motivation for naruto to want to run to gaara. i am sad that gaaraxnaruto is onesided, though... those two are always so cute together. ahhh! but i also want sasuke to take care of naruto! like i said... i love you and please update soon! thanks!)
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  • From ANON - lanier on July 17, 2006
    Wow, poor Naruto. His only love is being matched up with a wife, His village hates and fears him and now he has a baby to worry about. He just never gets a break. CAnt wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 16, 2006
    Yes! Kyuubi told Naruto! And Kyuubi also said Sasuke has feelings for Naruto! Yes! Stupid council, and stupid villagers. Damn them. I really liked this chapter and can't wait for the next!
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  • From ANON - nile_soul on July 16, 2006
    the story is interresting finish it for my sake pls oh and speed it up juuts slightly but all in all great
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  • From ANON - themirror on July 16, 2006
    omg...this must be one of the best i ever read...^_^ keep going!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on July 16, 2006
    wow...that was some chapter ^^ if it was moving slowly earlier, it sure as hell sped up in that last chapter ^_^
    now i really cant wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Volett on July 16, 2006
    I don't think it's moving too fast or too slow. The pacing of the story feels very natural. I'm content to read this just as often as you continue to update. I think that the execution of the story is more important than anything else, what feels natural to you will likely feel natural to the other readers as well.
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  • From ANON - Briryan on July 14, 2006
    Great chapter!) I can't wait to read Naruto's reaction to his baby news. And to what everyone else will have to say about it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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