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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Phe on August 02, 2006
    Forgive me for not being signed in. Or for reviewing earlier for that matter. See, I've been following this fic since the beginning, but as I'm rarely signed in (I only sign in to update) I tend to delegate reviewing for later, and forget. But, I digress.

    Anyhow, I love this fic of yours. Seeing two new chapters made me jump in glee. I think the closeness between Naruto and Gaara is sweet. The Kazekage's so protective, it's just adorable. And of course, Shikamaru would be around. And I know he'll be supportive in his own way, but I still beat my forehead against my palm when Naruto confirmed himself. He should have seen it coming. Shikamaru's sneaky, dammit!

    Anyway, I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - anoymous on August 01, 2006
    hi there! ur story is so cool! please update soon. this is so exciting!
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  • From ANON - sisko66002 (not signed in) on August 01, 2006
    I really like the story and hope it is updated soon.
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  • From ANON - Cloudy on August 01, 2006
    YOU MUST UPDATE SOON!!!!!
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  • From ANON - mm on August 01, 2006
    plz continue! its the best story ive read in ages and u got the characters perfect!
    so sad and i hope naruto will be fine... do i sense a hint of gaara and naruto love?
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  • From ANON - I'm Me For A Reason on July 31, 2006
    WOW I Love this story please please please UPDATE SOON

    THanks!!!!!!!!


    I'm Me For A Reason
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  • From ANON - nette on July 31, 2006
    dang man, shikamaru foud him out. now wat will happen? cant wait to read more. this sotry is getting good and i wonder if sasuke will show up anytime soon. oh well guess i hav to wait. until then. :D
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  • From ANON - Crystal on July 31, 2006
    i love your story. i'm really not a fan of first person pov. but your story is so good, i over look it.i can't wait for the next chapter. the suspence is killing me, what will naruto do, what will shikamaru do?
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on July 31, 2006
    damn.... but at least when shika hears naru's story he won't tell.
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  • From ANON - vanessa on July 31, 2006
    oh me, I was literally banging my head on the computer screen when I read that shikamaru found out, but I do like shikamaru. SHIKA SHIKA. anyway, I wonder what's going to happen next, that situation really sucked, oMG I can't belive it. Great now I can't wait to read the next chapter, and why does naruto ask so much questions? I thought for a minute there that Gaara would be annoyed but I guess not, I LURVE GAARA! okay now that I got that out of my system, update soon, ya here*_*
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on July 31, 2006
    great story cant wait to read more plz update soon!
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  • From on July 31, 2006
    lol the first thing I had to say as I read the end of chapter 10 was 'oh shit!' Damn Shika for being so smart x.x
    Aww... man, that part where Naruto got to hear his baby's heart; so emotional ;_; I loved it.

    Again, love this story more as I read it..

    Please update soon~
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  • From ANON - Tom on July 30, 2006
    Hey..you really should continue that story! it's really good i can't wait to read the rest of it! so continue the good work!

    Sincerly,
    Tom
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  • From ANON - Keina on July 30, 2006
    AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!
    Please update soon I love this story and you just let me wondering whats going to happen.... Naruto needs to learn hoe to think before he acts XD
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  • From ANON - Briryan on July 30, 2006
    Great chapter!) I even like the cliffie at the end of it too! Have a question, are you going to have Naruto use his Sexy no Jutsu when it comes time to have the baby? Hope so. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
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