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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - Nick on August 06, 2006
    yo, this is a good story and i like it I hope you do the next one soon.
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  • From ANON - Luthien Wildglen on August 06, 2006
    I must admit that many a time I saw your fic and many a time decided not to read it. However after finally reading your fic I have concluded it is nothing short of addicting. I must say that even though I consider myself a very open minded person, I was taken back a little by the male pregnancy concept. However I realize now that the concept only proved to make the fic even more addicting. I commend you for taking a hard concept and making it into a story that not only I, but others as well can’t get enough of. I also wanted to inform you that I like the idea of a time jump. You have very good instincts for your writing. After so much praise I must balance it with one question and possible a suggestion. Do you have a beta? Regardless, I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 06, 2006
    You can count on me to keep R&R! The chapter is great, please update as soon as you can, or I'll keep bugging the hell out of you until you do! >.>
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on August 06, 2006
    *shakes head* NO way will Sasuke LET the bakayoru Council kill HIS kid! *rolls eyes* Idiots! A pity someone cannot go back in the PAST to the day Yondaime died and SHOW him ALL of Naruto's life from the day he was born up to NOW! Prehaps Yondaime WOULD think TWICE before sealing Kyubi into Naruto and DYING to leave Naruto on his OWN! I think IF Yondaime AND members of Naruto's family was ALIVE, Sandaime would have HELP into making Naruto's life better! And someone would have stopped Itachi before he went and killed the ENTIRE Uchiha clan! And Sasuke would have NO pressure and be able to make his OWN life choices! The Council might be able to overrule a Hokage-BUT can they OVERULE 2 Hokages?!
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  • From ANON - C.S on August 06, 2006
    This is a great story and I luv it. I am glad that Shikamaru is going to help, due to the fact that both Kiba and Shikamaru are my favorites. Also, I want to know who will find out next. Kiba`s got his nose but then the Hyuuga`s got their eyes. Anyway, this is a great story and I hope you continue with it. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on August 06, 2006
    lol, creepy ANBU with sunglasses ^^ Great chapter!! I'm glad Shikamaru's gunna help ^^
    Hope you update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - I'm Me For A Reason on August 05, 2006
    WOW I LOve this story please please please Update sooon
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  • From ANON - Briryan on August 05, 2006
    Great chapter!) I am sooo glad that Shikamaru is helping Naruto, any way he can. Still looking forward to read Sasuke response to the new that he is going to be a father. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - GrowlingTurtlez on August 05, 2006
    I've been reading this story since you started posting it, but I've never reviewed! I think it's a wonderful story (I have a real soft spot for mpregs), and your writing style is very good. A lot better than some of the incoherent crap that gets posted so often. I hope you keep updating this great story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2006
    Yay! I'm so happy Shikamaru is going to help Naruto. He's really smart so that'll be good to have him help. I really liked it. Update again!
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 04, 2006
    I think that the story is great! But where's the rest of it?? write more please!!
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  • From ANON - Anya Moongem on August 04, 2006
    I love your story! Update as much as you can, please?
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  • From ANON - Blue-eyed Fox on August 04, 2006
    hi! I love your story! Interesting how you twist the plot! Love it! Hope you can update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Neji on August 02, 2006
    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee naruto with a kid! i wish this were finished cuz it soooooooo goood i luv it i luv it! and it all works out cux sasuke needs and heir and plus wouldnt naruto's kid be real stong? (sp?) yeah i'm convinceing myself XDXDXDXDXDXDXD wow gaara so nice (sigh)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2006
    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeee naruto with a kid! i wish this were finished cuz it soooooooo goood i luv it i luv it! and it all works out cux sasuke needs and heir and plus wouldnt naruto's kid be real stong? (sp?) yeah i'm convinceing myself XDXDXDXDXDXDXD wow gaara so nice (sigh)
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