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Reviews for Hidden Heartache

By : shiinechan
  • From ANON - martina on August 15, 2006
    the story's amazing so far. i can't wait to read the next chapter.. or to finally read the part when sasuke and naruto meet. i hope it'll happen soon! the story made me cry more than once, and i think it's enough of a prove that you're a good author, so please keep up the good work :).
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 14, 2006
    Please please please please please update!!!
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  • From ANON - MiniMew on August 13, 2006
    OK, ready for some constuctive critism? Here it goes: You have some spelling errors here and there. Like 'what' instead of 'want'. It's some small mistakes, but they're there. Oh, well. And now on to the compliments! I absolutely ADORE, no LOVE this story!! *Falls on knees and loves* The way you describe the persons, how they feel, think, and so on. You make them so alive. They're very much in character, where alot of people make them... OCC's kind of. Keep up the great work (soon)!!

    - MiniMew
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  • From ANON - Anna on August 11, 2006
    Well I did say that Ill bug you right?! Please update as soon as you can! I know is hard to write a chapter. because I write myself, but I also know how anxious readers get when they are waiting for a new chapter of a great history!
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  • From ANON - YO! on August 10, 2006
    Update... Now, I can't believe how addicted I am... Please update! ASAP! And I promise, I'll love ya forever! =)
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  • From ANON - Jiro on August 09, 2006
    I love Shika! He's so awesome. Great fic!
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  • From ANON - Fan1 on August 08, 2006
    Another great SasuNaru fic in the works.

    It's great so far!

    Poor Naruto, can you imagine being confined indefinitely? I'd run too.

    I wonder what Sasuke will do when he finds out? He'll probably be somewhat glad since he won't have to be with the aggravating Sayori, but pissed that Naruto left without telling him anything.

    Leave it to Shikamaru to figure things out. At least he won't do anything without giving Naruto prior notice.

    And Gaara. Now that's a friend right there for ya. Willing to help Naruto no matter the consequences, may it even be starting a war between two villages. He won't even cave in to the fact that Naruto is around no matter how obvious it is.

    I hope to read more. This is a great story that just makes you want to read more.
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Shingo the Pest on August 08, 2006
    That was the best chapter yet. Something in the way Naruto had to slowly reveal himself, bit by excurciating bit was very captivating. My favorite part of the chapter was when Shikamaru asked/forced Naruto to say who the father was. I was extremely nervous about Shikamaru finding out. The way you wrote him was very accurate; Shikamaru would stake his loyalty with Konoha unless he understood and agreed with Naruto's reasons completely.
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on August 07, 2006
    YAY! At I started freaking out when Shika was messing with Naru-chan but now I feel better! Thank you! Please update soon! ^^ I was so mad at Shika that I started yelling at my Temari! Then she got mad and that was fun!
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  • From ANON - Sir Magus on August 07, 2006
    im suprised Shikimaru didnt say anything about narutos situation bein "troublesome" but it was a very good chapter an i cant wait till u post the next one-hopefully it will be soon-(HINT HINT)! when will sasuke find out? how will he take it? god i cant sit still just thinking about it plz u have to update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - nette on August 07, 2006
    good chapter. well thats another person who knows naruto's secret. i wonder who else will show up and discover him there. cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - lain-trigger01 on August 06, 2006
    Shikamaru I love you!!! Naruto-chan is so cute ne? He'll be alright for now, he just needs to make sure that Sasuke does not find out or else he'd try to get Naruto back regardless of whether that will start a war between Konoha and Sand. Wonder how Sasuke-chan is doing? Please do update soon, we grovel at your feet.
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  • From ANON - D/H on August 06, 2006
    Great story and hope to read more of it...Oh, and please have the baby'z gender as 'male,' if you could..
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  • From ANON - ladyfiend on August 06, 2006
    lovely as usual! please update soon, i'm dying to read what happens next!!
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  • From ANON - O___O on August 06, 2006
    email in case it's hidden) hershalleyebeegurl@yahoo.com

    ok, just let me say first that i already read the whole story so far, but i couldn't find where to review, until i went back. Ok, so now i must say, I LOVE YOU PERSON WHOM I KNOW NOT! your story is awesome. The best. Actually, it's the only yaoi fic i read so far because, well, recently i just started getting into it, mostly because of NaruSasu amv's i see on Youtube.com
    *great website, check it out*
    o.O and i got over mah phobia...hence why i read your story. Did i say it awesome? Oh i did? Well then, let me say it once more.
    I LOVED YOU FIC ABSOULUTELY LOVED IT! AND IT'S ROCKS ! YOU ROCK!
    ok, ttfn,
    ta ta 4 now.
    Ciao baby! (it's mah thing, don't flatter yourself)
    Bee

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