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Reviews for Satiate

By : macy
  • From ANON - Greenie (too lazy to log in) on January 02, 2006
    I really like this story.
    I find it both funny and very interesting
    and I encourage you to continue!
    Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^

    ~

    Greenie, The NinjaKnight
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  • From ANON - blondie on December 29, 2005
    UPDATE! PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - didi kat on December 28, 2005
    You've got a really good begining for this story. Please continue, I want to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Addiction on December 23, 2005
    OH! SO GOOD! Its like a cig after good sex!
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  • From ANON - AZNDRAGON on December 22, 2005
    OMg... Narusasu is the best! You rock!
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  • From ANON - temptingping on December 22, 2005
    Great story so far and well written. Love it and look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on December 22, 2005
    Love your story...keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - fucktheuglymarks on December 21, 2005
    Oh, so good! Keep writing or... I'll kill this stufed bunny!
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  • From on December 21, 2005
    Haha! I love the omakes. Hilarious! ^_~

    The only problem I have with this chapter is that Sasuke seemed almost a little too ungrateful for all that Naruto's done for him. And Naruto almost sounded like he really, really wants Sasuke to work for him, despite all the insults and unappreciation Sasuke was giving. Sasuke, even though he was pretty much raised rich and proud, should at least show a little gratitude.

    But otherwise, the fic is fine the way it is. ^^ I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Mina Harker on December 21, 2005
    The other reviews that didnt like it can go suck a fuck, I think this has everything a great story needs, and it's AU people, that means its not cookie cutter NARUTO. She has the right, and ability to change whatever she wants.
    So in closing, if you dont like the story, you're a big stupid.
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  • From ANON - Mina Harker on December 21, 2005
    Ohhhh! Love the plot! More! I crave more!
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  • From ANON - Mina Harker on December 21, 2005
    This is soooooo goood!
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on December 21, 2005
    I'm loving your story this far, so keep going with the next chapter. I really like your style of writing and the way you describe both character, so continue your good job!
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  • From ANON - Lalalalala on December 11, 2005
    I figured that the second chapter would clear some things up. But please don't update just to respond to reviews...
    Anyway if YaoiLover is the same yaoilover from here http://www.livejournal.com/community/ff_anbu/51887.html#cutid1
    then she can't talk.
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  • From ANON - Emina on December 08, 2005
    o.x ugh, now I'm confused... after reading the other reveiws... I'm confused whos' WHO! ><

    Man, I think I got Sasuke and Naruto's places in the story mixed up..

    But, that should be another issue you should work out, try to be more obvious when you're portraying a character, because I couldn't tell the difference of either of them ^^;

    If anything, I suggest you rewrite it and get a beta, I'll be glad to read-over your work for you, if you like.

    But, if anything, I like your idea.
    Just keep at it, and if you need some help or anything, my AIM screennames are IIHeavensDriveII or Vote4SasuNaru. feel free to IM me when you see me on.
    And my email's xxHypnotic_distortionxx@yahoo.com. ^^
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