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Reviews for The True Intentions of Kyuubi

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  • From ANON - not importtant on July 02, 2006
    nice story so far. o and hinata's fathers name is Hiashi
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  • From ANON - Kitty Taisho on June 29, 2006
    I liked this stry so far. though it did weird me out a lil at the end of the first chapter. @-@ the mental image is stuck....gack >< i must read yaoi to make it go away! Keep up the good work though! ^_^ *runs away to look for sanctuary (aka yaoi)*
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  • From ANON - a reader of your story. on June 18, 2006
    not bad. I think that it wasn't too creative in the beginning, but you did good on how you found a very valid excuse to have Naruto move into the Hyuuga complex. I liked that. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - jared on May 21, 2006
    love the story hoping for more soon
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  • From ANON - Artemus on February 13, 2006
    yo love it write faster! Please : (
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  • From ANON - rabidbutterfly on February 05, 2006
    THE MISSPELLING IS GONNA KILL ME.
    it's JIRAIYA by the way.
    and you need spellcheck.
    words yoou repeatadly misspellled-
    bastard, Kaiten, actually, kuinoichi, miserable, thought, rise, dramatically, shopping, person
    THAT'S NOT EVEN ALL OF IT. OR EVEN REALLY SOME.
    do you even re-read this??
    it'a a great plotline, though.
    just revise (&continue!!)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2006
    great story keep it up :D
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  • From ANON - GotenXiao on January 27, 2006
    If you want a program that has spellchecking, I'd recommend downloading OpenOffice (www.openoffice.org). Tis free, and is open source. Mostly compatible with Office, too.

    Good story, nice plot, and I'm willing to give you some leeway on the grammar/spelling due to the Wordpad thing >.>

    Ero-sennin = Jiraiya
    Hinata's father = Hyuuga Hiashi
    Hinata's sister = Hyuuga Hanabi

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  • From ANON - maoloch on January 09, 2006
    Looking forward to more
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  • From Harpra on January 09, 2006
    Okay good story would like more. The name o f Hinata's father is Hiashi. update soon later
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  • From ANON - kage kitsune on January 02, 2006
    the Hyuga clan leader and Hinata and Hanbi's father is Hiashi
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  • From ANON - Kaid 009 on January 02, 2006
    You have a nice story going but your forgetting a few things. First of all Hinata's mother died so why is she here! I didn't think you would forget the Hyuuga's head's name, it is Hiashi of course, let me repeat HIASHI. Please don't get me wrong I think you have a great story and you should continue just put my info to good use.
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  • From ANON - Mamut on January 01, 2006
    Nice! Please write more !
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  • From ANON - Another Commentator on December 29, 2005
    Sorry bout previous review about comment on the pricing. 298,000 yen is 2,980.00 which is more than reasonable for custom made formal wear.
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  • From ANON - Another Commentator on December 29, 2005
    This is rather well written, besides some small errors that could be fixed through having a beta'er or some such. Just one thought though....298,000 yen for a hiori (sp), that is roughly $29,800.00 (if this is normal pricing for formal wear, dont hurt me, just thought that I would bring it up, since if it was that much, Naruto might have made a comment on the price). Besides that, near everything is perfect.
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