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Reviews for Toxic Kiss

By : flowsweet19
  • From chinohana on November 25, 2005
    buuuuuuuuuuuuuut... you DO need help. ggod for a start, but hey, no ones perfect right? ^^
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  • From chinohana on November 25, 2005
    awww... poor naruto getting compared to sasuke... stop sakura from bitching about!!! this is good! i rated 4!!!
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  • From ANON - Michiru on November 23, 2005
    Um... first of all, I can't really consider this a story. It's too short and there's not even a semblance of a plot. Secondly, the warning you included for language was probably more appropriate than you intended. Please remember to check for grammar and spelling. Honestly, it doesn't even look like you tried.
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  • From ANON - screamguy on November 23, 2005
    what is this? It's too short, and uh, no offense but I think you need to rewrite it O-o . . . . . I mean . . . yeah . . . cheesh, you're just being plain lazy. . . . it has potential for so much more . . . has a good title name tho
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  • From ANON - Yaoi Fan on November 22, 2005
    Man, you should get a beta or something...you really need to check your spelling and sentence structure. When someone talk you start with " and end with ". And please get the names right. Who's sasukse...did you mean Sasuke? saskuse-un ...should be Sasuke-kun. And try to make it a little longer. Since it's so short I don't know what to say about the story plot and all. I could give you a much better opinion IF you redo this whole chapter again. Ja.
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