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By : TheSockMuppet
  • From ANON - Sakura-teme on November 26, 2005
    OMG that is SO worth contiueing!!!!!!!!PLEASE continue!!!!!!*puppy-dog face*
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  • From ANON - lo on November 23, 2005
    Nice beginning, it was fun. I would like to see what you are capable of.
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  • From ANON - claire on November 23, 2005
    this is good! update soon!
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  • From ANON - Yumi on November 23, 2005
    One word three syllables CON-TI-NUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Reyn on November 23, 2005
    well, you've caught my interest ^_^
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  • From ANON - The Dragon\'s Lover on November 23, 2005
    Yes. Continue. Now.
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  • From ANON - TheSockMuppet on November 22, 2005
    Thanks for your great reviews, people! They really help to keep me inspired. I'll update it as soon as I can, I promise! And well Amanda... to tell you the truth, I don't know ANYTHING about doctors, hospitals or stuff like that, so I made a stupid mistake there, yes. Or... we can just say that they all were VERY quick learners...or something... xD *goes off to hide in a dark corner*

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  • From ANON - Amanda on November 22, 2005
    Hey there! Like the first chapter, you get points for originality (to tell you the truth, I like the cliches. Hehe.)

    However... I have somewhat of a problem with their ages... To be a doctor you normally graduate from highschool(say you're 18), then go to University for four years(22), then go to med school for four years(26) then do at least a two year residency(28-30)... so by the time you get out of everything, you're going to be nearly thirty or older... but if you aren't aiming to be realisitic then it's fine, I suppose. Just thought I'd point that out.

    Thats all! Keep writing!

    Amanda
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  • From chinohana on November 22, 2005
    AAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! this is sooooooooooooooooooo good! this is the practical first encounter!!! let's make a deal; i'll hurry up with the update of Rainy Day if YOU hurry up with the update of ths one!!!!! okay?!
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  • From ANON - Kenz on November 22, 2005
    THis is great havent even seen this till lookign at your profile
    Im glad I did to I love this just like I lvoe your last one please
    pleas please please please pleaseeeeeeeee cntinue both of them.
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