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By : Mija
  • From ANON - saelani on October 28, 2006
    a rash my rear end...yeah, sure Iruka, just keep telling yourself that. I loved it. Keep it up. Iruka is digging himself such a deep hole that Kakashi should be able to use it as a bribe for years worth of sex.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 25, 2006
    Needs major editing done to it with all the spelling and grammer errors. You have a good plot though and your lemons are great.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 21, 2006
    i'm hooked.better reveiw next time,i'm too late as it is.....
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 21, 2006
    Why don't people realised Naruto used rasengan,taught by Jiraya and sasuke doesn't heal like Naruto,who has a demon fer %$#& sakes!The Sanin left leaf after tragady in their lives,how com Sasuke can't?I know,to Oro but really,why wasn't Itachi being dealt with?I think the whole massacre is a sham of some sort.
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  • From ANON - snow887 on October 14, 2006
    OMGYOUUPDATED!!!! *squees insanely* I LOVE YOU *tackle/glomps* i just checkk aff.net saw saw there were 3 more chapters and i bounced around my room ^^ poor kakashi and poor very confused iruka, all these chappies are just getting better and better. and its okay that there is no smut, because there will most likely be a good amunt of smut later on *pokes you* >:D
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  • From promise2003 on October 13, 2006
    I decided to sit and read the entirety of this in one sitting. That was quite a bit ago and this is what I have to say...

    Chapter 2-oh, poor Genma...I love Genma. Why did you do that to Genma?

    I really liked the third chapter...yes, nothing happened in it that was terribly exciting, but the premise was great. I loved the fact that you showed Kakashi had made and error and how it affected him and Iruka...it was good.

    Chapter 5-who says you aren't good at lemons...I think you are lying ;) I do think that it had a lot to do with the fact that it was an anonymous ANBU member (that is so obviously Kakashi...ghee!)

    chapter 6-I loved the way that you portrayed Ebisu as an annoying idiot...even more so than in the manga or the anime. I loved it cause he really irks me.

    Chapter 7: awwwwwww that's so cute

    Chapter 9: I absolutely love the way you describe Iruka...yes, he's taking bottom in this story, but you still portray him as strong and virile. Perfect and exactly how I would picture him. It is great to see that it such a turn-on to his lover too. :)

    Chapter 10: It's so cute how Kakashi knows how to get under Iruka's skin. Ha-ha

    Chapter 12: Love the fact that Naruto plays dumb, but isn't...very cute. :)

    I really hope that you continue this soon because I really like it a lot.




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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on October 13, 2006
    Poor guilt-ridden Iruka. I do like this fic, regardless of the errors that were previously pointed out. I think you do a wonderful job with characterization and pacing. Our ANBU is sounding more and more like Kakashi, isn't he? I think it would be funny if he turned out to be Genma -- not likely, but funny. Thanks for yet another quick update.
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  • From ANON - Gypsy_Willow on October 11, 2006
    The sex scenes are so good they make my inner fangirl melt but I also like the emotions that you've put into the story and how the guys are having to work through these things. I had to go back and read chapter 9 again to remember where all this left off and I was reminded of how much I like how you write Iruka, your discription of him was perfect. I hate weak, crying Iruka and you don't seem to forget that he is a man he can be a little emotional at times but he isn't going to collapse into tears at every confrontation. Glad to see you haven't forgotten this fic and can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - The_Iron on October 11, 2006
    Mija- Beautiful story, I really like where the plot is going. Your writing is simply a pleasure to read whether with or without smut. It is clear to see that you have potential to become a great writer. Despite your wonderful and creative ideas, the overall presentation needs more work to say the least. Simply rushed and careless, there were too many grammar, spelling, and usage errors to count, making your work hard to read and fully enjoy. I for one never knew that it was possible to relive a quilt. Last I remember, they were only stitched. Please, please, consider getting this otherwise wonderful work of authorship beta-ed or at least spell-checked. Thank You and Keep Updating.
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  • From ANON - ZeldaFitz on October 11, 2006
    Wow, that was a quick update. I just love this fic. Will Iruka's mystery ANBU be making another visit soon? I'm sure Iruka's kind nature, as deeply buried as it is, will make things right with Kakashi. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Broken on August 29, 2006
    Wow! This truely is an awesome story! I do hope you write more, and soon! I have a feeling I know who the Anbu is... that or I am just wishfully thinking ^.^ I look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - shinofan70 on July 23, 2006
    please update soon!! i'm getting hooked XD
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  • From ANON - Raeshi on July 18, 2006
    Great story. The mystery of the masked ANBU. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kiasca on July 12, 2006
    I love this fic >_< I was so happy when I saw the last two chapters.
    I can't wait to know who this misterious AMBU is.
    Hope you muse sticks around so I can see more chapters.

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  • From ANON - snow887 on June 09, 2006
    guh...you updated.....I LOVE YOU!!!!!! *glomps you* i thought you wouldn't ever update. i'm so happy i was wrong. those were very smexy chapters *drools* please update again soon.
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