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Reviews for Body Over Mind

By : onesickmind
  • From bluedemon92 on December 27, 2010
    I really enjoyed reading thins. Kisame's who attack on Itachi had me thinking. I pity Itachi and the over civilized cultured life he lived which resulted in Kisame raping him.

    Poor Itachi.
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  • From ANON - ariacairam on November 28, 2007
    OMG!!! This is one of the best Kisaita fics I have ever read. I'll be waiting anxiously for updates!
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  • From ANON - Ksuhi on October 16, 2007
    Please, please, please! I would love to see an update on this! I loved the style of this, so brutal and chilling. I can't wait to see what happens next to poor Itachi-san!

    Good luck with your writing!
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  • From ANON - grace on April 29, 2007
    the description was great, and I love your writting style. Kisame was so cruel! Wahhh! Great job, you should write more.

    -Grace
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  • From ANON - firecat`1991 on April 13, 2007
    I have a suggestion for a one shot that I think you may be interested in, and it's not often found. By the way, rockin' story. The idea I want to propose to you is Kisame/Sasuke BDSM, bondage, rape yadda yadda. *Winks* The works. think ya up ta it? E mail me back with the answer please. I'd like to read it if you do it when you're done.
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  • From on February 18, 2007
    Please, PLEASE, finish this someday! I don't know how many times I've read it since I've started haunting this site. It's great as a one shot but the summary promised me Uchihacest! Uwaa! I want to know what you had planned!
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  • From ANON - Dead on February 06, 2007
    Okay! So you know of my recent obsession between these two and today i did a search for the Ita/Kisa stories i used to have in my faves so i could go back and see how others interpret the pairing and such, and you KNOW that this is where most of my inspiration came from. Well, at least in the ideas that you've tackled with this story...(even though i know I have read a lot more of it than everyone else because i have your old master file! *gloat*gloat* MWAHAHAHA!) Anyways, I saw this one and remembered that you, in fact, have not even updated this at all!! WTF! Come on now. I know you have lots of content, AT LEAST enough for chapter two. I just love how you explored Itachi's aversion to pain and the way you make Itachi become totally submissive. Your ideas are quite inspiring! Come on Sick! On with the blood and puppies you tease!!! Don't MAKE me go review Dead Brother again!!! *snort* Plus, look at the responce you have gotten with just the first chapter. This deserves further concideration.

    Okay, off to do something else...

    XD
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  • From Menow on January 16, 2007
    I'm sorry, and then I go through some of your reviews and I get to the little puppy review... Is this the stuff you normally do? I think I'm in love.
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  • From Menow on January 16, 2007
    I can do nothing but sing praises for this fabulous work of art. You say that this was your first try at a domination fic? Well, you must have an incredibly analytical mind to be able to so well capture the emotions behind the need to dominate. Primarily, it is so one can feel superior. Many domination fics tend to focus more on a character's desire to posess another. (For example, the word "mine" is drastically overused in many d/s storylines) While I agree that the idea of 'possessing another' is what makes for great d/s relationships (smut), many authors tend to forget that the root of that desire is usually backed by some need to feel superior to others. Which is why I liked this story so much. Itachi's arrogance drove Kisame to prove himself with a VERY hardcore lesson. And what a lesson it was!! (excuse me while I fan myself for a moment) Because it wasn't just about sex, it was about total annihilation. Well done! That stuffy pretty-boy had it coming to him! I also liked how you showed the 2 sides to Kisame. First, showing total control with that which Itachi thought inferior to him (boorishness), and then becoming a servant (tending to him) with that which Itachi thought he lacked (civility). Talk about a real mind-fuck.

    Thumbs up on the dialogue and characterization, too. The dialogue was actually spectacular. Kisame is a grown man and a killer, and he sounds like one. His words are strong, damaging and experienced. Also, I do think it's better with an in-character Itachi. It just makes the whooping that he receives that much more delicious. Take that you arrogant prick! And I like how you can relate this to a Naru/Sasu relationship as well; monster vs. genius. Kisame's right, having to work hard for things does make you stronger. That's why I like Naru-seme stories; that, and I like to see arrogant pricks begging on their knees for sweet mercy that they will never receive.

    If I knew how, I would recommend this fic for an award. Alas, you will have to settle for being one of the few that make it to my favorites list. Thank you, I will enjoy this again and again, and I look forward to reading your other works.

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  • From ANON - fluffypunk14 on December 09, 2006
    That.........was........awesome!!Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Boo on November 09, 2006
    Update!!!!! You said a few more chapters....
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  • From ANON - Oztan on October 08, 2006
    This sound really good. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on September 15, 2006
    Funny,i never thought of Itachi as someone unable to endure pain...of course there is pain and there is pain!!!!!!(the kind that lasts for months or years) and there is nooo doubt it changes you and makes you beastly and once its over(oh but the memory never goes away) you do despise those who have not survived it also,it is one of the major differences in perception between the young and the old).Somewhat.It also makes you empathetic..no matter how unpleasent the person if they have been wounded harshly or crippled you understand them some what.It certainly makes heroin adiction understandable,however in the end its ilegality brings more pain(whats with that anyway,why is it illegal?...if it was perscribed think of how many lives would go so much smoother and less crime,less violence,less bad parenting..its sick in a way,its legal in England,you can teach school and be on heroin)End rant.So sorry!POOOOOOr Sasuke ,what the hell is gonna happen
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  • From ANON - $$$ on August 28, 2006
    you haven't updated in a looong time... plz update! It's very good!
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  • From ANON - Jojo on August 16, 2006
    I've never read a Kisame fic before; nice job! I like some of the things you came up with, like how Itachi wouldn't have much exsperience with pain because of his natural talent, and Kisame's pride. I would love to see Itachi try to metally torcher Kisame with his Shringan (do what he did to Sasuke, and make him relieve his past, but its ends up with Itachi disturbed by Kisame's childhood!) Just a suggestion...
    Well, it was very interesting and a good story to test imagenation (of a dark nature). = )
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