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Reviews for As The Leaf Turns

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  • From ANON - vashta on November 21, 2005
    Hey, you can't please everyone. If someone can't tell you why they dislike your fic, don't worry about it. I think this chap was good, but I don't want to see a lemon between Naru and Tem, it would scar me!
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  • From ANON - Marielle on November 21, 2005
    ...And now my head is going to explode...!


    Cool chpater...


    Does Gaara know about Temari/Naruto?


    And whoa whoa whoa... does Naruto know about Gaara's advances on Sasuke?! That was unexpected! Just wondering, b/c it' never mentioned by anyone in any of the other stories... that is... unless you're going to have them bring it up one night over dinner in a bar... drinks heavily involved of course. Which then proceeds to the two demon vessel to get into a huge argument, and then a physical fight for a bit until pregnant Chouji and Sasuke (not preggers, of course) jump in the middle, and break it up...



    That would be awesome to read!
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  • From ANON - vashta on November 18, 2005
    I like Ten-Ten, so I am good. It is nice to see a little bit of everybody, I love Sasu/Naru, Kaka/Iru, and Shika/Neji, but a nice change of scenery is good! Well, as always great writing.
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  • From ANON - Marielle on November 17, 2005
    Can you have my fanfiction babies? I love you!


    This story seems sooo awesome, and it's only the first chapter!

    Ebisu, if I'm not mistaken, has one of the other Oro-clones? I might be wrong. (if so, sorry)


    Awaits next Episode... :D
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  • From ANON - vashta on November 17, 2005
    Very good, the transition is nice. I don't like Hiashi, never did. Are we going to have a main pairing, or is this just going to encompass everyone? Is this before the current chap of "Not You Too!" I am trying to fix a timeline in my mind, because of the whole Shika/Neji baby thing right now.
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