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Reviews for Self-Reliance

By : theninjakitty
  • From CianisDeRolionus on February 08, 2008
    I'm sorry that people are harassing you to update. It aggravates me too. This story is a masterpiece and like all great works of art: time is the key ingredient. I love your writing style and the fluidity of the language you use. It's beautiful. This is the only mpreg fic I have ever read and actually like!! There's actually a reason as to how Sasuke got pregnant, and not just "oh in my world men can get pregnant!!" Wonderful and original idea with the Sexy-no-Jutsu!!! Once again I will say this is an amazing story and I eagerly anticipate the next chapter! Thank you for all the chapters you have posted so far.

    Kind of off topic: I love Irrated!Femme!Sasuke!!! Soooo cute! Naruto and Sasuke are perfect for each other!!! ^_^ That's my fan-girliness speaking ^_^ I love the flaws in their relationship and all the cute moments they share! Cant wait till the kits are born! That's going to be a rollercoaster of enjoyment!!!

    ~Cianis DeRolionus
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  • From MissMayumi on February 07, 2008
    haha, I must congratulate you on the fact that Itachi isn't that evil in this fic. Most stories with a Naruto mpreg had Itachi show up and threaten the babies and Sasuke most likely kills Itachi.

    In this story, it seems Itachi is like rooting for his brother to have babies.

    Atleast I hope so. mebe they can be friends!! :D

    Update soon!
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  • From hikarichan20 on February 05, 2008
    This is my first time reviewing this story, but I must say I am completely enamoured! I love it. It's not a typical Mpreg either... usually it's kind of cheesy, but I love the way you've developed your plot. Even pregnant Sasuke is as IC as a preggo sasu can be. haha! I am sorry that you've had to deal with crappy reviewers yelling at you to update. I dont post my fanfics on this site, but I usually dont even read my reviews. At least not all right away. I'm like you - I write for myself and nobody else. If the idea wants out, I let it. Nobody can force it.

    In case that unfortunate day comes that you restrict your stories to your LJ page - I'd like to be on your friend's list if that is ok. I dont really post on my journal - just use it so people can reach me for rping, and so I can keep up on my Anbus. XD. When you see someone you dont know friend you... yeah that's me.

    Sincerely... jenjen.
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  • From Jien on February 05, 2008
    Please don't post only in LJ. I tried loking there and can't find Self-Reliance. Maybe you could give me links when you update and alert your readers like in FF.net, I was wondering why you haven't updated for almost a year. Not that I'm harassing you or anything but your fic is really nice and I was wondering if you stopped updating already. LJ is not really convenient.

    More power to you. =^.^= Update soon (encouragement tone)
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  • From VRon8899 on February 05, 2008
    I actually forgone doing much needed studying and paper writing to read this all the way through...the hysterical quotes i could pull from this...are too numerous to count! I really wish I started this earlier and I can't wait till you do update--at your own leisure of course!! Awesome so far..can't wait for more!!!!!! ^____________________^
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 05, 2008
    Hi-
    This is the first time I've picked this one up, so that's why I haven't reviewed before. I think this story is great. I've really enjoyed reading it. I'm going to check out your livejournal site to see what you write that you're trying to submit. I have to admit, I'm really curious since I'm working to do the same thing in a couple of different genre's (never a good idea right?) I'd love to hook up with another writer. And I know just how hard it is to write stuff you want to submit after having so much fun with this stuff. It flows so much easier when everyone knows your characters and the locations. and the fact that no noisy pestering editors will be hashing over your baby (I mean manuscript.) I'd love to chat. Let me know.
    Slave
    NarutoKakashi@live.com
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  • From imbar on February 05, 2008
    I really like your story, please continue with the excellent work. And to the evilish disease-ridden turkeys who insist on saying nasty things to you, may they be attacked by rabid fangirls and get painful rashes on sensitive parts of their anatomy. Update in your own sweet time. (Just pretty please have mercy and don't drag out the torture of waiting for too long)
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  • From Dreamfool on February 04, 2008
    Soooo Haappyy. An update. I really love this story. I love how only the mother can pass the Blood-limit. I love how Sasuke tricked Naruto into gettting him pregnant. I love Horny Kyuubi. I love Preggers Sasuke. Not too crazy about the Hyugacest (as some who is adopted that is my greatest fear. Unkowingly falling in love with a sibling or close cousin). I love the male version of Sexy-no-jutsu. I love how Naruto cracked down on Anko. I love how Sasuke went down his list of sperm donners. And I positivly adore the whole kitchen scene between Itachi and Sasuke.
    I'm really looking forward to the next update.
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on February 04, 2008
    I absolutely love this fic! I've been checking FF.net everyday to see if there was an update! I hope there's more chapters up soon! Thanks!
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  • From Imagy on February 04, 2008
    I love your story dear~!
    Sorry to have seemingly fucked with it,though.
    But I haven't done anything to change it--honest.
    I just stuck the other 6 or so chapters in there for all the other AFF.net junkies like me to read.
    So, please don't get mad if/when you ever get back on this site and see it.
    I wish you'd finnished it, but it seems as though you've given up on it so far...
    Well, any ways, I hope you're well
    and your story is still amazing, even unfinnished ^.^

    ~Nikki
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  • From Breek on December 06, 2007
    Please, please, i'm begging, write more soon? this story is reeeeeeally good, and I'd love to see(read about) Uchiha-Uzumaki babies. This is very original and fascinating.
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  • From lovemeornot on June 05, 2007
    A very good story and althoy=ugh some may think its just another in the long line of the same theme I happen to like it cvery much although the Neji and Hinata thing is kind of nasty I love the story so far and i hope you continue to write it.
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  • From moonbaby06 on February 20, 2007
    Big Question! I know it's probably annoying by now but I was wondering if you ever finished the story. I got up to ch 15 in FF.net but then you got those evil reviews and you stopped saying something about going over to live journal ^_^; can you please send me the link to the finish part in LJ or will you finish posting them either on FF.net or AFF.net. I really like your work and I would like to see the ending! But if you need some encouragement here it is: Keep up the good work love, I can't wait to see what happens next!
    ~Luna~
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  • From ANON - blue on December 10, 2006
    whoa! that was the best MPreg fan fic i have ever read yet. i thought the end of chp. 10 was oh, how can i say this, more like a total aaawwwweeeee-fest!^^ i loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - William Givens on October 18, 2006
    This story is absolutely wonderful, but it's been a little too fluffy for the last couple chapters. Please, if you ever continue this story, make at least one more chapter of angst--Sasuke's confrontation with the Council, or anxiously waiting in the mansion for Naruto to return from the mission, as examples. This has got to be one of my favorite NaruSasu Mpreg stories ever. You are very informative with all of the info on what kinds of foods pregnant people can or cannot have. Oh...and you didn't specify who Shikamaru's girlfriend was...I'm assuming the "troublesome woman" in question is Temari. Who's Kiba with, for that matter? Please resolve these questions if you ever come back to this fiction.
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