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Reviews for Under The Enemy's Roof

By : hangingday
  • From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on November 09, 2005
    Awww... I feel special that you mentioned me in the chapter *melts with fuzziness* Okay, you're every reader's dream! :) You update VERY quickly, and regularly and if not for the fact that I'm currently having some blasted finals, I'll be writing a LOT longer review T__T Yay for SasuNaru! XD XD XD The plot thickens when Naruto's 18??? Hmm... so when he's legal and stuff??? :P This story is VERY interesting ^__^ In its own kind of way [There are stories that are unique because of the smut *YES!*, for the humor, for the angst, etc, etc, but your story is interesting because it makes me think of MANY, many things that could possibly happen in the future] If you noticed, I think I'm giving lots of guesses about what's going to happen soon/next [and you don't want to spoil anything away *mock sniffling and pouts*] So yeah. This story really makes me think :) I can only imagine what would happen in the future :D

    Love triangles-squares are nice and interesting, but it's also kinda overdone. ^^;; I dunno, but a insane, badass Gaara is really appealing to me :) And a Neji who wants peace and happiness XD [is a NejiGaa/GaaNeji fan :P] I wonder when's Itachi arriving....... I just know it, he's got something to do with Naruto's condition [which probably has something to do with the Kyuubi anyway, from what you hinted when he fainted, about having ultra-sharp senses and stuff...] :) The suspense is killing me [along with my exams X__X] hahaha =) Looking forward to some more! ^______^ *hint*Itachi*hint*

    PS: The "order" by Sasuke really ROCKS ^__^ A very overprotective *brother*, ne? Poor, poor Sasuke. He still doesn't know that he loves Naruto, even though he EXUDES the fact that he really does. And man, that's some nice, compromising position you got there :P And ack, I don't hate Sakura *that much* right now, but she's still annoying for me :P Kinda. So yeah. And the love polygon stretches!!! ^___^

    SasuNaru RULES :) Keep up the good work XD

    >> Seto's Darkness
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  • From ANON - Ciar on November 09, 2005
    Update soon, I really want to see where this is going.
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  • From ANON - sasunarufangirl on November 09, 2005
    continue! :) More soon please XD Nice story! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on November 09, 2005
    I love UkeNaru. Take one taste and you're hooked for life. Esp. when it comes to love triangles...or in this case, a love square. Wait...it could become a love pentagon when Itachi shows up!

    UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!

    PS Though I love UkeNaru, I'm tired of Sasuke winning Naruto in the end in love triangle fics! LET SOMEONE ELSE WIN!
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  • From ANON - Ari on November 09, 2005
    That was simply superb! *Lifts pinky out and places it on her lip thoughtfully* I sense a love square, ne? Am I right? Because it certainly seems that way, with Sasuke, Neji and Gaara after Naruto an' all... I didn't understand why Gaara alluva sudden decided that Naruto was interesting. Was it before, or after he beat up Naruto? XD I hope there's gonna be some Itachi action there! I want to see what Itachi does and all that blah. I know Itachi won't be after Naruto, but it is rather amusing to see his reactions, yanno! ...Anyways, update soon, yah?

    ~Waiting for your next update *Bounces around and squeals* Make it soon, MAKE IT SOON! ^___^
    Ari
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  • From ANON - phoenixdown7 on November 09, 2005
    Your writing is simply captivating. I wasn't even going to read a fanfic, because I don't really have much time, but I just glanced at the first page of yours and I couldn't stop reading. Your use of allegories, metaphors, and description is superb. It just adds a whole new depth to what could very likely be a unremarkable story in another author's hands. I, like you, breathe SasuNaru. So I was glad to see that this story, which I enjoy so much, is going to end up with that pairing (right?). My favorite fics probably have to do with love-triangles above all else, so this fic is already a perfect match for my tastes. Thank you so much for sharing this fic, and good luck on the remaining chapters. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Dansu on November 09, 2005
    I love your new chapter, I like how sasuke doesn't know that he is in love with Naruto. and the way his acts like naurto is his. Um... is Neji and Garra in Love with Naurto too? Are the three of them going to figth over Naruto ?? Will Naruto get over what neji did and become his friend again , because neji was the only one naruto seem to like. Or will he forgive Sasuke for the past ??? And when is Itachi coming in? and will Naruto remember Itachi? and did Naurto kill his parent , but he just can't remember doing it , or did Itachi do it ???? scine Nauro and Itachi used to played together when they where younger , will itachi be nice to Naruto ? will Naruto be nice to itachi , and how will sasuke act with this????? I can't wait until you updata again.
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on November 09, 2005
    Yay! Character torture! Sounds wonderful! Thanks for updating so quickly too! I can't wait for the love triangles to develop even more, or the er...polygons! LMAO! Anyway, great update, and can't wait to read more! ^_^
    .....so many exclamation points!
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  • From ANON - macy on November 08, 2005
    hehehe. the note is a brilliant idea. it caused me to break into uncontrollable giggles. naruto's first few days sure are eventful. thanks for the super duper fast updates!!!!! i'm feel so excited whenever i see that there's an update! i just hope you don't fail your freshman year though ^^;;
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  • From ANON - ceruleus on November 08, 2005
    I like your story ~!!! And I'm having exams now! Not supposed to touch any fanfics till my papers are over..
    But ya fic is so good that i just have to come back for more =) So keep on writing!! I love the tension between the four
    boys.. yeeaahh for 'everyone loves Naruto' story !!

    Sadly, gotta go back studying.. hope a new chap comes soon !!! And i'll be happy~!!! La~~La~

    =p,
    Ceruleus
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  • From ANON - Kit on November 08, 2005
    A very well written story! I like your characterization and am very curious abot what happens next!
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  • From ANON - mitsune on November 08, 2005
    this story is great! i hope you update soon i really want to know what naruto's "condition" is, is he like a were wolf he changes into this kind of monster whenever he looses his temper? and does this mean he's already an Uchiha instead of an Uzumaki? since the he was adopted? good luck with the next chapters gambatte ^_^.
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  • From ANON - Seto\'s Darkness on November 08, 2005
    That's IT, Sasuke!!! :) Whee, I love the way your story progresses XD Sasuke is slowly developing some sort of "not-so-brotherly-love-that-is-love" thing for Naruto-kun :P I love ittttt.... Err. I can't imagine how Itachi and Naruto were friends as kids. Itachi being a normal kid is just.... creepy. ^^;; I guess I'm so used to him being creepy, evil, dark [and handsome!] person ^__^ I still feel as though the 'blood tests' and the 'close family ties' Mrs. Uchiha was talking about is a fraud. And that Itachi is still a member of an Akatsuki [just that they are probably medical freaks or mad scientists :^^:] And is Naruto having the Kyuubi??? Hmm. Interesting ^__^ IT keeps getting better and better!

    --I really love Neji, I really DO, but... I don't like NejiNaru all that much, and I love Sasuke way better~! *Sasuke-love!!!* LOL
    --A creepy, homicidal Gaara is very in-character :) Whee. Go creepy Gaara! [I also don't like GaaNaru... XD]

    Keep up the good work! ^___^

    >> Seto's Darkness
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  • From ANON - YJ on November 08, 2005
    OOOHHH.....Will there be GaaraNaruto too? hope so...3 to 1...COOL!!! Your story is simply great! I rpomise to write better reviews next time! Do update soon! Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Trekiael on November 08, 2005
    Cool, good, more, tough not much NejiNaru, please but Neji and Gaara is ok). Oh, so Sasuke might begin to feel something for his sibling, tss tss, that's bad (no it's not :) ). I think Itachi killed Naruto's parents as a way to have him cause he's interest in his condition, the style was his. Anyway, good luck! Ja ne!
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