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Reviews for I Don't Think You Understand

By : WaterShadow
  • From ANON - Lanier on December 11, 2005
    That was wonderfully done. very tasteful and yet erotic. The only thing I have to comment on though is that I am left wondering what Kakashi thought as he was "showing" Iruka. I am hoping and guessing that you will put some comments from him in another chapter. Other than that your first lemon was awesome. I went back and found where the typos I mentioned were in the last two chapters. The first is in chapter 31 when Sakura confronts Iruka in the office. It is at the end of the sentence where she askes Iruka what he has done to Kakashi and then makes a visible effort to control his chakra. I am guessing that was supposed to be her chakra unless I totally read it wrong. (which wouldnt be the first time) The second is in chapter 32 when Kakashi is fighting Gai. It is the sentence just before he makes the statement that he doesnt want him anymore. Gai's name has an r stuck on the end of it. Sorry for being so nit-picky. They just stand out so much since the rest of your chapters are so awesome. Cant wait for the next one.
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  • From ANON - Vox on December 11, 2005
    That was a great lemon! You have such a special way of writing, it's really nice, and I hope you'll keep on doing it even when this story is finished
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  • From ANON - A-Person on December 11, 2005
    O.O Not only is your overall work on this story fabulous, but that was just plain...HOT! droool. And I like Iruka's little struggle to decide if he wanted to hurt or thankd this helpfull stranger. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Elecia Pena on December 11, 2005
    Wow! So very hot, but with incredibly good emotional content without excessive sappiness. If I didn't know better, I'd swear that wasn't your first lemon scene! Didn't expect Kakashi to just go for it given his hesitancy with everything else (neither did Iruka, I bet! He!). I was guessing Iruka would try to control things when they finally got to the act of penetration, to prevent anyone from getting hurt due to Kakashi's lack of experience. Guess that scroll was really informative! Also tells your how much Kakashi's developed. Can't wait to see what kind of lemons you write when you've got more practice under your wing! Whew! Gimme me more!
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  • From wherdatcomfrom on December 11, 2005
    Bravo. Very well done. And the suspense was awesome. I look forward to the morning after, a truly bonding experience.
    And I am absolutely dying trying to figure out who is the mysterious scroll dropper. Hurry up and tell, I'm going bald from pulling out my hair.
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  • From ANON - black_hole on December 10, 2005
    nooooo! damn you finals! but hey good luck with it!
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  • From ANON - A-Person on December 10, 2005
    Amping up the anticipation are we? What does the next scroll say? Well we shall find out!
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  • From ANON - Saske's Iris on December 10, 2005
    sigh this just intinsifies my hate of finals they get in the way of all the good stuff damnit.
    Good luck on yours though, and good luck to me too shit am i gonna need it spent to much time reading stories not enough reading acct. text...tear.
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  • From WindCharmer on December 09, 2005
    Oh phooey my last review was deleted. Anyway, I really am a bit shy about reviewing, I really don't know why ^^ but I really do have to review this fic. I just completely adore it. EEK! Now I can't wait to see what is going to happen. But no worries, because I love your consistent updates. Looking foward to it! =]
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  • From XHidaka on December 09, 2005
    Yikes, this wasnt updated when i was surfing earlier... awesome!! As for this cliffhanger... I'm almost scared what's going to go down next... after they were finally so cute and happy!!!!! But, I'm sure it willbe worth the ride. Gah....! Keep writing, I'll keep reading!
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 09, 2005
    Yeah I agree with you, cranberry sauce is good whenever. It is worrysome that Iruka seems to be in a different place than Kakashi is at the moment. And that last scroll seems to be troublesome too. Although it is nice to see that Kakashi has regained much of his focus back and is not plagued by visons of Gai any longer. Study hard... and then hurry back with the next chapter. Heee
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 09, 2005
    Heh heh heh, I love that chapter.. Isn't it amazing how wonderful everything seems after an event like that. *grins* Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Komikitty on December 09, 2005
    Erk.
    I think everyone who's heard those words and what they lead up to fears ever hearing them again.
    Because almost nothing good EVER comes from the conversation starter "We Need To Talk".
    But the story is gonna have a happy ending right?
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  • From BrucesGirl on December 09, 2005
    Oi! Little Shadow... Cranberry sauce is yucky!
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  • From ANON - Saske's Iris on December 09, 2005
    good god put the sause down its past good. awww squeezes kakashi plushie he is sooo cute! heh right ot the point so glad the glich is fixed and we get more of your wonderful chappies it was most distressing when i wasn't getting my fix taken care of. I am just all sorts of curious to know what this scroll contains. I mean the line we gotta talk can;t be too bad cuz they are all like wahoo in love er at least lust so...what is it?!?!? giggles and squirms in my chair i sooo cna't wait for tomorrows update!
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