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Reviews for I Don't Think You Understand

By : WaterShadow

From ANON - Elecia Pena on November 16, 2005
Hee! Hee! Hee! This story just gets more delicious with every chapter! It's interesting to see Kakashi rediscovering his Icha Icha series. Yeah, I agree that it's good for him to realize that sex isn't just about penetration. I can't wait to see if he brings this new curiosity to Iruka's attention. While I'm sure Iruka won't have any complaints about getting more physical, going from kissing to giving head is a major step. Like to see how they handle that. Also, yeah I just realized that Kakashi's sexual blooming has just been aimed in Iruka's direction. It'd be interesting to see how Kakashi would deal with feeling attracted (physically at least ) to people other than Iruka, not to mention how said boyfriend would react as well. Jealousy, anyone? Hate to think that Iruka might have competition. Actually, I've been wondering how Kakashi would react to seeing someone else flirt with Iruka. I can't imagine he's felt jealous before, unless it was about someone being a stronger or more skilled ninja than him. Ah well, staying tuned for the next installment!
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From ANON - YerFan on November 15, 2005
each chapt. is better XD i absolutely love the way you write this is now oficially my fav. fic XD
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From ANON - snow887 on November 15, 2005
that was so cute ^__^ i'm glad iruka showed kakashi that french kissing isn't gross,*gives iruka a high five*
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From Houseki on November 15, 2005
Ah dood I was so bummed last nite when I saw no up'd...I had one of the worst days ever, and was lookin forward to a lil idtyu, but I did notice aff was havin some difficulties throughout the day. But at least the chap is up today! And what a chap inne! I totally love how into it Iruka is now..very into it *smirks* oooh and who is the mystery scroll sender?? I think I have an idea *chuckles*

Ah the inevitable french kiss...yeah in ways it is kind of gross--especially if the one your kissin is a smoker and what not...but if you can find the one person who matches you, fits your lust, love, and eroticness, a kiss can be orgasmic. I've had only two perfect kisses. Sweet tasting, soft when need be, hard when wanted, not overly wet, just the perfect amount of saliva mixing to highten the taste buds..the numbing, buzzing feeling of your blood rushing from the excitement can make you dizzy. ahhh to find another perfect match! lol

ook i'm done talkin about kissin...makes me want to go kiss someone lol annnnnyways...love it!

Nic
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From ANON - Elecia Pena on November 15, 2005
Don't feel bad about the update. I had problems just navigating the site, so I think it was having a fit or something. You more than made up for it though! I love the idea of Kakashi exploring the wide world of kissing! It's also good to know that even though Iruka is more experienced than Kakashi, he's being just as affected! It's like he's learning how to kiss all over again! It makes him more human rather than him having a 'been there, done that' attitude. Nice twist with the scrolls! I've got a guess as to who their sender really his, can't wait to see if I'm right! I'll greatly regret when this fic is over *sob*, and I'll be hoping pleadingly that you'll start another Kakashi/Iruka fic soon after!
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From ANON - Yoru on November 14, 2005
Good stuff. The kiss scene was hot, hot, hot! I'd rate it as hot as some lemons I've read. Now, one must wonder who is sending Kakashi the scrolls. I can't wait to find out, and I'm sure it will be a shocker. Or at least, I'm hoping it will be since twists make a story so much better. 'Underneath the underneath' and all.
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From ANON - Gingitsune on November 14, 2005
Lucky you. I have only once experienced a kiss that sends tingles down my toes. Never experienced it again as the whole thing was a setup by a vicious girl wanting to get blackmail material. Anyway, when you said that Kakashi would bring the matter to Iruka, I thought that you meant that he is going to show Iruka the scrolls. Oh well. Is it Naruto?? *grins* So Kakashi is a genious at kissing and Iruka is getting sexually frustrated. Heheh I am so totally enjoying this situation. More??
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From ANON - A-Person on November 14, 2005
Ha, very nice! ^_~*
Hah, I like how Iruka was trying to stop his lust at the end. XD
Ahhhh! Gai in pink!
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From Marise on November 14, 2005
Simply put, this is a wonderfully written fic. And your frequent updates just makes reading this all the more enjoyable! ^^

KakaIru is one of my favourite pairings, but I've always enjoyed it with the awareness that it's pretty crack - after all, the characters involved barely interact in canon. Therein lies the beauty of fandom, where we get to develop and interpret characters to our liking! That said, I don't know if it's because I've not looked hard enough - but I hardly come across KakaIru fics that I enjoy (most of my enjoyment of the pairing is derived from doujinshi). Most writers tend to oversimplify their characters IMO, and you're delightfully exempt from that mold - it's evident you take a lot of care in explaining Kakashi's and Iruka's motivations, what makes them tick, justifying their nuances with reasonable interpretations of their psyches - it's all beautifully stitched together. Giving the reader a sense of "knowing" the characters enables the enjoyment of a story's development that much more - you don't just show, you explain - that makes the distinction between what could just be a pleasant but unmemorable read or a thoroughly enjoyable one where the reader feels connected (to the extent that some of them leave long-ass reviews like me XD).

And hey, not only do you take the time to (effectively) characterise Kakashi and Iruka, you do it with a rather unique spin! The idea of a "sexually-deferred" Kakashi is novel to say the least - and Iruka being the one in control in this fic - well, you've probably chanced through enough super seme Kakashi-super uke Iruka fics to understand how refreshing it is to read something different ^^;; I think canon Kakashi probably isn't as naive as you've chosen to portray him - but I'm not inclined to complain about how you're writing him as you've injected enough plausibility into this. And if anything, you've made sure to articulate a key fault of his - he's so damn emotionally awkward. Iruka may be the outwardly blushing one in the manga, but Kakashi's the one who's got real problems with dealing with feelings (his uptight, repressed childhood personality; having no consistent close ties prior to Team 7 to facilitate a long-term experience of nurturing and developing sentiments of love and affection - Obito died so soon after "awakening" him, and Rin is presumably dead as well). I'm really enjoying seeing him stumble his way through with Iruka in your fic XD

I wish I had the resolve and confidence to write a KakaIru fic where they're neither too typecast nor OOC as you've managed - the only thing I've done is an experimental porny PWP to practice writing t3h smut XD Hats off to you for crafting something with a comfortably-paced plot and well-dimensioned characters, especially in a pairing extremely plagued by stereotyping and not enough "reading underneath the underneath", as Kakashi himself would say X3
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From on November 14, 2005
the first time i ever french-kissed someone, i ended up with their gum in my mouth (gross!!!)

great chapter again. i really like the pacing of this story.

ps: WHO is sending those scrolls?! (isitnaruto?)
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From ANON - DragonLady953 on November 14, 2005
You know this is definetly becoming one of my favorites, and I'm seriously enjoying your after-chapter remarks, very funny. Also, I laughted my butt off when Kakashi went to talk to Tsunade about his problem, that was perfect! I can't wait to read more!
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From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on November 14, 2005
chuckling ..just had to go back and re read the chapter on advice bwahaha that is still too funny!!
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From ANON - Saske\'s Iris on November 14, 2005
the scrolls don't stop...well that is good cuz they are helping iruka out and kakashi doesn't know anything so they lead him in directions to explore..which is good and the lip nibble was way hot so i applaud the writer!!!!!!!!that was an immensely satisfing chapter wonder if it is naruto writing those..he is taking a very keen interest in the two and plays pranks so u know he is clever or is it a party as of yet unmentioned ...give us a hint has the scroll writer been active in the story thus far? I AM SO GLAD you update regularly i...just...HUGS...thank you!!
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From ANON - Ruka on November 14, 2005
I'm sorry for not reviewing the last few chapetrs, but I just HAD to keep reading!
Ack this is such a good story! I love it to pieces!
PLease update soon!
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From ANON - fyredevyl on November 14, 2005
I was having trouble with aff last night too. I couldn't add the rest of my chapter for one of my stories. It was pissing me off. At least it's fixed now. Yay!
On to the story: Great new addition. It seems like Iruka is a great teacher at many different things. *snort* It's really cute though. I can't wait for more and now I'm very curious as to who is sending the scrolls. Naruto is the first person that comes to mind. I wonder if he and Sasuke are in on this matchmaking together? That would be funny.
Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading your next chapter. ^_^
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