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Reviews for Maybe Now (Beta'ed)

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2005
    like ur story please update when u can love it^^
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  • From RandomDispatcher on November 11, 2005
    oh i love it!
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  • From ANON - fnw on November 10, 2005
    Hmmmmm......I'm liking the SasuNaru interaction, don't really care about the rest, but.......keep writing.
    Yes, please begin The Plan.........NOW :-D
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  • From ANON - cladissa on November 09, 2005
    0.0 interesting..
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  • From ANON - krickets on November 09, 2005
    he he this is funny and i wanna see you do more!
    im not usually into yaoi and wow...you seemed to
    have done every male character that way
    :D its cute
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  • From ANON - dar on November 08, 2005
    MWAHAHHAa let sasuke's evil plans commence!!!! lets hope there is some smut in between the plot ^__^ Please continue!!! cliffhangers are bad for the heart! GOod job!
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  • From ANON - didi kat on November 05, 2005
    *snickers* Poor Naru-chan. How's Sasuke gonna make him have a baby without the sexy-no-jitsu?
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  • From ANON - Starwind on November 04, 2005
    That was a good start. I'd definitely like to read more of what happens.
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  • From ANON - ki-ka on November 04, 2005
    OMG! OMG! THIS IS SOOO SWEET!!! I LIKE THIS SASUKE ^_^ [lightning just hit my house from all the evil yaoiness..O.0]..can't wait for the next chappie-ja!
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  • From ANON - shimomizu on November 04, 2005
    cool i wanna know HOW the hell sasuke gonna make naru-CHAN have his babies~ science can't prove that, maybe u can?
    and ANBU is not only for Jounin as Chuunin can become an ANBU too(Itachi prove that)...ANBU is an abbriviation of "ANsatsu senjutsu tokushu BUtai" or Assassination Tactics Special Forces is sort of like hunter-nin... wait ...hunter-nin IS ANBU....but not all ANBU is hunter-nin ok..i'm making u totally confuse here X3 haha and yes! u must continue your story~
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  • From ANON - heero on November 03, 2005
    hmmmm... well update soon..............................................
    it's funny
    i reaally love sasuke and naruto
    wow that's new gaara and lee well its ok for me i love it..........
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  • From ANON - nacht kind on November 03, 2005
    ABF#$(gr9zserhO)%W$%YQ(GER%(Q!! That was amazing. This has to be one of the best 'sasuke-ganks-naruto-with-the-intention-of-reviving-his-clan-while-awhole-bunch-of-other-people-get-hooked-up-in-the-process.-Watch-the-fangirls-scream-YAY' fics I've ever seen....and really, there's quite a few of them. Fantastic characterization and descriptive elaborations. I can't wait to see where this goes.....

    I beseech you to update, I'm giddy with joy,
    ~Nacht
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on November 03, 2005
    This a nice start. The flow of the story is a little too fast though, making it hard to follow. Sometimes I couldn't figure out who was speaking. Also, other stories I've read write "shin obi" as one word "shinobi." Of course, I'm certainly not fluid in Japanese, so the way you spell it could be correct, but I kept pausing over that word every time I came across it, interrupting myself. I would suggest maybe making it one word....just since most readers are used to it being written that way. I don't know, it could just be me.
    Other than that, this story has great potential. Spelling and grammar are top notch. I can't wait for more character interaction. Hope you update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Luminaris on November 03, 2005
    I just love, loove your story. It's just great that you've gone all the way with the yaoiness, and turned all the guys gay! Now they'll all have to use Sasuke's jutsu, or the will be no kiddies in Konoha.. Thanks for a very original and funny and good and intriguing and.. well you get the picture. Thanks for the story, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - purpleprose on November 03, 2005
    nice story. hope you update soon. keep on rockin. m/
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