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Reviews for Hinata's forever love!

By : Mattleigh
  • From ANON - Hinata-chan-and-Neji on October 29, 2005
    me and my bro love this story plz make more!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - The Gandhara on October 29, 2005
    Although I thank you for adding to the NaruHina pairing, which is rare to find around here, I must be sincere and tell you that I don't like this story. It's very bad, and even if you just want to throw them into bed together, you should embellish it a little. Konoha isn't that big that Hinata cannot go home if they're on the other side of the village. And an ANBU exam should be much more than just pummeling a training dummy. Also, if you're gonna mention a past relationship of Hinata's, don't be done in just 2 lines, either tell more about why Hinata did it and how it was, or don't mention that relationship at all. Else, it looks like a patch thrown there for no reason.

    You began the story impliying that Naruto and Hinata aren't even friends, and yet suddenly Naruto wants to bed her. That's not in Naruto's character. Also, he just suddenly was aware of Hinata's feelings. That doesn't look smooth.

    Sincerely, I think you should edit this story a lot before continuing.
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  • From ANON - Anime Insaniac on October 29, 2005
    Update, I am especially fond of NaruHina fics, and I've read quite a few lemons on my own so I'm hoping this one will turn out well.
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  • From ANON - Backlash Wave on October 29, 2005
    Update soon please. In my opion ther aren't enogh Naruto/Hinata fics out there. Plus I wanna to see him as Hokage.
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  • From ANON - Daedalus on October 29, 2005
    This so needed to be longer...But it's good work so far, despite the few mistakes here and there.
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