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Reviews for Mochi #9

By : forgetmenow
  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2008
    da asco odio el yaoi y aunque sea naruko sigue dando asco
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  • From ANON - Bekah on August 12, 2006
    I agree, you should do another chapter with Kakashi and Sakura. Then tell us how it all wraps up! ^^. This was great, and the love scene though slightly disturbing was really good. I'll be looking out for another chapter, so don't leave me hanging!
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  • From ANON - anime_girl_13 on June 04, 2006
    OMG!! That was awesome!!! Please please please do another chapter with Sakura and Kakashi!!! I'm dying to see how the love potion would affect THOSE two!!!
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  • From LunarAlchemist on February 11, 2006
    I'd love it if you continued this fic... it's pretty well-written, and the plot is hilarious.
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  • From ANON - Naomi on December 16, 2005
    OMG! That girl I tell you was amazing, especially the 2 cond chapie!
    I think You're such a good author,

    Hey, just a little tip....hehehehehe why not make naruto get pregnant, and stay as a girl for ever?

    Well is jsut an idea, but it probablly sucks...your stories rock and I don't want to kill it.

    But why don't try e-mail me?

    I love e-mail, and I love to have friend!
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  • From ANON - great on November 29, 2005
    do a next chapter ^_^ Kakashi and Sakura, woo hoo and you write so well it would be a great chapter.
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  • From ANON - Nasis on November 20, 2005
    Very good! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - kiotana on November 19, 2005
    *song and dance* that was cute and smexy!*winx*
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  • From ANON - Hikata on November 16, 2005
    O_O Wow. Smexy! I loved it. Please keep writing and update soon!
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  • From Leech on November 05, 2005
    Mm .. the story was funny, I have to admit. Spelling was fine besides few smaller mistakes such as "Shizune" instead of "Shizuna" in the first part. The first part of the story had a better ring to it than the other. The pairing is just so ... weird. So, I can't really say anything about the actual lemon scene 'cause I skipped it. The other parts were good for a laugh or two though.
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  • From ANON - Elk on October 30, 2005
    Wow, this fic is execellent! I can't wait to see how this fic will turn out in the end, I applaud you! *applauses* I LOVE the plot, and you've done really good in the lemon. Please email me once you've updated, I will definitely review once the next chapter comes up. Heh heh, can't wait to see once Sakura sees Kakashi and falls for him...Very good! ^^ Love the chapter and continue on writing, it's really one of a kind!

    -Elk
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  • From ANON - luthorlover on October 30, 2005
    Ooh...I really like! I love SasuNaru -SO MUCH- and I really like the way you're handling it! I especially liked that Sasuke said that he loved Naruto by name. Very sweet. I like the idea of a little unexpected KakaSaku as well....

    xoxo,
    Monica ^__^
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  • From ANON - Marik_Lover on October 29, 2005
    I love it you have to do chapter three please.
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  • From ANON - mE on October 29, 2005
    Definitely "Good enough for another chapter"!! That was so sweet! I love you NaruTO! I can't wait to get more. I loved all of it.
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  • From XHidaka on October 29, 2005
    Definitely good enough for another chapter! Seems incomplete, what happens with Sakura? I'm a huge Narusasu fan, and I'd like to see what you do with them ^_^
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