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By : Nushi
  • From ANON - One Who Rides On The Wind on November 04, 2005
    Ooh... a rare pairing, I must say. but I LOVE it!!!!!! Hayate-san, why'd you have to die?! Even the purple haired ANBU lady loved you! *sniff* No, I wil not cry...
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  • From ANON - krickets on November 03, 2005
    at first iw as reluctant to read this one but i have to say i really like it
    you have great characters and i love the way the plot is developing
    the first chapter had a few typos that were kind of distracting i would just re read it

    oooh i LOVE that song in fact that whole CD....have you ever read
    the whole poem "the highway man" by alfred noyes?? its even better then the song
    there is so much detail like the jealous stable man who ratted out the lovers and
    all kinds of mysterious ghostly angsty sadness
    eeek! must listen to it now!

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  • From Gigicerisier on October 29, 2005
    HayaSaku!! OMG!

    Thank you, thank you, thank you..... I can't say anything other than this since I am overwelmed! YOu see, HayaSaku is my most favourite coupling in Naruto.... but no one but me didn't seem interested enough to write fics or pics...


    >Dedicated to my friend, who was thoroughly upset when she saw Hayate die a few days back while watching an episode of Naruto.

    Oh... yes... how gloomy death Hayate had..... by the way, please say Thanks to your friend as well since she made you write this story..


    I really love drawing this couple..even thogh I am not reall good at.... *sheepish grin* but I am even worse at writingl. so.... your story is like a treasure to me.... I really cherish it.... *smiling dreamy* and this fic will be best treat for me on Halloween! Maybe I should give you a treat as well....

    I always imagine Sakura could be a lovely partner for Hayate if he was still alive....as she is a medical ninja... then she probably can heal his chronological illness... then in return.... he can teach her some more advanced ninjutsu and taijutsu... I really love to see where Sakura summon dancing of crecent moon....

    I love your story so muchas it gives characters more depth.. not only Hayate but other shinobis too...


    >“Nothing, he’s coming.” With that Hayate was tackled to the ground and a flurry of scuffling took place at Sakura’s feet.

    Genma rolled over and tried to pin Hayate to the ground, grasping one wrist and trying to grab the other. A hand on her arm pulled Sakura out of the way as Hayate got his feet under him and Genma ended up on his back.

    “Careful, this could take a few minutes.” Kakashi moved them back a few more paces until they finally had to jump out of the way.

    Hayate ended up belly down in the street with Genma sitting on him and holding his arms between his shoulder blades.

    “Can I have a drink now?” Hayate sounded bored.

    “You’re no fun Gekkou.” Actually they enjoyed wrestling after Hayate felt better. Genma liked engage him because he’d usually win, of course only because Hayate didn’t care if he lost. Plus Hayate felt good enough for it and didn’t feel like his lungs might burst after the exertion.

    “How impressive,” Sakura commented dryly. Genma was of course grinning at her. “Taking on a man who just got out the hospital less than fifteen minutes ago.”

    “And a sick one!” Genma added happily.

    “Yes, even more impressive because he didn’t even try to win.” Sakura smiled as sweetly as possible before ducking behind her teacher as Genma made a grab for her.

    I really love this interactions between Genma and Hayate... it is too shame that we hardly see these kind of relationship in real Naruto comic... but I am not intersted in anime Naruto....I don't like the idea of using so many orginal characters....


    >Sakura was laughing into her second drink of the night at something Asuma had just said when Genma walked into the bar and noticed them. He shot a glare at Kakashi and walked over to the table. This made Sakura erupt into a fit of hysterics, tears leaking out of her eyes to trail down her pink cheeks.

    The amused look on Hayate’s face as he watched her made Genma roll his eyes.

    I wonder why Genma did that....


    >Sakura seemed to be thinking hard about this, staring at Genma before looking over at Hayate. She appraised him carefully. He in turn watched her practically molest his upper body with her eyes. It wasn’t an entirely unpleasant moment for him.

    molest? *snicker*

    So, Hayate actually like being watched by her? Whoohoo ..... You know, you have fueled my hayasaku love even more.... I have to draw some more..!


    >“At least I don’t think foreplay involves dragging a sharp object across women’s skin.” A senbon sunk into the wood of Hayate’s chair right between his legs. He didn’t even blink, just paused before finishing the motion of taking a drink.

    Hm.... Genma can get a woman by using his acupuncture techinique and his handsome looks I guess....

    >Genma put his hand under the table and between Hayate’s legs, jerking the senbon free. Hayate ignored him and the implied threat. He was so used to having the senbon either prodded into his body or shot at him it had little effect.

    Humm.. Does it mean Genma actually fancy Sakura?? You know GenSaku is my other favouite...

    I might offend you but my favourite couplings are

    1. Hayate+Sakura (hell yeah!)

    2. Sasori+Sakura (Kishimoto definitely made me a rabid SasoSaku fan.... )
    This coupling might offend you since Sasori is a mass murderer and a freak in some sense....( I have had a quite fierce debate (well kinda) about this coupling with some one on Sakura fansite.... she supports Gaara+Sakura... she said Sasori was a total freak who turned all human into dolls....but I always feel Sasori is pretty similar to Gaara.... you see... some GaaSaku fans actually love SasoSaku as well.... and these people are the one who made me draw some SasoSaku.. too.... and of course some pure Sasori+Sakura fans!


    3. Genma+Sakura (I don't know why exactly I like this coupling but it is just appealing somewhat....)

    4. Haku+Sakura (After reading a brilliant fic called The Purest on fanfiction.net)


    I wonder why most of the shinobis I want to couple Sakura with have to be dead (I like Naruto comic... but I don't like Kishimoto in some ways since... he killed off too many interesting characters! )

    .....maybe I should seriously consider about making some Sakura+ Dead, yet Sexy Shinobi sites....

    IF I remember correctly, you have once mentioned that you couldn't write other kunoichi other than Sakura..I can't draw other than Sakura either... but probably is the diffrent reason... it is because I am total Sakuratard and I don't love enogh any other kunoichi to actually draw them... *sheepish grin*

    >Poor sick Hayate, he’s so hot and sick and needing of care. Makes me wanna play nurse. Naughty nurse that is…

    Hum.... so are you also gonna make Sakura a very naughty nurse as well? *snicker*
    I can imagine Hayate's mortified face... when he saw Sakura who was cladded with a smexy nurse suit....
    it may cause his temperature high and passed out? then 10 seconds later, he woke up to find his head on her soft knee where he can clearly see her cleverage... then he pass out again....*evil grin* Should I do some scribble with this image? maybe I should *quickly jotting down this idea and grin even wider*

    I might do some naughty pics since Hayate's birthday is coming up..... ..


    I am sorry to have written such a strange review but.... I was so excited that I couldn't help it!

    Anyway, I hope you will update this HayaSaku masterpiece soon since I can't wait any much longer.... *sigh* Keep up writing! (I am going to put your fic on my favourite story list! )

    Now, excuse me since I have got some hayasaku, sasosakuHalloween pics to finish....*grin*



    Gigi

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