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Reviews for Necklaces

By : typhoonjax
  • From ANON - Lolly on November 06, 2005
    Very nice so far! I enjoyed every word of it. I can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - Dark Avenger on November 05, 2005
    shit woman, how much can you possibly torture me? sasuke, naked, NOW. .... yeah, it's now 4:41am here, so forgive the babbling. Ask me tomorrow what i really think, i may have a coherent answer for you... i hope.

    ~Dark Avenger
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  • From ANON - Dark Avenger on November 05, 2005
    damn girl... this is just.... oh my holy hell. The whole Sasuke in that outfit in the club, the seductive looks. I think I melted into a little puddle of Dark Avenger goo.

    ~Dark Avenger
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  • From ANON - Dark Avenger on November 05, 2005
    Damn, hun...
    that's some hot stuff & I'm only on chapter 1. 0_0 Must... read... more

    ~Dark Avenger
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2005
    your writing style kicks ass. the humor kills me XD
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  • From ANON - naruke on November 04, 2005
    I know, I know! Reviews = love!! So here's a review: don't get offened, but you use so many words that I don't know and you write so... umm what's that word? Confusigly? No it wasn't that.. Mixed? No, it wasn't that either.. But maybe you get my point. It's just that I don't know when there's action and where peoples are, and stuff.. But you can write! I have studied just abourt 6 years of english so I don't know all the words your using.. AND DON'T GET DEPRESSED BECAUE OF THIS!!! YOU CAN WRITE THE 'ACTION'-SCENES, SO I KNOW WHAT THEY'RE DOING!!! AND THE STORY IS GOOD!! TOO,TOO GOOD!!! I JUST LOVE IT THAT SASUKE THINKS HE IS THE UKE AND NARUTO IS THE SEME!!!! NARUTO ON THE TOP IS TOO RARE!!! WRITE MORE OF IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on November 04, 2005
    OMG!! How's that possible I haven't read this before?! I totally love your fic! It's amazing, the style, the intesity of emotion and how realistic are your characters. The dream is simply beautiful, how you were able to create a feeling of intimacy between them. Oh, and drunk sasu! Pitifull like all drunk people are, and funny, and still himself. awesome, I can't wait to read more!!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on November 03, 2005
    I really like the way this story is going. I hope Sasuke doesn't get raped or anything like that. Your descriptions are good and the story seems to have a life of it's own. I hope you update as soon as you can! I wish you the best of luck and I will be sure to send you a review when you update. If it is possible, could you please send me an e-mail when you update so I can check out the updated chapter?

    Please and thank you.
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  • From kaze on November 03, 2005
    Very nice...I like your writing style! I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - macy on November 03, 2005
    waaa!!! i jsut started reading this fic, and love it! i can't believe the narutoxsasuke beach scene was just a dream ;_; awww..and it was so cute too, although sasuke was a bit OOC, so I guess a dream it is then. i love sasuke's POVs. it's really amusing to read. great job with the fic. i like the way you write and how it naturally flows. awesome. looking forward to more. thanks!
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  • From ANON - Tatemshope on November 03, 2005
    Reviews=LOVE! :) I'm more than happy to oblige. I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT WAS A DREAM! That was so mean I almost cried. Seriously, there were tears in my eyes. Please please please update soon! I need Naruto to have atleast a glimmer of happiness. I hope it's Naruto that Sasuke just saw at the bar thingy that he's out and that Naruto will take care of him! Bring on the love!!!!!!!!!
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  • From on November 03, 2005
    that dream sequence was so moving! gah! you're a great writer- keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Lady Gray on November 02, 2005
    great story. I love your writing style. thanks for writing.
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  • From ANON - Neome21 on November 02, 2005
    I remember! reviews = love. I was pleasantly surprised when I read this. It's good, in character, just the right length and there really just aren't enough stories out there that are developing emotions from the sides of both boys. I like how its not ... i don't know i guess "easy" is the word that fits best. Sasuke didn't find naruto right away, naruto didn't start making out wildly with Sasuke in his dream like in so many dream scenes. Its building up the emotional bond while building up the attraction which a lot of people forget. So... good job! Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Komikitty on November 02, 2005
    ..they do get together right?
    ....RIGHT?!
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