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By : Duskfire
  • From oohshiny on October 18, 2007
    UWAAAA next chapter, i dont CARE if you hate the "UPDATE" reviewers, cuz IM ONE OF THEM!!! btw also, could you email me when you update this story? my email's deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From ANON - Mystic_Neko on December 23, 2006
    Is Naruto going to be a nine tailed fox demon or just a normal one? I like you story just wish that the chapters were a little longer.
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  • From ANON - Augustina on September 08, 2006
    I just had to say that I love your story so far! It's refreshing to read something that's DIFFERENT for a change. I hope you continue to update!
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  • From ANON - Elesiel on January 14, 2006
    heh I reviewed, am that little poky new beta of yours :P
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  • From ANON - dakara on January 06, 2006
    lol. so sweet, other stories?? I must read them
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on December 19, 2005
    It's sweat.................make it more angsty!!!!!!!!!!! Like have people start to hate them ever more and throw Gaara in (but not as a bad guy)!!!!!!!!!!!! I mean it's to sweat!!!!!!!!!!! I like it but tone down the sweatness!!!!!!!!!

    -The Update Monster
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  • From ANON - n3k0 kittie on November 18, 2005
    i'm loving this please make more its just the cutest thing ever
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  • From ANON - gallatica on November 17, 2005
    lovely AU. nice setting and all that.
    it would be better if you made naruto open up more, perhaps in the next chapters?
    ^_^
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  • From ANON - AmethystRei on November 16, 2005
    yup, yup, awesome story, when I read the summary and even the title, I was thinking this story was going to be based or something similar to the book "Shadow of the Fox" by Ellen Steiber but wrong was I.
    Instead of getting a replica, I got a new story to add to my top fave reads ^^ yeah! although there was some little details pointed out by dyingstar-elipsis so we wont go over them again but, yeah.
    Awesome story, keep it going, please.
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  • From ANON - Akasha on November 16, 2005
    I like this fic a lot. ^_^ The second chapter sorta moved quickly, but that's okay since it was still cute. hehe.
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  • From ANON - dyingstar-elipsis on November 16, 2005
    Woa. This story has potential but things are definitely moving along too fast. You're barely touching on anything, let alone go in depth. Like in the first chapter, won't the class be surprised at Sasuke's show of affection towards Naruto? Won't Naruto be surprised/embarrassed to see Sasuke so concerned about him? I think the reason for Sasuke's 'liking' of Naruto should be better justified as well.

    As for the second chapter, this is where everything starts to rush, a LOT. You need to slow down, elaborate and explain, especially about feelings and reactions. The gang of bullies should be shocked that someone as prestigious as Uchiha Sasuke is protecting Naruto. You need to elaborate a bit more on the village's hatred towards demons like Naruto as well. From what I can gather, it seems that there're some physical differences between witches and demons. Maybe you can clarify on that? Then all the interactions between Naruto and Sasuke, there's just simply not enough content. In addition, this story has to have a stronger sense of direction, a stronger sense of plot. Right now, readers don't really know where you're heading and there doesn't even seem to be a central plot.

    So my suggestion would be that you should rewrite this chapter, if not this story, because this is really a very good story and there's so much potential. And it would be best if you can get a beta to help you correct your mistakes, as well as plot develoments. So I wish you all the best with future chapters and I look forward to hearing from this story soon. ^^
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  • From ANON - Kero-chan on November 15, 2005
    still cute ^^ i'll admit it's quick but it's all fluffy and so cuuuute ^^
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  • From ANON - Fallen Dragon on November 15, 2005
    Nice Ficcie! I give it two thumbs up lol. d(^-^)b Update soon! Is Gaara gonna make an appearance?
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  • From ANON - kijo kasumi on October 26, 2005
    don't care what others think, so far i think it very well written for a begining...so don't leave me hanging what next?

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  • From ANON - tsuki on October 26, 2005
    I hope to see another chapter soon! Im really liking it!
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