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Reviews for Do Over

By : KitsuneFun
  • From ANON - numb on July 12, 2010
    i love the story so far i can't wait to find out if naruto and gaara end up ok or not i got to emit naruto is stronger then i. i would have whent back to that pool to freez in the cold water in the night but enn so can't wait for the next chapter =).
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 25, 2009
    I really do love this story and I'm glad I found it. Though I have to reread it to see what I missed ^^; But I was reading your AN at the beginning of the latest chapter and I have to ask, how do you do it? how do you continue to write your fic in your own way without bowing to reviewers out there who rather read something else? In other words, how do you stay true to your fics instead of following some strangers comments on how they want to read it? Sorry I'm--nevermind. I'm glad I found this with great help from someone who pointed me in the right direction.
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  • From asm613 on June 22, 2008
    11 chapters into the story. Sasuke is even in his 'get my dobe back plan'--one would think that telling him about the faked letters and the conspiracy of his manager to break them up would have come up by now. Is Sasuke the retard or do you think your readers are, to forget something like that.
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  • From asm613 on June 22, 2008
    High school aged--gang banger dropouts owning their own kareoke business__that's not far fetched at all.
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  • From asm613 on June 22, 2008
    Didn't see much point to this chapter. The whole point to this meeting at the restaurant was for the 3 of them to talk. It was filled with a flirting host a flirting waitress naruto flirting with the food_ and no talk. Why hasn't Sasuke yet told Naruto about never receiving his letters and the letters he received were written by someone other than Sasuke. 7 chapters into the story and Sasuke hadn't told Naruto that yet. And why would letters be the only way they communicate? Hello telephones, internet, text, etc...I was repulsed by Temari's fag hag behavior with Naruto.
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  • From ANON - cocopower1 on March 05, 2008
    So much angst-I love it. Naruto and Gaara's relationship is uber cute. However, I am somewhat surprised Sasuke hasn't told Naruto about the whole “Kisame relationship sabotage” plan.

    ~Thanks for the update!

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  • From gilraen88 on March 05, 2008
    wow! I love your story and now I actually can't decide wether I want Naruto to get back with Gaara or Sasuke. though I really like the GaaNaru pairing I still think Sasuke should get another chance because he didn't want to break up with Naruto in the first place.. gaah! can't make up my mind x3 but I hope you update soon so I can see which on Naruto will choose :D
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  • From ANON - Ayame_Uzumaki on March 04, 2008
    OMG i love this story please update i beg you
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  • From serenagold on March 03, 2008
    oh my god... Sasuke is actually going try to help Naruto get Gaara back?? Unthinkable! This is something I thought only Hinata would do... it must be love!


    Ok. That settles it. The only way this thing can end happily now is with an awesome threesome. Gaara deserves to be with Naruto and Sasuke deserves a reward for helping his love out counter to his own wants and desires. It is the only way. (heheh =^^= they'd be happy.. I'd be happy.. everybody'd be happy.. its a win-win situation!)
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  • From ANON - jonoave on March 03, 2008
    Great story! I've been waiting forever for you to update! This is definitely one of the best stories I've found on Adultfanfiction; I've never liked AU much and they rarely work, but somehow you make them just right and really awesome! I'm currently hooked on Do Over and Orange Crush, please update soon! And thanks for coming up with these amazing stories.
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 30, 2007
    Hello! I'm a little late for the party, since you've posted 16 chapts before I've even started. I'm only halfway and wanted to stop and say "DANG I LUUUUUUV THIS FIC!" Not to gush, but this is just the cutest. Yeah, I'm a ItaNaru and SasuNaru fan, but GaaNaru(is it is vice versa) is just too neat to pass up, especially when there's a jealous Sasuke involved. Selfish punk! Ahem, sorry about that...anyway, the scene where they exchange rings is so ... warm and fuzzy.

    I'm hoping Naruto doesn't leave Gaara to give Sasuke another chance, but well, there's that word "angst" that seems to pop up in a lot of fics, so I won't be surprised or horribly upset (ok, now I'm lying!). LOL!

    Will write again once I read 16 ... see ya!
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  • From ANON - animelover on October 30, 2007
    Hello! I'm a little late for the party, since you've posted 16 chapts before I've even started. I'm only halfway and wanted to stop and say "DANG I LUUUUUUV THIS FIC!" Not to gush, but this is just the cutest. Yeah, I'm a ItaNaru and SasuNaru fan, but GaaNaru(is it is vice versa) is just too neat to pass up, especially when there's a jealous Sasuke involved. Selfish punk! Ahem, sorry about that...anyway, the scene where they exchange rings is so ... warm and fuzzy.

    I'm hoping Naruto doesn't leave Gaara to give Sasuke another chance, but well, there's that word "angst" that seems to pop up in a lot of fics, so I won't be surprised or horribly upset (ok, now I'm lying!). LOL!

    Will write again once I read 16 ... see ya!
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  • From ANON - Damp on October 30, 2007
    The tears started to fall in earnest as Naruto could feel his legs give out beneath him and he fell to the ground, banging his knees in the process, ‘Why did this have to happen,’ he could feel his heart clench painfully at the realization that he had lost Gaara, if possible it was worse than the feeling of having lost Sasuke three years earlier, but he had a feeling that unlike the raven, Gaara wouldn’t take him back, ‘It’s all my fault…’

    It's not your fault Naruto!!!! Whatever you think, it's not your fault!!!

    -Damp *cries along with Naruto*

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  • From KoibitoFemme on October 30, 2007
    PLEASE DON'T LET IT STOP HERE PLEASE UPDATE. I am a huge SasuNaru and GaarNaru fan but the way you portray them in your story I have to side with Gaara being for Naruto they are so happy and sweet together. I am about to get a freaking ulcer with this story its got me on my toes and I HAVE to know what happens PLEASE update!
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  • From ANON - FallenDreamer on October 23, 2007
    Okay, love this story...Loved this story so much that I bookmarked it...but where are the updates, you're killing me here. Really a great job. No rush, just letting you know that you have a fan here...PEACE!!!
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