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Reviews for The lazy Vs. The Overzealous

By : BeautifulPoison
  • From Merchant on November 23, 2007
    Well it starts interesting. Too early to build an objective opinion.
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  • From beerbelly on October 07, 2007
    i love temaXshika pairing XD for an initial chapter, i like it already ^_^ please update as soon as you can!
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  • From deathbysand on September 01, 2007
    update!
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  • From ANON - ardenilia on January 06, 2006
    hi....i'm a big ShikaTema fan, and i wanna thank u for writing a story dedicated to this pairing. please update soon. i'm not familiar with aff.net's update alert, but if you've updated, can u mail me? thanks. keep writing and i want more ShikaTema lovin'?

    Love,
    a new fan,
    ardenilia
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  • From Leech on December 11, 2005
    Mm ... how odd, I somehow overlooked this story in the past. Oh well. I think it's too early for an honest review, since there wasn't that much plot to begin with, but I'm sure you'll get to that eventually. The pairing is everyones (yeah, optimism) favourite couple, your writing style is really fluent and it pretty much fits the picture of the original story. Good job so far :)

    And thanks for your review. I'd like to point out that you might want to post this story up in the Het-section too. It's a shame to be overlooked since there aren't that much ShikaTema fics out there anyways. Just leave an E-mail when you update if it's not too much trouble, I'd really appreciate it. I'd hate to miss the next chapter.

    Write more! ;)
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  • From ANON - polished_soul on November 14, 2005
    it's good! you should keep going!
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  • From ANON - IK on October 31, 2005
    O.O! well all i can say isso far so good man
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  • From ANON - Church on October 31, 2005
    FUCK YEAH I LUV THIS SOOOOOO MUCCCCCHHHHH!!!! man i wonder whats gonna happen??? and i DO love Tem/Shika pairings its a CLASSIC BABY!!
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  • From Trollmia on October 26, 2005
    This is looking good. I really like the pairing, Shika/Temari. So keep the good writing-spirit up!!
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  • From ANON - Goldbryn of the Flying Monkeys on October 20, 2005
    Oh yeah...I see...writing on this instead of my story...uh-huh...whatever!! ^_~
    Just messing.
    This is awesome. I look forward to more. I will say my fave part was kankurou and his puppet...and temari's comment about gaara's teddy bear.
    Very well written^_^
    LOVE YOUS!!!!!
    Now write my story...or more on RaaHP...PWEASE!?!?!?! ::puppy dog eyes...pout::
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