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Reviews for A Break in the Routine

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - lostogg on March 23, 2014
    So, over the years, I think I've read this 8 times. Maybe more. And this time around I began to wonder if I had ever reviewed it. My bad. I usually don't leave a review unless I have something constructive to say, and I couldn't think of anything. I love everything about this story and I'll probably come back to re-read it again a few months from now. So this is really just a long-winded thank you for posting such an original and sweet fic!
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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on July 26, 2008
    I've read this story several times... excuse me if I rehash the same topics... your story is a favorite of mine.

    I laughed so hard, you really pegged Gai… the story was hilarious and heart rending, gave me a new appreciation for Gai, changed him from a dope to someone sweetly innocent in a touching way.

    Your portrayal of Kakashi was great too; the story made sense and fit well with the Naruto storyline. Your references to Anko’s sexual antics were too funny!

    “Of course, the real fun is when you dip the fingers in lye after you rip out the nails...” God I LOVE that line! And… “Hurt them when they weren't expecting it and you were breathing through a hole in your throat while they were apologizing for their reflexes.” Oh my, toooo funny!!!!

    Wonderful sensitive seduction… if only first times were like that and not like the norm… Idika’s version. I normally like things rough and violent but your story was so good it changed my views.

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  • From CrimsonEmbrace on March 17, 2008
    Congratulations! Beautifully done. A great story, complete solid plot, not just sex. Great pairing, very believable… meshing nicely, almost seamlessly, into the series. The characters stay in character very well, which is always a difficult thing to manage when using someone else’s well known characters. One of the best written stories I’ve read so far.


    In Chapter 1, Gai's Challenge is truly cringeworthy! I felt for Kakashi! Too funny! You make this pairing work great! Everyone stays in character beautifully!

    A growling protective Kakashi is so very seriously hot!



    "of course, the real fun is when you dip the fingers in lye after you rip out the nails."
    "Lye bubbled when it came into contact with blood; it was fun when the victim was made to watch."
    "Hurt them when they weren't expecting it and you were breathing through a hole in your throat while they were apologizing for their reflexes"
    "Oh look, the anger's back. And it brought friends!"

    Great lines!!!! Way exciting, makes me hot! I love dominant aggressive partners!!!!




    Chapter 4: Awwww.... what no details about the sex?! You can't get me hot with that hot kiss then skip to after!!!! Noooooooo... I need the hot and kinky details!

    This was a really good story, thanks for posting!
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  • From SumiHatake on September 17, 2007
    I'm soooooooooo not a Kakashi/Gai fan... what can I say I'm a Kakashi/Iruka fan but my best friend convinced me to read this so I did and it was really freaking good... I don't think I'll twitch now when I see a Kaka/Gai pic. :)
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 09, 2007
    This was...

    Breathtaking? Hilarious? Sweet? Sad? Wonderful? Beautiful? Awe-inspiring? Deep?

    Uhm, I think I'll settle for indescribable. Thank you.
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  • From SkippingAlice on March 09, 2007
    I love this pairing and I adore what you've done with this story, great job!
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  • From SilverPhantom on February 25, 2007
    You didn't drag me into this kicking and screaming. I figured that since I liked your GaaraLee stories, and I don't read that pairing because no one can get Gaara right(besides you), I'd try a GaiKakashi fic by you. I have to say, though, that the lye part was disturbing and yet fascinating at the same time! ^^

    Your fics are really good and I'm glad I stumbled on you! I hope you keep writing more, whether they're Gai and Kakashi, or Gaara and Lee, or other pairings!
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  • From LadyinRed21 on February 17, 2007
    I have to admit that this pairing is certainly not one I would think of, nor in normal circumstances actually read. But something in your description had me click on it even if only out of curiousity. You did a great job in making this pairing work, and more than anything else, it's a well written story. You have a very clear and directed plot, with a general flow that doesn't confuse the reader. It was actually plausible that Gai and Kakashi could be together, because you stuck to their personalities and found a clever way to throw them together through their well expressed rivalry. Your idea is creative and well thought out. This was a story I truly enjoyed because the writing was excellent. I'm going to have to go peruse your other stories now, and thank you very much for a clear and concise piece of fanfiction that was fun and easy to read.
    -Your Lady in Red
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  • From animekid on January 31, 2007
    I read this but I didn't review it

    *smacks head*

    it's wonderful; I love Gai/kakashi to hell and back and glad that someone makes it; it's really well done and goes into the mindsets, issues, and lives of both of our favorite jounin's (well mine anyway; kakashi is WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY too popular at times.)

    Extremly well done! Soon I will read all of your great writing!
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  • From ANON - kirio on December 10, 2006
    after reading all of your fanfictions i have to say: i love you ^^;
    sorry but i absolutely adore your writing! your fics are just great, i can't descripe it but i truely love them..!
    and this one...damn, it was kind of sweet i mean woah...>_< just sweet!!!!
    i just want to say: thank you so much for your writings and please please please keep writing because your works are truely beautiful and damn statisfying!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TonTon on December 08, 2006
    never thought anything including Gai could be sexy, but this kind of is. Also, its hilarious
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  • From ANON - Kunai on August 29, 2006
    Hn... I don't think I'll ever be able to look at Gai-sensei in quite the same way ever again... You've turned me into a Gai-fan! Ieee!!!

    *Sighs*

    But, seriously, this is quite the excellent story. However, since I am a yaoi-pervert, I am somewhat disappointed by the lack of lemony freshness. The somewhat awkward nature of the lime was a good substitution, though. And it was a completely logical and sensible interpretation of personalities. Very rare in a fic.
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  • From ANON - animekid or protogirl here on August 16, 2006
    whoa....I found this out of pure luck....but still I love it though ^_^ I had a really good laugh out of this and it was interesting..also love the flashback parts as well

    really nicely done...and it makes me wonder about those two now *snickers*
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  • From ANON - Phoebe on August 11, 2006
    This was brilliant. I'll love you forever for writing this. They were both so IN CHARACTER, which is excellent. Gai was so cute, and I loved the whole Anko story; I can easily imagine her being the kinky type. I haven't been reading Naruto fanfic long, but this is the first fic I've read where Kakashi is so...Kakashi. And I luuuv me some Kakashi.

    I loved it.
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  • From ANON - DirtyD on November 30, 2005
    Man I was all like no! You must be the one to have Gai's virginity Kakashi! Then I went that was pretty cool anyhow. Then I was like no gimme the lemon! Then I was like that would probably have been weird, like I was violenting GFai in some way... I never get so fangirl as I do when I read your stories, I love your writing Mal I just hate the way it makes me feel, and yet I don't.
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