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Reviews for A Break in the Routine

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - Magpie6 on November 24, 2005
    OMG
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  • From ANON - Alisha on November 02, 2005
    YAY!!!!
    NOOOO THE END!!!!
    YAY!!!!!!!!
    This was awesome!
    Congrats on it getting 1k hits btw too....
    Hehe it was really cute, I like it alot!
    Lol on the last scene I kept thinking that Gai was gonna freak out about an anerversary or something(that was the vibe it gave me), so I was actually surprised when the challenge was issued..good job!
    I really liked the whole feel of this..yay!
    Until your next fiction! XD
    ~alisha
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on November 01, 2005
    Gyah. Sorry for not reviewing chapter 4, I totally forgot, sumanu!! Anywho, you certainly have outdone yourself, I'm sorry to see this story go... well, I kinda am and kinda am not... Gai and Kakashi.... I don't know how you managed to do it, but you did. I'm in awe. Of your writing skills, your ability to tell a damn good story, your characterizations... you truly have a formidable talent. I do hope you continue on, your "Anbu" story, but for your "Break in the Routine" you did an excellent job!

    Keep up the awesome work! ^_____^

    ~Kir

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  • From ANON - RadicalArcher on October 30, 2005
    This is a great ending to your story. Genma and his "damn" every so often made me laugh, and the fact that Kakashi knew what Gai was making from the sound of the blender was a great touch. This was a great chapter, and I'm actually sad to see it end.

    I'm still working my way through the rest of your fics, so I'll be sure to post opinions when I'm done reading at intervals.

    ~RA
    "If I can't dance, it's not my revolution!" - Emma Goldman
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  • From ANON - Oboro on October 30, 2005
    Waaah!! I loved the epilogue!! So cute, so adorable!! Gai and Kakashi are an actual couple now, and it doesn't even disturb me! And yes, I will be one of the many to worhsip at the alter of Gai from now on, lol. Thanks for an amazing fanfic, and I hope to read more from ya!! ^_~
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  • From ANON - A-Person on October 28, 2005
    Great story so far! ^_^ Aren't doing any lemons huh? It's still funny! XD
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  • From ANON - RadicalArcher on October 27, 2005
    *reads Chapter 4*
    *stares, then reads it again*
    *eye twitchies*
    Wow. You made that chapter believable to me, which is pretty rare. A lot of authors don't know how to do the awkward scenes you just did, and their pieces turn into something that goes along these spine-chilling lines: "One's an experienced lover (aka pervert) an the other one's a virgin...they get it on (super explicit details inserted here!) and everything is perfect hearts and stars (and rainbows and freakin' unicorns galavanting through the fields) forever and ever, as they pledge undying love to one another!"
    This is about the time, during one of those particular stories, that I feel it is my duty to vomit because of the complete unbelievability of it and the sacchrine aftertaste that goes with it.

    HOWEVER -
    You have done it the right way. The part where Gai asked about if their kiss was oral sex cracked me up. Also, for some reason, I couldn't stop snickering when I read the part about the shower and the speech about Hygiene (with a capital H, because that's the way Gai talks about everything! Ha!). The way you write Kakashi is beyond-regular-words-marvelous, and I love it. The breaking of bedroom furniture was probably the best part of all, because when you think about it, Taijutsu masters like Gai are super strong, and it only makes sense that having hot sex (especially hot sex with Kakashi, even if it is only a "learning experience") would result in something getting broken...hell, I'm surprised the bed's stayed as intact as it has at the end of this chapter!

    I will await the next chapter with a smile (or I will run 200 laps around my house before the day is out!)
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  • From ANON - Lady J on October 26, 2005
    there is not nearly enough of this pairing.

    what a hilarious and awesome fic. BRAVO
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  • From ANON - Oboro on October 26, 2005
    OMG, I never thought I'd ever be able to read Kakashi x Gai and not get all weirded out, but you've done it!! This is definitely one of the best fanfics I've ever read, and you're one of the greatest Naruto fanfic authors ever!! I absolutely love the way you write, and it was a feat in itself to get me to read anything pertaining to Gai that was sexual (I even put this in my favorites, lol). This fic is believable and good, and had me rolling on the floor with laughter!! You've converted me; great work!!
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  • From ANON - RadicalArcher on October 25, 2005
    Congratulations. You are the only person who has gotten me to read and enjoy a Kakashi x Gai fanfic. This is brilliantly written, and I LOVE the way you've interpreted Kakashi. "Fried Brains for Breakfast" was a great scene, I laughed until I couldn't breathe (which is a pretty rare occurance, only a handful of writers can get me to do that).

    I'm going to read everything else you have posted now, because if it is anything like this story, I am going to be a very happy fangirl.

    Please keep this story going, it's marvelous!
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on October 24, 2005
    Awww. Kakashi-sensei all protective-like? Too sweet for words... =^____^= As for Kakakshi going through with it... I have no doubt you'll work in a situation quite worthy of an eye-catching reaction... Enjoyed this latest chapter, you write so well, it's so easy to follow. Keep up the great work!

    Until next chapter...

    ~Kir
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 23, 2005
    Ummm... yay? The idea of these two getting together is kinda creepy. But I can see it happening... Anyways, good job so far. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Archeeka on October 23, 2005
    :DD EEEE!!

    It's really exciting, seeing how you're validating them actually doing it--Kakashi becoming convinced to do it--and it makes TOTAL sense, they're not naturally inclined to eachother, having a "secret desire" or anything like that--it's all rationalized.

    I love that.

    And, besides that point, I am very, very curious, and somewhat disturbed, on how you knew that when lye made contact with blood it started bubbling--if that's true, I have no idea.

    Anyway, I'm EXTREMELY happy that you posted this!! :D Love you stuff--your fanfictions are bookmarked. xD

    And even if it isn't a lemon, lime is great. I can't wait to see how you would write that. And no, I won't complain that you aren't doing a lemon--I mean, hell, I said that my fanfiction Under the Mattress would have another ending where sex happened, but I have lost absolutely all motivation to do so. Also, considering it, I bet that I'm rather inept with those characters when it could be applied to sex, anyway...

    ANYWAY! I will be blistering in my seat in anticipation for the next chapter! :D
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  • From on October 23, 2005
    Lol...Wow great way to bring up the subject and end the chapter.

    Oh by the way "survival instincts of a depressed lemming" Best line ever! Lmao. Hehe Kakashi can be scarey sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Alisha on October 23, 2005
    Review of chapter 3:

    Really you updated again?! WOOT!
    YAY!!! I want to see how this works out...hehe..I'm just gonna ssume Kakashi is gonna be Seme to "show him the ropes", but it would be really interesting if he was uke..
    Anywho..I liked so much the background you added into Kakashi and Gai's relationship...
    Really loved Kakashi going uber protective and vinicative on Gai's abuser (stupid man)
    Can't wait for the next update!
    ~alisha
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