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Reviews for If All Else Fails...

By : midori
  • From morbiDreamscape on April 19, 2007
    O_O Need... more... Sequel, please? XD

    Your writing style is excellent, and yay for good spelling and grammar! Iruka is so adorable, and Kakashi is just HOT. The end. :P
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  • From ANON - chicken_wire on November 17, 2006
    :3 I'd like to see a follow up story with Iruka on a leash. XD Thanks for the yummy read. (:
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  • From ANON - puppy on February 03, 2006
    Please tell me your writing more of this...it was so HOT
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  • From aimless38 on December 15, 2005
    This was absolutely lovely! Sweet and Hot and incredibly sexy. You captured Jiraiya's personality and sense of humor perfectly. I adore Kakashi and Iruka pairings and this story made me grin with delight.

    Your writing style is very descriptive and the characterizations were marvelous. I do not consider this a PWP for the simple fact that you also described their fears, wants and needs in the story. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
    Hugs
    Amy

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  • From ANON - Sunny on November 14, 2005
    This is way beyond awemazing. You have a wonderful talent for writing, it's a joy to read over and over. I couldn't stop til then end! This is SO going to be a fav of mine. Once again fantasic job! Wow.
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  • From ANON - lo on October 18, 2005
    You write very well, but you are very wordy and sometimes your thoughts get a little cloudy. This was very fun in the beginning, but the sex scene is way too long and drawn out, and not in a good way. Try to be a little more consice when it comes to somethings. Do not get me wrong I love your descriptive nature, but after a while you get very repetitive. I hope you keep writing because you a very good. Just think about the suggestions.
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  • From ANON - Just_me on October 18, 2005
    Heheh, okay, that took me one and a half hours to read. What a story. Seriously not a bad job. It has enough angst to make you wonder if the characters are really that fucked up and such a sweet kind of ending. And a topping Iruka is soooo rare.
    I wish I could think of mere things to comment on, but I'm completly out of words. Once again, great job.
    ^^V
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  • From MakaiKitty on October 17, 2005
    Sweet, Funny, and still Incrediably Hot! I love it!
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  • From ANON - Polka dot on October 17, 2005
    That was a very long lemon, funny though, especially the spanking I just can't picture that. I had to read it in parts due to it's length, hopefully I'll be able to go back and read it in one go at some point.
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on October 17, 2005
    Absolutely wonderful -- I loved it! Hope you write another "chapter"........ ^__~ Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on October 17, 2005
    what the heck?! this only has 2 reviews?! what the hell is wrong with these people?! anyway, this was good, damn good. i loved the way it was the nice and drawn out love making session, iruka deserves, and not some random fuck fest. you protrayed their characters beautifully and captured their personalities very well. the grammar was good as well. overall, this was an excellent one-shot worthy of having a sequel. ^__^ so i'll looking foward to seeing more works like this one from you featuring a different pairing *coughs*gaaranaru or shikanaru*coughs* may the yaoi gods watch over you.

    ~Devious
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on October 17, 2005
    Wow. You guys are great. That was so well written. I really liked that it wasn't like some authors' oneshots that consist of a one paragraph lemon of a few sentences. I liked how you led up to it and the interaction between the charaters was terrific. I'm not surprised that I loved this considering your other works both done together and individually. Thanks so much for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Cim on October 17, 2005
    I love how the forplay was original and creative and it LASTED! It was great. I think you guys need to write a sequel with the leash O_O
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