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Reviews for ANBU

By : Maldoror
  • From questofdreams on November 30, 2005
    ...all I can say is. WOW. This is awesome. I mean, I'm literally tugging at my hair, wanting the next chapter, haha. I love how you wrote those brief 'action' scenes and I look forward to seeing more of those from you. I also like how you managed to slip in what happened with Orochimaru without making it seem like telling a story within a story. If that makes sense, lol. I also commend you on your characterization of Sasuke. Very focused, very intense...but in there somewhere is still vague remnants of the more volatile, emotional Sasuke and that's awesome. I'm SO looking forward to seeing this story develop as well as the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke and how in HECK you're going to get them together, lol. You kick ass. haha...GREAT job! I'm crossing my fingers for an update soon ^^
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  • From ANON - Shinigami on November 22, 2005
    OH MY GOD! I´ve never seen a fic soo good! And you can rest assunder that I don´t leave reviews in every fic I read! I love it! ca´nt eait for the other chap! kissu!
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  • From ANON - Berylia on November 20, 2005
    A very good start, a lot of tensions between the chgaracters, everyone is in character... I'm really looking forward to this one. How will this team interact?
    I love Sasuke's reflex, just like when he jumped in front of Haku's needles, damn reflexes!
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  • From ANON - Kit on November 19, 2005
    Nooo, not a slow fic:/ I allready left you a gushing rewiev at "Diplomatic Relations" so im not going to blab away again, I actually looked at this fic when I realised exactly who you where and what can I say. I love your storys, I love them! An because Sasu/Naru is my drug I am a real pushover when it comes to this story!!
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  • From ANON - Jena on October 27, 2005
    Wow....just wow. So far, this is only the second story I have read where Sasuke had to endure any form of real punishment for his running off, and the only one that has Ibiki administering the interrogation/torture. Mega kudos goes to you! This is one story I will definitly keep an eye on. The way you write draws the reader in, I read the first two chapters in one sitting. I hope you can keep going with this. As for pairing? Naru/Sasu/Naru don't care which order, or no order at all. I have always wanted to read a story where they took turns being top, haven't seen that yet...lols! So, until next chapter!
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  • From ANON - beeku on October 26, 2005
    *drools*
    this is gooood
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  • From ANON - kitsune stalker on October 17, 2005
    heehee you should have kakashi get mad about naru's mask and make him wear it, im pretty sure its a kitsune mask, ne? lol -pets naru- me love his foxiness if only hed grow fox ears and a tail -sighs- ah well dreams can't always come true, but you should make him have a kitsune mask ^_^ well great story!! email me when you update, ja ne -waves-
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  • From ANON - cfox on October 16, 2005
    Even better then the first chapter, and take your time i would rather have a good chapter then a rushed one.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on October 15, 2005
    I've been absent from this fandom for quite a while, but I think I'm going to get back into it. If I keep reading fics like this then I'll definitely restart. This was excellent. I love the way you've decided to portray Sasuke and how the story is developing. Please update soon. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on October 15, 2005
    No worries on not planning it out. You're a great author either way. I can't wait for the next chapter and more info on Orochimaru's death. I'm so glad that bastard's dead in your fic. Whoopie!
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  • From ANON - Kireiko on October 15, 2005
    Very, very nice 2nd installment! Excellent read. Nicely written. I am totally enjoying how you've worked your story. The plot twists are enjoyable, completely unpredictable yet plausible. I love the slow build of tension. The pace of your story is nice and easy to follow. The sparring aspect was a bit hard to follow, but nicely descriptive nonetheless. Liking the parole terms aspect, adds slight menace to the overall feel. You have done a lovely job! Keep up the good work.

    Can't wait for the next chapter! If you need any help, with beta'ing or otherwise, just send me a note. ^______^

    ~Kir
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on October 15, 2005
    Nice chapter Neji, Naruto and Sasuke on a team with that copy ninja Kakashi hehehe oh the sparks are going to fly
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  • From ANON - lo on October 15, 2005
    Nice, I like where this story is going. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - WolfPilot06 on October 15, 2005
    This is very, very well-written. I greatly enjoy Sasuke's maturity in this fic, although it's obvious that he's still stuck in the past and hasn't matured quite fully yet. I'm intrigued to see what you decide to do with this story, and how things will evolve between Sasuke, Naruto, and the others (but mainly Sasuke and Naruto). I'm also fascinated to see what the deal with Naruto is (though I suspect his mask was a fox mask, which was why he was hedging around the topic so much) and why they want Kakashi to watch over him.

    I'm intrigued. =) I hope to see more from you soon.

    **Wolf**
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  • From ANON - lo on October 15, 2005
    That was a great first chapter. I like the sytle in which you write. I can't wait to see what you will do with this.
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