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Reviews for Hypothermia

By : charismaticirony
  • From edelta88 on September 17, 2007
    sheesh I just read the other reviews, to much pressure. Unless you feel like doing it don't do it, but I can see where the others are coming from this could definitly be a longer story, not very but meh.
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  • From edelta88 on September 17, 2007
    bravo, strangly this is the first story I've seen that uses the 'hypothermia cure' situation and yet it make so much sense. Either way you did a wonderful job.
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  • From ANON - Nameramthgin on December 31, 2006
    lol, i still cant figure out this site... I didnt want to hide my email. if you are looking for any help with beta reading just ask and i would be more then happy. My email is Nameramthgin@hotmail.com
    (who coulda guessed that one? lol. That offer applies to anyone writing naruto fics. My favorite coupling is of course naru and hina so i can never refuse a request to beta read for a story for then. cheers all.
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  • From ANON - Nameramthgin on December 31, 2006
    Amazingly good. You should seriously consider adding some chaps to this or maybe do a rewrite of it.(you could easily lengthen the first chapter into 5 or 6 and it would improve the story immensly). Congratulations, you can sit at the cool peoples table now. :)

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  • From ANON - diadem on December 29, 2006
    the best story i have read on this site yet
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  • From ANON - Daratrzanoff on December 19, 2006
    Great story, keep writing.
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  • From ANON - Shadow on September 26, 2006
    WOOT! AWSOME!!!

    anyway on another note.

    Very good. You pictured them very well, although naruto seemed "slightly" OOC but not to the point that it was bad. I think that you captured the moment perfectly and that I would LOVE to see more chapters. Keep up the great work!

    - Shadow

    Hinata/Naruto lover


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  • From ANON - Josh on September 09, 2006
    I hope you continue this story cuz I like it... Who do they fight and how did he get the wound in his chest... I like how them two become close and he keeps her warm but I hope to see you write this to its fullest potential... JTB8834@aol.com if you wanna talk
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  • From ANON - Malena on August 28, 2006
    Nice NaruHina! (My fav pairing in the series) Maybe is a bit rushed, specially the declaration of love but the sex scene is romantic and nice ^^
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  • From ANON - tkman1111 on July 25, 2006
    Great story, you should definatly write a second, and maybe even third chapter as soon as possible ^_^

    truly one of the best storys of NaruXHina out there.
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  • From ANON - Loren Kimsey on July 12, 2006
    Wow! This is your first one? MAN you are gifted!
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on June 28, 2006
    i think you described this pretty well with the word Tasteful. Its no smut fest but it was fun and interesting to read.
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  • From ANON - L.O.V.E.Y on January 20, 2006
    Awww......^.^This was sooo cute!!!You`re awesome!^__^I always thought that they would make a perfect couple!!!!^_^Awesome job!!! I loved this fic very much!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Reo 15x on January 17, 2006
    Nice story, please continue if you can, I really want to see naruto and Hinata's relationship unfold. You havn't updated in a while but still you need to update, I would really like it.
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  • From ANON - Daniel Lawson on December 25, 2005
    That was pretty good... I wouldn't mind seeing it contiued
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