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Reviews for The birthday suit

By : Trollmia
  • From ANON - Midnight Kyubbi on July 18, 2006
    You are the absolute goddess of writing Naruto fics. I love ALL of your storys,really!!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on July 10, 2006
    Love it ,imagry of Sasuke practicing only topped by Sasuke putting his fingers in himself.Gawd.
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  • From ANON - kyuubigirl on June 11, 2006
    Guh! Why, why do they keep getting better as I read on? Why when I think I've laughed and cried too much to i laugh and cry harder at each of your stories. I freaking just love how you do Sasuke's POV. He's a riot. I thought I was going to finish my own damn stories and ended up reading all of yours. LOVE YOU!
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  • From ANON - losthimagain on February 13, 2006
    I love it and thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! T-T (of joy XD)
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  • From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on January 14, 2006
    OMFG! That...was hilarious. I laughed, I swooned, and I awh-ed. T'was awesome^^ I love it. That whole Uchiha-crest-on-the-French-Maid-outfit was to die for! Simply genius. (nods to self)
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  • From ANON - Lyndsay-Marie on November 16, 2005
    That was amazing, I love the NaruSasu first time fics, they are always sooooo cute. I also wold like to point out that your english is very impressive and I honestly did't notice that it wasn't your first language, the only mistakes I saw were ones that are commonly made! You did an amazing job on this fic and I truly did love it!!

    ~Ja!

    Lyndsay
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  • From ANON - Sam on October 30, 2005
    So that's why?!? Dear god for this being a second (third? forth?) language to you you're pretty good. I did notice some things that seemed to not fit; wrong usages of the 'to be' words and some strange ways of saying things, but considering that you haven't been speaking English your entire life, I think it's excusable! I know that if I tried to write in Spanish, my second langage for about two years, I'd have Spaniards howling in pain for miles. So good job on that account and let me get to what I'm sure you actually wanted to hear: the story.

    When I first started reading this I was sure it was going to be, for lack of a better word, pointless smut--not that pointless smut is a bad thing...--but you were fast to prove me wrong. The story didn't go from point A to point Z immediatly like most 'pointless smut'. Instead it went from A to F(unny) to M(ental anguish) to Z(esty sex). And for a story that's main goal was sex that's pretty impressive! ......

    ...Look at me psychoanalysing a smut fic. I'm such a weirdo... I'll leave you to your normal reviewers now...
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  • From ANON - Lina19 on October 17, 2005
    Nicely done. Crossdressing not something I read a lot, but this was beautifully done. You gave me some idea’s for my own story, and I might just put some in.

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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on October 13, 2005
    Wow! Sasuke turned out to be the uke! That was so fackin' cool! Total nosebleed there! What is your FIRST language, if you don't mind me askin'?!

    This was so good though! WEGEHESAghWFESE -flails-
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  • From ANON - Arryelle on October 12, 2005
    I thought it was freaking awsome,extremely entertaining and of course your lemos are hot and steamy yums yum

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - Tatemshope on October 12, 2005
    Wow! This was really good. I had a few minutes and I though, what the heck, I'll check this out, since she's reviewed me before. I have to say that at first I was skeptical about where this would go, but I really liked it. You have a great way of making both boy's likable at once. Usually I only either like Sasuke or Naruto, but seldom both of them at the same time! Thanks for writing this! I enjoyed!
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  • From ANON - ladygizarme on October 12, 2005
    wheeeee !!!!! that was great!! from beginning to end, i loved it... and major twist w/ sasuke=uke!! heheheh sweet dude, and ya gotta love them moaning insult names at each other ^__~ good job!
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  • From ANON - smooches on October 11, 2005
    *Nosebleed*

    Are you serious? English isn't your first language??!?! Incredible job!!
    That was the best written fic ever! Kudos to you!!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 11, 2005
    Charming.Thank you.
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  • From ANON - lo on October 11, 2005
    For English not being your first language, this was great. Sure there were a fre grammatical errors, but they were not bad, mostly in present tense and past tense and some plural and singular noun mistake, but great. THere are many people who are english speaking Americans that can not hope to write as well as you. Great job!!!!! This is great!!!
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