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Reviews for Diplomatic Relations

By : Maldoror
  • From ANON - Berylia on November 28, 2005
    I've never waited with such anxiety for a new chapter. Well, you're the first author I know who writes on such a regular basis and all my week-end was spent seeing if you had updated yet...
    And was it worth the wait! This chapter was very dramatic and just kept playing with my heart. Your story has taken a big new step! Now romance is clearly coming, but your humourous writing never ceased and I loved it.
    There is a paragraph I dearly loved:
    "Lee had never thought his first kiss would occur in the midst of a small sandstorm and with a wonderful, strong, tortured young man who's more psychotic personality was probably gearing up to kill him. Being in love with Gaara was bound to make his life more interesting. And possibly rather short as well."
    It's funny and yet so cute... I love it.
    I also loved how Lee informed Gaara of his love, without really wanting it, letting himself be submerged by emotion. That was just so Lee.
    Well, see you next week.
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  • From on November 28, 2005
    Damn that was good. Highly emotional. >_> I wonder if you do comission fics lol. I can draw some Lee/Gaara stuff for ya in return lol.
    Hehe well I'm glad it's out in the open now and that There's a hop foward in their relatiobship sorta.
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  • From ANON - Goldbryn on November 28, 2005
    I really liked this chapter. It was by far the most exciting^_^ Kudos to you for writing a terrific chapter and a beautiful scene. All of your Crazy-Gaara's and Gaara amidst sand and dah desert are so well written. Love this story so much. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on November 28, 2005
    wow..love this chapter...!!!
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  • From ANON - shinigamigrl07 on November 27, 2005
    OMG that was the best chapter so far. The decription, the emotion, the KISS!!!!! Go Lee!!! I can't wait for more. Write some more!!! ^.^ Hooray GaaraxLee!!!!! I think I'm going to read that chapter again.

    Shinigamigrl07
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  • From ANON - kael_raye on November 27, 2005
    Holy crap!!! Chapter 12 was the greatest!!! I've gotten my friend into the Lee/Gaara pairing because of this fanfiction. The emotions/conflicts/history all combined in this chapter were very well written. This chapter was truly one of the best written fanfictions I have have ever read! ^_^ This rocks! I love it! I can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Squeak on November 27, 2005
    Still without a way to adequately describe how much I love this story (love it!) and how well you write the two of them. I've started looking forward to the new chapter every weekend. It's almost like rationing a book to make it last as long as possible. ;)
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  • From ANON - aurora on November 27, 2005
    "It was still the most exciting chapter to write yet, along with the one coming after it"..... just when I was content to paitiently wait for the next chapter you had to put that one in there *sniffles and points* I HATE YOU.....Wow that chapter had me at the edge of my seat all the emotions and stuff swirlin around along with all that sand I loved Gaara's reaction...having him just kiss Lee back and be all fluffy would have been too easy and so out of character *sigh* I'll prob reread the story every other day till you update (like I've been doin) *gives big hug* Bless ye child Bless ye!
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  • From WaterShadow on November 27, 2005
    That was a chapter worth waiting for. Wow. You could not have written that scene any better if you were Kishimoto-san himself. I am very humbled at your characterizations of Lee and Gaara. I don't know if anyone could have made Gaara's reaction any more authentic than you could.

    This made me ache for Gaara even more than I already do. I have a hard time imagining the mental roadblocks he must have in his mind pertaining to love, friendship and pain, and you laid them out for me. I'm in the library at my college right now, taking a break from writing a research essay, and as I read this chapter (which I had very eagerly anticipated), I almost broke out in tears. I, like Lee, wanted nothing more than to be near him and support him as he took down a few of those blocks.

    Incredible. You are incredible. Please, keep working on this fic with all of your power and artistry, because this is fast becoming something truly stunning.

    WS
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  • From ANON - YaoiOtaku on November 27, 2005
    Wow! This is getting very good! I like to see what happens between Lee and Gaara!
    Please keeping writing! ^___^
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  • From ANON - Bakura on November 27, 2005
    where's the update? ;;
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  • From WaterShadow on November 26, 2005
    Do you know how awesome your writing is? I don't think I've ever seen Lee portrayed quite this accurately. I know I've left a review in a similar vein, but I just reread your story and I can't get over how incredible it is to see what is orginally a two-dimensional character fleshed out so subtly and completely that it just takes my breath away.

    When I saw that you had never written anything for Lee before, I had to take a step back and declare an incredulous "what the hell?!" I mean, are you sure you've never written him before? Had you said nothing about your experience writing him, I could have believed that you had been writing him from the beginning of the manga, or for a really long time. Your reasons for him doing things are flawless.

    ...I should also mention, as an aside, that I find Lee oddly attractive, and the way you've written his clothing at times (or lack of) has me drooling. Gaara is something special too (finally caught myself up in the manga), and the images you evoke in my mind of the two of them together almost have me collapsing in nosebleeds. Gaara licking the water from Lee's chin...let us just say that after I read that, I needed a cold shower, and technically nothing happened.

    I really admire your style. I hope you continue to amaze me, and on this note, I will end this review; you're now on my recommended reading list.

    WS
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on November 26, 2005
    Oooh! Wow, suspence! Will Gaara be okay? What's that snake-bastard want Gaara for?! Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    Update Update Update Update UPDATE!! lol I really REALLY love this story so far and can't wait to see where it goes next :D Please update soon, and I will be sure to read... ;)
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  • From ANON - Alisha on November 23, 2005
    Reveiw of Chapter.....ummm 11:

    Ai...so you want help a? Well then eat reveiw! BWAHAHAHHAHA!
    ..
    *cough*
    Anywho yay Lee is happy...but even more yay..GAI---LEE----GAI---LEEE!! XD Ahh those two's interactions just leave me happy and full of smiles. :)
    Yep glad you updated...was begining to worry that aff went down for a few days there...but yay its back and you updated WOOT!
    I really enjoy your writing, hopefully you'll be able to get this one out before your inspiration bunnies run away (*cough*.. source of all things *cough*).
    I wish you the best of luck, I'll be waiting on the sideline for the next chapter...toodles!

    ~alisha
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