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Reviews for Naruto...

By : hColleen
  • From ANON - bhodi li on October 10, 2005
    wow! a steamy chapter...so is Sasuke or Naruto going to regret this??? hmmmm...Naruto makes such a cute uke..i like how the story has them fighting even when they are "doing" it. =)
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  • From ANON - touya4me on October 09, 2005
    That was absolutely glorious. That had such passion and fire! I absolutely loved it, and I can't wait 'til you post another chapter! And please don't forget to IM me about it, or I'll never realize it's been updated. Luv ya, as always. ^^
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  • From ANON - Opium on October 09, 2005
    Wow, this was a really hot lemon; very nice. I liked the hesitation of the characters and though it could be annoying {as we all wanted the lemon} the chapters were broken up at the right points. I'd like to see more of this, it's cool!
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  • From ANON - steel_lotus_blossom on October 09, 2005
    i love your story. it has very good characterization. i hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - mE on October 09, 2005
    kukukuku.. really good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Will Sasuke and Naruto stay together and will they tell everybody. or will the feel ashamed and deny it..uuh..I like your style. Especially the part where Naruto denyed the pain. Jut what he might do! :DD like very much
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  • From ANON - Luminaris on October 09, 2005
    Hey!

    I love your story. I think it's great you took your time with lemon, cause now it's paying off. Keep going! Please..
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on October 09, 2005
    Okay, with all the pleading und threating I will give in and give you some mental food :D

    First of all I do like your story so far - except the standard mistake to place Sasuke on top AND let Naruto beg. Don't know what's wrong with all of you fangirls :P Just kidding (although I prefer a equal relationship (even in the sexual department) or a slight dominant Naruto... But your hint for the next chapter let me hope :D)...

    A second thought: Why did you let them rush so fast towards full blown anal sex? Both of them were sexual unexperienced. The bits of heavy petting in your story are rather hot and I wouldn't mind it if they were just giving each other a good old handjob. But that is just an idea - I won't prescribe you your speed of developing :)


    So, please continue delivering us with this delicious story,
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - Hoshi on October 09, 2005
    If it'll make you update faster... --# I hate it when you ruin the good mood with a review request. I was happily thinking, and then you tell me to review. XP Evil Colleen.
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  • From ANON - Hoshi on October 09, 2005
    ... I hate you...

    But I love the story... ;_; Damn you Colleen.
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on October 09, 2005
    Very good story wild hot sex :D
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  • From ANON - Leasan on October 09, 2005
    Well, you sure know how to make people review... ^_-
    I love your story, the way you write, the mood, the intimacy..
    And the lemon is irresistibly HOT!! I love the way Naruto trusts Sasuke completely and how caring and tender is the latter. It makes them act without restraints or shame.. My, how convinient ^_^
    So, please update!! I want more of that tasty citrus stuff!
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  • From ANON - Kitsune on October 09, 2005
    HI! Back from being computer-inactive, and always happy to see you updating! Great (two) chapter! And yessss... i like your sence of spice in your story! WMahaha! *bit crazy i guess* An' don't you dare not updating, what about us who DO review, can't leave us hanging, can you?
    Anyway, this last chapter was sisssssling hooooot!!!! Damn! ^.~
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 07, 2005
    Ok this is a bit dif.I like.
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  • From ANON - Baka_Tsu on October 07, 2005
    SO. GOOD. Woah, man, the descriptions... I love it XD~~ YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Queen on October 06, 2005
    OH I love it!! its very well writen, i cant wait for more!!! Oh if you dont want this deleted you need a disclaimer thingy. Otherwise, yay!!!!
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