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Reviews for One kiss

By : mieran
  • From on April 23, 2010
    -twitch- 3 chapters. 3.. that’s all I get? Seriously? What the hell is wrong with you! You can’t just post chapters of perhaps one of the better stories on Aff and leave it hanging there. Seriously!
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  • From kati on July 29, 2007
    This is so cool i can't wait for you to update though the writing is a little stiff...perhaps you could make it more casual? Familiar?
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  • From berkie88 on February 06, 2007
    which pairing is this going to be? not that it really matters since I like Naruto with almost any boy from the series...
    anyway, I've never read the story before the edits but I like it now anyway. so please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Emrilou on January 09, 2007
    good start... interested for you to continue..
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  • From ANON - frizzy197 on November 09, 2006
    still waiting for that next update...
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth-San on June 26, 2006
    it was really good i had alot of emotions flowing through me when i was reading it.i was laughing at the part where Naruto said"i dont have to look at you're ugly face everyday any more"sounds like something i would say if i had to move.and the flash back was sad then got better when Itachi stopped and helped Naruto it was so sweet of him^_^i cant wait until naruto meets sasuke naruto would proably be like "wow he kinda looks like that guy who feed me back then"
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  • From ANON - berta-chan on June 21, 2006
    wow this is such a great story!! loving it so far! i really hope that sasuke will come into the next chapter though, so he can instently fall in love with naruchan! hehehe. was the guy in the flash back that gave naruto the sandwhich itachi? because that's the impression i got. anyway, great fic!! i hope u update soon!!
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  • From ANON - blisblopi on January 09, 2006
    Interesting.I like the flash back.I loooove Itachi.
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  • From ANON - blisblop on January 08, 2006
    I understood what he was wearing.Good start.I like.
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  • From ANON - masako on December 29, 2005
    this is a cute story and i hope you hurry back to continue...teehee.
    GOOD LUCK!!!! good start
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  • From ANON - blisblop on October 25, 2005
    Hurry back,good start!Good luck,remember, no matter what,this too shall pass.
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  • From ANON - looli on October 22, 2005
    I won't quit how am I going to when i'm already starting to fall in love with your story
    so please please update and fast XD
    thanx for reading have a good day:)
    lo.oli

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  • From ANON - looli on October 19, 2005
    where are you ?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on October 18, 2005
    This is an interesting story you've got going on here. I'd like to read more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Abhorson on October 15, 2005
    Hey. I like the story! XD True, true, you do need a beta. If your still looking for one, I would love to help!
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